Douluo: I Pretend to Be a Sister at Tianshui College

The reason for pretending to be your own sister to participate in the competition is far-fetched enough. What can you get in the end by helping Tang San? During the competition, I encountered a character who was not from the original work. I was scared to the core of my being. The key point was that the opponent was a forty-nine level soul sect. He still wanted to cry. Are you a bitch? You are still a bitch. I asked you to act, but not to transcend. Those who could watch it were all very capable of handling the poison. Anyway, I was already poisoned.

I felt poisonous when I first gave the jelly grass to me. It was just from the school, my relatives, tribesmen and so on. Don't waste the jelly grass for a useless soul master competition. A piece of jelly grass can at least cultivate a titled Douluo. The protagonist of the original novel used this to strengthen a wave of people who have the qualifications to become gods.

Neither ice nor fire nor blazing fire can defeat it.

Why add a soul ring to the second martial soul? A ten thousand year soul ring is enough. Another protagonist who wastes his talent. If he has talent, he can waste it casually. If he is above level 90, he can add a soul ring to the second martial soul. If he absorbs a soul ring that is more than 100,000 years old, he can add one level. Nine hundred thousand or more soul rings can go directly to level 99. At level 94, he can absorb the 400,000-year-old Ice Emperor, and at level 97, he can absorb the Snow Emperor. This is not a sacrifice. If this continues, he will be even worse than Tang San. . . .

It always disgusts the servants. Dai Mubai sticks to his butt and Salas touches his hands again. It's not a pleasure to be disgusted

It's okay, at least better than what I wrote. Come on, author!

The subject matter is okay and novel, but the author's writing style is limited and he can't control it, so it looks quite awkward This book feels like the author suddenly had an inspiration in his mind and let himself go, so many places look awkward. 1. The starting time is relatively late The timeline at the beginning can only be said to be too late. It did not interfere with the development of the protagonist group in the early stage. They only grabbed the grass jelly and entered the academy competition after more than 50 chapters. In the end, it will end in more than 100 chapters, and the protagonist has no system plug-ins and cannot travel through the world. 2. Faction issues After reading it, I felt that at most I had a cooperation with Qian Renxue, and they were building their own forces. But it was too difficult to build a self-made force without system plug-ins. Except for the upper three sects, there were only a few wild family academy titled Douluo. There were few people and there were no powerful plug-ins. Tang Ritian had no choice but to bully the small ones. Tang Ritian thought too well. In the early days, the attitude towards Shrek was a bit ambiguous. Usually, he would either lick him to death or torture him to death. The compromise was to torture Tang San and Dai Mubai. There was no way, the cat was quite popular, so Dai Mubai was tortured. Only after watching half of it did I understand where the camp was. Some of them should have been persuaded to retreat in the early stage by those who helped Tang San absorb the ten thousand year spirit ring. The most important thing is that there is no introduction in the introduction. It feels like the author thought about the outline while writing. 3. The protagonist seems a bit benevolent The camp is hostile to Tang San. In the early stage, there is actually no trouble for the protagonist group, such as dividing their internal unity, such as the Rose Hotel, which always only has one room, saving a little kitten halfway and letting her see that Qing Dai Mubai wants to fly together. Another example is telling Oscar that the Qibao Glazed Sect's direct mate selection criteria can only be attacked by force, but Flandre, Yu Xiaogang and the others clearly knew that and deliberately did not tell him. In the early stage, we did not interfere and added the help of Tang's 30,000-year-old soul ring, so we robbed the fairy grass. There is no system plug-in. This way, it is easy to overturn. It looks very frustrating. It's like the villain boss allows the protagonist to grow and is successfully defeated in the end. There are no system plug-ins, and his attitude was ambiguous in the early stage. In the later stage, he suddenly offended him so hard. He had no choice but to bully others later. He had no intention of digging holes for Tang San and driving a wedge between the protagonists in order to become a god. This is really the first time I have seen the subject matter. A man dressed as a woman to compete for his sister, so I watched it as a curiosity, but I was not happy about it. The follow-up is probably to be written until the end of the Wuhun Palace competition. If you want to add a killing city to the eunuch, there will be no plot foreshadowing. Moreover, the relationship between Tang San's protagonists and the team is pretty good. The protagonists have no quarrels and poaching, and there is no new material, so they can only follow the old path of the Three Young Masters. The subject matter is really good, but I feel that the author just lets himself go and writes when inspiration comes, and the follow-up is weak. In fact, when I have written more than 50 chapters with emotion, there is no need to write more later. Because you neither caused trouble for the protagonist group (at most you grabbed some fairy grass), nor did you set up the Spirit Hall early. I only met Qian Renxue in the game, which was a bit late, and she was too scheming, making it difficult for the protagonist to like her. There is no way to foreshadow the plot in the follow-up, so we can only follow the original work. It was too late to meet Qian Renxue, and my favorability level just started to increase In the early stage, the attitude was ambiguous, and in the later stage, he became an enemy of the protagonist group He also had a grudge with Salas, a loser My own family status The power is not strong and the backing is very weak. The other protagonists usually fall in love with Bibi Dong or gain Qian Renxue's favor early The self-built forces have no system plug-ins So it looks awkward and uncomfortable, which is a pity for this subject.

There is no need to have fairy grass for Tang San, just use an herb that increases physical fitness.

Are there no books at the starting point? Push everything

Why did you create another routine of a water fish suddenly appearing and two time travellers?

Tianshui Academy should have substitutes, and Shrek knows how to find a few substitutes. The reason why the protagonist joins Tianshui Academy is really embarrassing!

I think this book is okay, not that toxic.

I just want to say one thing, author, have you really taken a good look at the settings in "Douluo Dalu" about how many levels of twin martial souls can be added to the second martial soul before adding a soul ring? Also, the decibel jelly grass is poisonous to death.

Then Tang San couldn't reach 40 without the fairy grass.

Level up by absorbing three soul rings? Or am I not understanding?

Even though he is already a eunuch, he still shows the finished text

How fast the progress is! It's not finished until less than a hundred chapters!

Many girls? Is there Bibi Dong Qianqiexue?

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