Douluo: I Am a Blacksmith

How to evaluate it? It's just written like shit!

I'm convinced. Forget it that the second soul ring is two thousand years old. Just think that the protagonist is gifted. Why does the protagonist's soul power only increase by one level after absorbing two thousand years of soul rings? ! That's outrageous!

In five years, he rose from level 21 to level 30? There's no need to suppress the level so much, right?

Ah, there is no modern industrial system, no molds, no precision instruments, no machine tools or any other monster, how can one person produce a pistol! . . . . . . . No matter how big a boss you are, it's impossible for just one person to know the entire process! Where do you have time to study and play?

Erect a monument. See Chapter 6. Your soul master's level is too low, your titled Douluo can't dodge bullets, and it's not even as good as a martial arts novel.

The plot can be watched without thinking. The plot of getting to know Ning Rongrong is completely mindless, and Ning Rongrong is isolated and bullied by the sect members.

I just read it before chapter 40 and let me know what I think. First: Let's talk about the protagonist's martial soul first. I'm surprised that the shadow martial soul is naturally dark attribute (unless it is awakened with attributes like the protagonist's father's ice attribute, Huo Wu's fire attribute, and the ghost died once, so the shadow becomes a ghost/death attribute, which will not change under normal circumstances). The protagonist's parents both have ice attributes. When awakened, the shadow martial soul is either ice attribute or the original dark attribute. The protagonist is not specifically attached with a spiritual attribute soul ring and a woolen mental power. Second: 6-year-old weight-bearing exercise, I really can't understand it. Even if the protagonist has natural supernatural power + herbs and weighs 200 pounds, will the protagonist's joints be lost? Although Tang San didn't have enough to eat as a child, he had the Taoist technique of Xuantian Gong to nourish his body. Moreover, Tang San only used the random cloak hammering method to forge iron every day after receiving the first soul ring. What does the protagonist have? You don't think that all medicinal materials and supplements can be absorbed, right? No matter how much the protagonist takes, it will be useless. Besides, the medicine is only three parts poisonous. I am very curious as to how the protagonist's family agrees with the protagonist seeking death like this. Third: The soul ring is simply outrageous. It is yellow, purple and black. I have never seen such a death-seeking person. I can still understand the ghost tiger whose first soul ring is more than 600 years old. The attributes are all in line. The age can also be explained by the protagonist's snacking on supplements + exercise since he was a child. The second soul ring is two thousand years old and I am speechless. Wang Dong in Dou Er has been eating whale glue since he vomited it, and then he has the second thousand-year ring. Does the protagonist have Wang Dong's qualifications? What is absorbed is the mutated Kirin-armored beast. Besides, the three ten thousand year rings, don't you think that the ten thousand year soul ring only has one mental shock? Can't you see it for so many years? How can your body bear it? No condition can match Tang San, and his ability to absorb it all depends on the author's pen (when Tang San absorbed the ten thousand year soul ring, in terms of mental strength: the third level of the Purple Demon Eye, he had absorbed the autumn dew of Wangchuan River, and was a human in two lives. In his previous life, the Purple Demon Eye was also in the second level of microscopic vision, and his mental strength is not stronger than the protagonist? In terms of physical fitness: a piece of soul bone attached to the sternum, two fairy grasses, started blacksmithing at the age of 6, and only two fairy grasses in terms of physical fitness. The improvement brought by grass is inferior to the protagonist. In terms of soul power: Tang San has the Mystical Heaven Skill, endless life, and endurance far beyond the protagonist. What does the protagonist have? Tang San absorbed ten thousand years of the four rings, and his soul power is at least 5 times that of the protagonist.) Tang San has such a huge advantage. When absorbing the four rings of ten thousand years, with the help of the two eyes of ice and fire, he still survived a narrow escape. In the end, he relied on his will to survive. What advantage does the protagonist have over Tang San? They are all fighting souls in the soul fighting arena. How does the protagonist survive with his bizarre combination of soul rings? Fourth, Hu Liena, has the protagonist never seen a woman? So compassionate and caring? Let's not talk about the natural conflict between the protagonist's identity and Wuhun Palace. Let's just say that Hu Liena wants to kill the protagonist. At this time, she tells Hu Liena everything about her soul ring. Where is her brain? After killing the supervisor, Hu Liena released the guards because of a few words. Shouldn't we eradicate the problem at this time? Even if Hu Liena's golden generation were killed together, and they were disguised as revenge for the supervisor's evil deeds, no one would doubt the protagonist. They would only wonder if a high-level Soul Saint or Contra was responsible.

The Douluo system doesn't seem to work, but you wrote the title Douluo so weakly. Although you emphasized that Tang Hao can be killed with mental arithmetic and no intention, but would a person with the Killing God Realm not have dangerous intuition? Secondly, it feels like the protagonist can fight Tang Hao a few times, which is outrageous. Tang Hao's soul pressure can make him unable to move. Therefore, the author overestimates the industry and the protagonist's combat effectiveness and belittles Douluo's strength.

Without any special introduction, the third ring is ten thousand years old, which is a bit unrealistic! There is also weight-bearing training, which is 200 kilograms. I have such a strong physical fitness? Although children in Douluo Continent develop early and can be equivalent to adults on earth at the age of 12, the original work also started with weight-bearing training from a few kilograms to more than 20 kilograms. When you come out, you are 200 kilograms. I don't know what to say.

What this kind of author loves to do most is to write about various opportunities and nbs at the same time, but he is afraid that the writing will collapse, and then he will downgrade it in various ways. After all, it has nothing to do with the completeness of the outline and the author's IQ, and it has nothing to do with whether you downgrade or not.

Oops, the Destroyed Clan has another reason to kill Flanders and Tang Hao. The protagonist must be possessed by a demon. If others disobey you, kill them. There is no reason to go against people who have no grudges or grudges. Deliberately snatching Tang San Xiaowu's room. If they don't do it, they'll be killed. Tang Hao came to the door and said that he would not kill him as long as he was not from Wuhun Palace. But the protagonist is determined to kill Tang Hao. Refuse to reconcile. I couldn't stand it, so I stopped watching. The dark protagonist needs a reason to kill his entire family. Is killing someone a source of happiness for your protagonist?

Since you have turned pig's feet into a genius, don't deliberately try to lower your level. This would make people sick.

This book is extremely toxic and has unclear logic. The soul ring is too awesome and the level is too lame. Firearms are powerful, but dark energy is not as powerful as dogs. The martial soul is too invincible and the soul skills are too weird. You have to be an almighty person and be a strong general at the same time. There are special skills in karma, and you can bite off more than you can chew. Lean does not strive for perfection and does not listen to opinions.

What is this protagonist going to do? You hammer your head here and there. In your previous life, you were a scientific research talent, and you were also in the military industry. Do you want to use these technologies to kill gods, or change the world and dominate the world and the divine world? You should express it. You can use various firearms to play with them by yourself? Not allocating it to family members? , Do you think these are not worthy?

The fox has already done this to you, why don't you still lick it hard? Abandoned😅

You wrote the section about the Golden Generation's experience in Wuhun Palace. It's really poisonous. You're so fickle about falling in love.

It's so poisonous, damn it's disgusting

Gatling didn't have sophisticated instruments, so you did it by hand? You are so awesome that even a big tech guy wouldn't dare to write like this. It's still reasonable for you to build a small pistol. Just like Gatlin Barrett, who couldn't even make a barrel without a machine tool, don't treat all readers as fools.

I finally know why I quit after watching it before. The protagonist killed Miles and forced him to do it for a long time and even had an affair with Hu Liena.

I'm thinking about a question. If the protagonist traveled to a real-life version of Douluo Continent, would anyone still be willing to accept the beauty?

I feel like the explanation is so far-fetched. The third level of the Shadow without Attributes can directly reach ten thousand years. Tang San had to eat a few fairy grasses to dare to live ten thousand years. You can just change the setting to a better one.

Quite awesome

Why is this book so messed up? Wang Linlu Bad Meng Liang, the content of the first few chapters feels like three books are blended together. Meng Liang's awakening of martial arts is also messy. He wakes up at his grandpa's house and then awakens at his grandpa's house. He writes whatever he dreams about. Just ask the Shen family's mother, sister, who is a teacher at Tianshui Academy, which book is about the members of the Tianshui team, I want to read it 🌹