Zhenling Gate Valve

The heroine Xiaomei was so embarrassed. I accept that the emotional writing is a bit stiff, after all, the emotional drama is not the main plot, it's pretty much the same. But what you wrote made me feel like I was holding you in my arms like crazy and feeling distressed. My scalp went numb after reading it. Author, are you from a female channel? Is this Qiong Yao scene appropriate in a fairy tale?

The previous plot of buying carp was obviously handled very well at the beginning, but it was really poisonous to have to make an old-fashioned twist at the last moment... Die from poison, goodbye. I don't want to watch the follow-up plot. Anyway, it's just a mindless plot of a guy wearing a suit getting slapped in the face and being killed in reverse.

I don't know if anyone remembers The Nine Transformations of the True Spirit, written by Sui Qiu

The most outrageous thing about this book is that a rookie who came from a humble background has been cultivating by relying on the exercises he deduced, and then cultivated to the true spirit. . You wouldn't even dare to write a cool article like this. .

Plant one grain of millet in spring and harvest ten thousand grains in autumn

I am complaining that an original foundation-building family has fallen into decline. Even the most important exercises are all fragments. The logic is really unreasonable. If you want to copy the exercises as many times as you like, just put them in a storage bag and store them in separate places. Even a mere mortal can hold several copies.

Not bad, clear ideas, clear structure, good book

Eunuch has just been released, it's amazing👍🏻

The writing is very detailed, and the power system is half a step more based on the Nine-Rank Immortal Road. The fish tank can probably turn an arowana into a dragon. The soul-drawing technique should consume lifespan or have other flaws, otherwise it will be a big bug.

Come on

It's boring to see this level of magic transformation. Let's run away.

The name makes you uncomfortable. Others call you Xu Taiyi, but you call yourself Xu Yi. If you unify, you will die, right?

Is this a eunuch? ? The author should at least come out and say something! Silent? ?

It's from poison

I looked at the time and was a little afraid to look at it. . . . The settings look really good

You changed the good mortal system into this way

It's pretty good. The first chapters are a bit stumbling, and I even feel like I'm not writing enough. But what's better is that the content is novel and novel, and there are some fascinating features that make people linger and forget to leave. The flaws are not concealed. Later on, it gets better and better, and a grand and novel world view slowly unfolds, making it even more outstanding among many novels. Well updated, another masterpiece is on the rise.

The writing is rubbish, the conflict is forcibly created at the beginning, and all the supporting characters look like idiots.