The Outcast: The Yellow Court of Shangqing

What gives them the right to force the protagonist to go tomb raiding? Hu Bayi went because he was already involved in the matter; not going might cost him his life. The protagonist, on the other hand, was originally a disciple of the Shangqing sect, his father was a high-ranking official, he had connections, and he was the youngest son and the apple of their eye.

I've finished watching it all, and here are a few suggestions. The biggest problem is the punctuation. Always divide a sentence into several parts using commas. (This sentence is an example.) Frequent typos. (I won't say more, you know what I mean.) Certain lines and plot points from the original work are often omitted, which you euphemistically call "not padding the word count."

Forget about tomb raiding, it's really not suitable. The combat abilities are on completely different levels, and the protagonist's starting point is too high. This isn't tomb raiding, it's practically robbery.

The protagonist's father is a retired general, right? Where does he get the influence to ask the protagonist to raid tombs?

Author, I'm not trying to be argumentative, but your plot really has problems, and you don't even read the comments or make any changes. Putting aside the past, just look at this chapter: in the comic, Old Meng says the Medicine Immortal Society is a sect with a century-old history. The company already knew about this sect, but it was wiped out a long time ago.

Putting aside the question of why the protagonist was forced to go tomb raiding, it doesn't really matter whether he's in the tomb raiding storyline or not; he's just a minor character. The key issue is that there are so many tomb raiding storylines these days, it's really getting boring.

You, a Taoist priest, going to rob tombs? I don't even know how to curse you.

The plot expansion is fine, but it keeps suppressing the protagonist's level, making him learn things in a haphazard and disjointed way. Running around everywhere instead of cultivating, just playing around! Most importantly, not only have he not achieved anything, but he also keeps writing things like "his talent is about the same as a Celestial Master's." Where does he get the nerve?

My personal opinion is this: the first two times the author wrote "Seven Killing Orders of Gods and Demons"... Both are based on the Three Corpse Qi; one involves igniting oneself, and the other involves... I think forcibly eliminating others and using Soul Chaser could be done like this: First, Once you master this technique, there's a normal state where you can...

My first impression was that he was above one person, Qing Huangting (high-speed rail).