Descendants of Sinners of Teyvat

I usually read novels with a microscope, and I would silently point out every typo after seeing it. Here, I found that this view seems to be inappropriate Authors can regularly read their articles and correct typos. The most taboo in new books is that the first chapters are very poisonous, or there are many typos, so the image score of a work will be reduced a lot.

As for the novel, I think we should pay attention to the growth of the protagonist. Mainly the change of mentality and view of the world. As a Chinese, he has his own set of values, but he doesn't understand Teyvat. As a member of the Lawrence family, the feedback he gets from others in Mondstadt is basically biased. And his system is related to travel. His knowledge will grow with the travel, and his heart will gradually become stronger, and he can look at the people and things in front of him more peacefully, instead of protecting his heart by closing his emotions.

It's well written, quite good. Although I don't know what the last book you mentioned is, it doesn't stop me from thinking that your book is very good. At least it meets my taste. I hope to know about your previous works.

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Seeing that Yula was given a set of holy relics, I was immediately speechless. Are the holy relics useless in the plot? The game settings must be added to the plot 🤔. It really made me vomit.

Even the "sinful" Lawrence once had a noble will and full of glory, and supported a safe sky for the people in the most difficult times.

Lan Yu looked good in the previous chapters, but things started to change after he returned to Mondstadt. First of all, return to Mondstadt and contact the protagonist. There is no problem in getting on with the protagonist, but what kind of character is the protagonist? Personality: He has political opinions and does not like the freedom of Mondstadt, because the freedom of Mondstadt is disliked by the protagonist who has traveled through time (a bit liberal American) Feeling), and then he is still a person who wants to protect the people he wants to protect (as can be seen from the Yula legend mission); because he was hated by the Mondstadt people, he went to Liyue, which is more like the place before time travel. Lan Yu developed a calm character and can seek advantages and avoid disadvantages. Secondly, the protagonist agreed to join the Knights on his birthday. This is the most poisonous part to me and the part that makes me feel that the protagonist has changed the most. In Liyue, the protagonist Lan Yu told Ke Qing that it didn't look like a leader who was still looking for a cat, which meant that Lan Yu hated Qin's work, which was not like a leader. Joining an organization will have a relationship with this organization, and why does the protagonist want to join the Knights? Does Lan Yu know how to seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, just for a little fame? No. After fighting a battle with Abyss (Prince Kong), and fighting the Beastland Hound with Saving Lei Ze, I can see that the protagonist wants to improve his own strength. Therefore, it is a poisonous point for the protagonist Lan Yu to join the Knights. End: It was reasonable to go there, but it became poisonous after returning to Mondstadt, and then joining the Knights on the protagonist's birthday was a big poisonous point. My own subjective opinion: The characters are very good, but the characters collapse as the plot progresses. I was so poisoned that I stopped watching it.

Are you that stupid? I feel like I was written as an emotional idiot who would rather trust someone he just met than a friend without considering the consequences. It's really...

The plot is a bit inexplicable. There are always more opposite things. As a mission, it is very good. As a novel, it is a bit embarrassing.

Lan Yu Lawrence...🧐Can't stand it😱I was embarrassed when I saw the name

I've read more than 120 chapters The protagonist doesn't have a specific image yet I found Zhang Youla's sex change picture in Baidu Tieba I think I look good

Is Ying still the heroine? It's best not to change them. Two or three are fine, but more will not look good.

Double opening? In all likelihood, I won't dare read it.

After many rejections and finally agreeing... You are slapping yourself in the face. Does it hurt?

What I am more interested in is that the protagonist does not get the attention of the people in Mondstadt, so what is the reason why he fights for Mondstadt? As of now, the protagonist is still a sinner who is not understood by everyone in Mondstadt, so why should such a bitter and resentful character fight for Mondstadt? If he died, the people in Mondstadt would just applaud.

There is a story. When my uncle said that we will meet again in the plot, how many people wanted to beat the Riddler? Raise your paw.

There's not much in front of it, but the main character joining the Knights is so disgusting that I can't stand it anymore.

It's fine if the protagonist ends up in Liyue. The heroine can choose Keqing or Hutao.