Longevity Begins with Study

This book is not very good at the beginning, but it gets better as it goes on. The advantages are: 1. The overall concept is very good, and the overall plot has ups and downs. It is good that the author does not set the pace for the readers, but writes according to his own ideas. Many novels are written in order to cater to the readers in the later stage and they are incomprehensible, just like go away without abandoning the readers; 2. The overall idea is relatively rigorous, there is no Virgin, but the little widow Zhang Caiyun is really good, why not include it? 3. The description of the fight is good, and you won't have to shout embarrassingly before using a big move; The disadvantages are: 1. The first part is very slow and easy to persuade to quit; 2 The second part feels that the world begins to revolve around the protagonist. The author looks at the protagonist in Mortal Cultivation and the latter is also running around. If it is too smooth, there will be nothing to watch. I hope the author will write better and better.

You all said it's not good, but I've caught up with the latest one. I don't know if it's good or not. There's no problem with the writing, and it won't be a drama. I really like the main plot of cultivating immortals. The ones about practicing weapons really have the feeling of the wizarding world. I really like it. The wizarding writing is great and rigorous and scientific.

This crappy book cost me 36% of my money. I read it in one sitting... I don't know how to put it... It's not as good as I thought it would be, but it's not that bad... But I finished reading it...

How can I put it, it's too depressing, the protagonist will always get into all kinds of big troubles, either being plotted or on the way to being plotted. When practicing Qi, he will be targeted by Ji Zhu immediately. As soon as he builds Qi, there will be Jin Dan who wants to fuck him. After finally reaching Jin Dan, a bunch of Nascent Souls are trying to get him. Wherever he goes, there will be beacon smoke everywhere, and the sky will collapse, like an ant that is inexplicably doused by boiling water falling from the sky. If the latter is not enough, the entire Heavenly Beast is also invincible and completely invincible. Just a breath of breath will trap the protagonist for decades, using the whole world to fight, and then finally reaches the Nascent Soul. Oh, this piece of shit starts to invade the entire world of cultivation again, quietly replacing most of the top leaders, and begins Invasion of the world rules, you said you arranged a plot, it is so outrageous, who can watch it? It is like you have just left the novice village, every soldier around you is the final boss, and the final boss is actually God, you are just an ant in the virtual world, how comfortable is this? This book is not as exciting as a refreshing novel, nor is it as profound as a literary work. The protagonist is not a positive character. He is indecisive and hesitant, especially the part where he changes his name to Shenglinggen. He spends a lot of resources, refines a pill to nourish the fetus, arranges for pregnant women, kills people, protects the Tao, teaches the Dharma, and makes a lot of mistakes. In the end, he says that he is greedy and cannot control it, which makes him laugh. It's like the protagonist becomes a disabled person, hundreds of chapters! Hundreds of chapters have not yet been completed! Who the hell can stand it? How about practicing Cun Zhi here? Moreover, everything is written in such detail. It is all useless plot. How many chapters have been wasted? Just reading one of your books cost almost 7,000 points, which is more than 70 yuan! If you keep writing like this, it will be like the second generation of Fishman, useless!

The protagonist is a time traveler and is not a native, so he keeps bringing Xu Yuan with him. This person is completely useless and is of no use to the protagonist. He is just a blood-sucking insect. Xu Yuan forgets it and insists on taking his wife and children to suck the blood of the protagonist. The protagonist does not know that the muscle is wrong and keeps raising various resources to throw at Xu Yuan's family as if they don't have money. There are still a group of people talking about brotherhood! Tell me, whose brotherhood has one side sucking the other side's blood without any limit like this?

Speaking of Xu Yuan, who was brought from the mortal world, he accepted the favor of the protagonist from being a mortal to a martial arts master, and then he was brought to the fairy world. This was basically the contribution of the protagonist. Just being a friend was enough. Then he got married and brought up a family. The protagonist also had various secrets and top magic weapons. Then he was disobedient and went to the front line. He was either captured and used to blackmail the protagonist, or he died and then asked for the master. The revenge of the protagonist is very disgusting. If the author spent some ink on the brotherly relationship between the protagonist and Xu Yuan, it would be acceptable in the later writing, but it is completely impossible to feel how much the protagonist has feelings for him and how important he is. Wasn't he just a tool at the beginning? There was help in the mortal world. There is also a helper in the fairy world. The mortal world is okay. After a few chapters, he disappeared, and later he showed up with his own child.

This author is poisonous. When the golden elixir reaches the elixir stage, the protagonist is a top-grade golden elixir. If the protagonist does not improve his spiritual root, he cannot become a Yuanying? The protagonist's cultivation level is deliberately stuck in the late stage of the golden elixir. In order to improve the spiritual root, the protagonist's plug-in also has a trick 😤

I don't understand. Is Xu Yuan the protagonist's father or son? He takes such good care of him.

After reading Chapter 25, I would like to point out the shortcomings - it's not that exciting, and it doesn't matter what the priority is. Don't look down on cool writing. To put it bluntly, The Count of Monte Cristo is also a cool writing. The four major classics, except Dream of Red Mansions, are actually all cool writing. The cool points are generally growth, acquisition, transcendence, and revenge. Taking out those popular passages in classic novels, they are basically of the above types. Shuangwen itself is not low, what is low is web writing that gives up logic for the sake of fun. This book is enough for the 25 chapters I have read, but it is really not exciting at all, and it doesn't even have the ability to suppress the desire to advance. The protagonist has become a member of the corrupt civil service system of an agricultural civilization, and has no problem surviving; he has a plug-in to speed up learning, and there is no development direction for the time being; he has no specific goals, and there are no obvious external enemies or conspiracies surrounding the protagonist. This is the main situation of the protagonist. There is no love or hatred, and neither internal nor external driving force is sufficient. Not only is there no sense of pleasure in reading, but there is no sense of expectation. Especially in the paragraph before Chapter 25, the protagonist begins to investigate the history of corvee labor and mining in the county where he is located, and the author analyzes the local economic system that is close to slavery at length. This kind of content will basically only appear under the branches of history, political struggle, and investigation. The motivation that drives the protagonist to investigate is usually the political opponent. Before that, the author must have designed a sufficiently ambitious goal or an annoying villain to serve as the protagonist's motivation. I really don't understand why this book talks about such boring content for so long without even setting up the main character's driving force clearly? Of course, it may be that my threshold is too high. The combination of time travel + indirect plug-in + agricultural civilization itself is no longer attractive to me. But I still have to say - Wen seems to be happy to see the mountain. You must have an interesting character or plot, otherwise what is the difference between it and a running account?

This kind of book is not for beginners Only old book lovers can appreciate the three-dimensional feeling