The Heroine Peeked into My Diary, and My Character Collapsed

I was a little jealous before it was put on the shelves, but I could still read it without thinking and laughing. I can also see that the author is also reading the book reviews and trying his best to adjust it, but why did it get pulled right after it was put on the shelves? I originally wanted to order it all for only five yuan, but luckily I ordered Chapter 21 and said I would watch it first, but I couldn't stand it any longer. The two settings were completely broken. Lin Leyao couldn't finish the plot at the beginning, so he had to rewind in ten seconds, and then he had no energy points and couldn't go back. But 100 energy points plus the first time are a total of 101 opportunities! Forget it, you can add that the system was scaring the protagonist at the time, but it was already written that Li Xian had a diary. Will he eat up the setting in the next 30 chapters? ? There is also no plot with the surname Xia. Even if there are so many female protagonists in the plot of King of Soldiers, you can write a few less and take your time! The plot was pushed too quickly earlier. Didn't you write that you started to add settings to push the plot? It can be seen that the author also plays Genshin Impact. I play Ina Wife every day. Are you doing this too? Do you want to take notes?

This book should be called The Clown but it's me

The first 30 or so chapters are okay, but after 50 chapters I can't stand it anymore. I suggest the author restart it!

New plot? I have never seen anything like this before, and the writing is not very good. Judging from the current level, it is difficult to make a good one. I'm not teaching authors to write books, I'm just expressing my thoughts. Don't spray if you don't like it! ! !

I looked at the first few pictures and was speechless. The format and content are basically the same as those on Tomato. Is it produced by a studio or plagiarized? I just need to change the name.

There is another one next door that I think is more interesting, but the results are not as good as the diary. The protagonist is the same, but he takes care of it secretly every time. All the heroines fall in love with it, and then in the last reincarnation, all the heroines work together to kill the hero, causing the protagonist's plans to fail again and again. Because the other heroines have obtained previous memories.

This book is amazing😏

I took it. Many of the comments said it was poisonous, but the comments are really poisonous. A Long Aotian version of the novel world. A time traveler who wants to go home can return to the original world as long as he follows the plot. Everyone insists on letting him beat the protagonist of the novel. They also say that the female protagonists are all broken shoes. They know their destiny and want to change it. This book is quite interesting. Don't miss it. It's a different kind of book that slanders the protagonist.

I think

It is not recommended to continue reading after chapter 60. The protagonist of Long Aotian was replaced by Su Zhong to do those plots. Everyone knew about it, and then the protagonist was manipulated. Among them, there is a woman who was fucked by Ye who has not been reset and will probably be collected. Su became a shoe picker.

It is recommended to see the paid part. The free ones are the essence, and the paid ones are the feeds💩. In addition, the author is m?

Originally it was funny and pretty good at the beginning, but then after I ordered a lot, it just fell apart. What the hell, the writing in the back is so messed up. The setting and the character of the protagonist are just to disgust people? ? ? I originally wanted to keep ordering it as a daily comedy article, but now I have given up on it. I don't deserve it☻☻☻

I feel that this book is a pity. In fact, the idea is quite good, but the author obviously didn't want to write it seriously. First of all, the IQ of the whole book is off. Yes, the protagonist travels through the novel of Stallion Long Aotian, but Stallion Long Aotian was popular in 2000, and it is now 2022. If you still follow the original work, wouldn't it be Stallion Long Aotian with a different plot? Secondly, none of the characters in the book are likable. The supporting role is: the stallion waste special soldier Dragon King. The protagonist: is uneducated and fun-loving. There are a bunch of golden-fingered invincible rich second-generation people with no emotional intelligence and little IQ. The heroine and the supporting female characters: all fall in love with a pervert stallion without reading the diary. All fall in love with the playboy who writes the diary after reading the diary. 3. The supporting characters are useless, the heroine and the supporting character are also blind. No matter how many golden fingers you give to the male protagonist, how great can he be? What's the fun part about bullying the mentally retarded? If you really want to write a good story, you have to write an excellent male supporting character, with ten advantages and one disadvantage. In the end, after some events, the heroine and the supporting character feel that the protagonist is better. This is more enjoyable to write. My suggestion: From the beginning, the diary should be concise, and don't look like it was written deliberately for others to read. If I were the heroine, I would suspect that you used technical means to compile it for me to read. You write it out, and the heroine will naturally be curious when she sees something that is like a prophecy, and will verify and test it. Instead of writing what will happen tomorrow today and what will happen the day after tomorrow, she will meet her every day. Besides, there are too many female characters. I I haven't even read a few chapters. After reading one or two chapters, there is an additional woman who can see the diary. My scalp is numb after reading it. It feels like I haven't seen this kind of opening with different female characters every day in 10 years. It's good to write like this in a vase. Most of them become invisible later on.

If you plant a flag here, this book will be unfinished or the eunuch has already been written.

I vomited, I can't bear it, brother! This plot is too embarrassing, right?

I don't know why this genre is so popular. The protagonist of this genre just wants to go home, but to the family and friends of the original owner in this world, he is terrifyingly cold-blooded.

After reading this book, I thought of Mom, and your character is shattered🥵🥵

The title of the novel was changed to "The Strongest Cuckold System in the City" and the monthly ticket price will definitely increase. Believe me ✊✊✊✊

It's a bit illogical. Yu Ziyu has a great hatred for her family, and she suddenly likes the protagonist. The protagonist wants to buy her to have a child. She also blames the protagonist for blocking her way of making money. It can be ridiculous, but the basic logic needs to be explained, otherwise it won't be funny.

In countless previous reincarnations, weren't those heroines vomited by the original protagonist?

Ah! You, the protagonist, are just about to become immortals, and then you get frostbite in the snowy mountains or catch a cold after falling into the water? ? ? ? ? This level of cultivation is almost gone, right? However, although the first 100 chapters are poisonous, they are quite interesting.

Stupid article, rubbish. The great master of cultivating immortals has to die of coldness. I am speechless. Has the author seen it?