The Transfiguration Professor at Hogwarts Is Always up to Something

There is no cover, the introduction is too long, and the title is not attractive enough. I feel like I have to read the opening chapter carefully, otherwise many magical animals will be skipped, but I feel that the background is well developed; the monster hiding in the nostrils in the second chapter is quite strange, but it is barely a laugh point; in the third chapter, the class begins, the feeling of Professor McGonagall is hidden, and there are inexplicably more emoticons, the change in favorability about Hermione is too obvious, the protagonist's expressions and thoughts are reversed, and Hermione's psychological description is too abrupt. Overall, the first chapter is a bit complicated, but after reading three chapters, it feels like it just highlights the identity and background of the protagonist and his love for magical animals. The remaining two chapters are actually okay: the protagonist comes to Hogwarts to teach as a reformer, which is a place to look forward to, and the subsequent warm life with magical animals is also a highlight, as well as Hermione's emotional line (this point and the emoticons will really dissuade people from being too abrupt) Just find a free cover. The title of the book is a bit unremarkable but still usable. I suggest you spend some time writing the introduction, as it is too long and no one will read it. Looking at the current introduction, what stands out is the warm life with animals and Harry's adventure story, which are different from the title of the book. Writing a good introduction is much more useful than running book reviews or organizing events.

Abstract and difficult to criticize. This way of writing characters has an audience, but the readers who like it are not me.

The heroine Hermione is becoming more and more unpopular, mainly because some novels are so disgusting. Teachers in their thirties and forties have perverted feelings towards 11-year-old girls, making them drool. Listen, is it disgusting? Since most of the protagonists have a mental age of around thirty or above, can't you wait until Hermione is 16 or in her senior year to talk about it? Do you have to be in first or second grade? This novel is well written, the protagonist is very young, the writing is beautiful, and it has a great atmosphere. But, why did Hermione look like a slut when she was 11 years old before she was 15? Is she in need of love? Never seen a man? Even shaking hands makes you blush? The same goes for the psychological description of the protagonist. 11-Year-old Hermione is just cute. Can she not be so perverted? What are you feeling guilty about? Did they kiss or have sex? Don't write like a licking dog. The character positioning of the novel has changed. If you wrote that the protagonist is a pervert and likes lolita from the beginning, it would be more reasonable for you to write like this. But it turns out that you wrote that he is caring and naturally favored, but in the end, he turns into a pervert when you turn your eyes, which makes you furious. It's not very obvious in the novel, but that's what he meant. No matter how beautiful the writing is, it can't change the perverted nature of this behavior. Writing this way was quite popular in the beginning, everyone loved Hermione's looks, but now it's no longer possible, it's too disgusting to write. One last time, I would like to emphasize that this novel is really well written, with only this very small shortcoming.

For the heroine Hermione, add a bookshelf first. Those who are Hermione, don't come to BB to find a sense of presence. The character list is clearly written. I don't want to see her slip away.

I'm tired of watching Hermione's Harry fanfic, so there's no need to

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After reading about 60 chapters, I feel that the writing alone is on par among a lot of HP fans, but it doesn't seem to have become popular. Personally, I think it may be due to these reasons. 1. At the beginning, the protagonist collects the wool of magical creatures and a short clip of getting along with magical creatures. To be honest, it is quite attractive, but it suddenly cuts off and quickly transitions to school life to start the main plot. Personally, I think it would be more attractive if the growth process of collecting magical creatures is told. This is the difference between most other HP fans, but unfortunately there is no if. 2. Directly teach the 16-year-old Transfiguration class. To be honest, the logic does not make sense. Seeing this, there may be a large wave of HP fans who will abandon the article directly. I was almost there, but I resisted. Of course, if there had been some foreshadowing in the previous article, the results might have been very different. The reason is very simple. The protagonist is not well-known in the magical world at this time. Although he is Scamander, he is not Newt. Turning around to look at the other professors, which one is not an outstanding graduate of Hogwarts? They are all famous in the magic world. Which of the Defense Against the Dark Arts professors hired does not have a certain reputation or status in the magic world? Even the con man Lockhart. Quirrell was chosen for a reason, and he wasn't bad either. 3. The personal strength and combat power system is a bit of a mystery. Gathering wool makes us readers confused. Suddenly, after gathering a lot of wool, the realm suddenly reaches t0 in the magic world, but the combat power is not reached. We cannot understand this growth, because the protagonist feels so refreshing every time he gathers wool. It is difficult to understand. In the end, it gives people the feeling that the protagonist is strong but not strong, but it seems that there are not many people who can beat the protagonist. 4. I don't know whether it was intentional or unintentional or I didn't read that. Some foreshadowings were laid, and when the foreshadowing was revealed, I thought it was a small climax, but in fact it was only a few strokes, which made people unable to get up and down, and the sense of anticipation was raised. The result is that this is it? Feeling. Generally speaking, there are not many poisonous points. The author has his own ideas. There are certain differences and special features among similar books, but there are not many because the story is not deep. It can be used as food for the book shortage at present. The most important thing is that the book has been put on the bookshelf and I will read it slowly. I hope the author will not cut it.

I signed the contract today. If you want to invest in prostitution points, hurry up.

Can you please stop using emojis? To be honest, do you think it's funny?

I just like watching fanfics with the heroine Hermione

This book doesn't even have a cover, but it successfully stands out among all the bells and whistles in the daily guide

It feels like there are not many people because of the cover and the name. If I hadn't seen the heroine Hermione, I would have missed it.

I saw Tom Meow rolling in consciously

The writing is great, it can be said to be the most surprising novel I have read recently 🤭 The author's writing style is very gentle, and he wrote his own story without deviating from the original work. The protagonist's image is very three-dimensional, and his character strength is not the kind of Long Aotian that is common in HP novels. The most important thing is that he does not have the feeling of being aloof and out of place like a time traveler. In short, up to the plot of "Professor Snape looking for a Muggle scholar" that I just finished watching, the whole story is very gentle. (I feel like the title of the book is a bit of a drag. I just read it casually to kill time before reading it. Wouldn't it be better to have Scamander and Fantastic Beasts in the title of the book? P. S. Just a small suggestion, I'm sorry if it offended me!)

I still couldn't hold it back and ordered it all. The author insisted on writing it.

The reading experience is very poor, there are many typos, many sentences are not smooth, and there are many wrong sentences. It seems that I am not very skilled, but the plot is not bad and very innovative. Keep up the hard work.

Introduction is really important. The first thing others see is your introduction. Whether readers are willing to click in to read is closely related to the introduction. A good introduction makes readers feel interested, which is actually half the battle. If readers click in, at least you know where your problems are, even if your writing is not good. Your introduction is smelly and long, so you should change it.

Among a group of guides, you are the only one without a cover. You attracted my attention and made me happy.

It's really well written, with Druid-like tenderness. I'll give you a monthly pass and recommendation.

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Congratulations🙂

Congratulations to Claw, there is no rush for the update 🙂

Good guy, it's only Chapter 41 and you're on Daily Poison 😰

Happy birthday Ani (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

I hope there will be more updates this year 🙂

I'll give you a monthly pass 🙂

Hey, I'm the first one to finish chasing 🙂 today.

The author needs to stand up,

Uh-huh, keep up the good work 🙂

Come on, just hold on to two thousand words 🙂