Immortal Pearl

I haven't read it yet, but when I see the mortal stream label coming in, I just hope that this fairy bead will start to stop going against the will of heaven. That bottle among mortals is so outrageous that I can't stand it.

No wonder no one watched it, the plot is too cliche and the writing is not exciting enough. The same old story of buying treasures and then being hunted down! I'm a little tired of reading it, and it's too boring to write, so I don't know how to write it more concisely! The conversations between two people are always so long. People come to read the article about cultivating immortals, but who comes to come and chat with you? Are you really bored when everyone has nothing to do?

Han Li has practiced alchemy for several years and has a medical foundation. Where is the protagonist? What the hell is he writing about?

If you don't collect knowledge, you don't dare to practice, you don't dare to make money, you don't dare to buy elixirs, you don't dare to make elixirs, you don't dare to study and practice. Why do you need an acre of space that is 100 times the time? Since your sect has different professions, why don't you show off your alchemy talent? You are in a border city and have dedicated combatants fighting outside. You can rely on your alchemy talent to take over the work. There is no shortage of training resources, and there is no need to go out to form a team to fight monsters.

Can we not read about alchemy? It's too bad. Eight out of ten books are about alchemy. I don't want to read it at the moment.

The writing style is immature, but you still want to teach readers how to behave? I allow veteran authors or great masters to occasionally add some private information in their articles, because there is no book to read and I can bite my tongue and eat it. You don't need this at all. The benefits are not proportional. Simply pua won't do it.

The fourth level of Qi refining versus the late stage of Qi refining. Haha, if it weren't for the protagonist, this pig's foot wouldn't survive the fifth chapter.

As a fan of mortal books, let me say a few words! Regardless of whether the author writes well or poorly, you can read it or not. What I hate the most is that it keeps pushing Nana. You can write if you have the ability! No one requires you to watch it. All right! Finally, if it looks good, please support the author, collect it or reward it.

The writing is quite messy and cliche. There are no protagonists in many pages, and most of them are just passers-by.

Chapter 4 Let's take a look. Why can't the protagonist die like this? There is no rationality at all. There is such a big difference in realm, the other party is still two people, and the protagonist is still a newcomer, how can they die like this?

His master's writing has become disgusting.

I think the plot at the beginning of this book is quite satisfactory so far, and the author is making steady progress. But why write a master like that? Huh? Based on the previous article, I thought it was a cold character, and then when I saw the protagonist's experience, I couldn't help but think of similar unbearable past events of my own. After receiving the protagonist into the sect, he neglected his breakthrough in seclusion. After he came out, he was deeply impressed by the protagonist because of his empathy and wanted to know how the protagonist is doing. Also because he has been working alone in the world of cultivation for these years and has seen too much sloppiness. In addition to the regulations of the sect, he accepted the protagonist as his apprentice, hoping to give him some advice. A little bit of help... In the end, the good guy kicked me to Mars with one sb at a time... In short... This book is just like when you are eating roast duck with relish, you take one bite and eat that very sexy part, and after spitting it out, your mouth is full of disgusting taste and your appetite is greatly reduced.

After looking at a few pictures, a rookie who just started practicing Qi can kill someone in the later stages of Qi training. Why doesn't he just fly into the sky?

Fighting a battle is like writing a diary. Not very exciting. Ordinary

It makes me sick to see the beautiful woman who has formed a knot and her mouth becomes dirty!

It's well written, at least I don't see any bad points.

This novel was a waste (Goldfinger was good). I lost interest in reading it after Chapter 90.