People Are Pirates, Build the Strongest Naval Branch

What the hell is in the latest chapter? Another time traveler? His grades were already average, but he still does this?

The most outrageous thing is that Thor is said to be an old man in the instructor group at first. Basically, all the newcomers to Zefa are led by the leader of the instructor group. Then Taotu comes out and doesn't recognize Thor. He almost can't help but kill Thor. Although it is an inner drama, there is no one who can set this thing to fight and practice by himself.

The overall description is very good, but the malice towards Aoki Pheasant is a bit overt, and it is forced to subdue his intelligence, and his malice is also a hindrance. The Aokiji written by the author is more like an opponent than the dove in the comics. As long as Akainu says it, he will oppose it regardless of whether it is right or wrong.

When you reach your peak, the system is disappearing and you become useless again. How will you die?

What the hell is it to raise a double wearer? .

Why do we need to buy blueprints for dormitories and bases? Are there any special effects? If not, wouldn't buying it be pure and wasteful? Your relationship can't even get the drawings of a base and dormitories? And where can't I buy dormitory drawings? I don't understand it at all. What's the point of buying this kind of blueprint? You didn't include any special effects?

The Thunder Fruit has no weaknesses, it just doesn't eat and give it away. What's the difference between giving it away to a girl? I really can't hold on anymore, so I'm sorry to bother you.

I'm really impressed by this kind of protagonist who can't live without a system.

If you have a system, you will be a genius, if you don't have a system, you will be a waste, so what use do you have? Beginning to persuade you to quit! I suggest you revise the opening chapter. If you don't revise it, it will just be a mess and not many people will read it.

To put it simply, first, the author has no concept of combat power. Not to mention the Lieutenant Colonel of the headquarters, even the Lieutenant General of the headquarters may not necessarily master both of the two colors of domineering. Second, the strongest talent plus the strongest fruit, the strength of a colonel from the headquarters comes at the beginning? Why don't you go to the Navy Headquarters and try to find a colonel who can beat her? With the strongest normal talent and the strongest natural fruit, you can beat the unarmed and domineering major general of the headquarters at the beginning Third, plot conflict, you have not mastered the fun point of fan fiction at all, and the plot conflict created is like boiled water. To make readers keep reading, the first thing to bear is the protagonist's charm, kingly blood, calm development, and darkness dominance. It does not say that it must be consistent, but you have to choose one of the three major categories to write your own taste, otherwise it will be difficult to make a living. To sum up, this book is basically useless. If you are willing, you can try to save it, but there are very few people who can survive the early stage of your book, so I suggest you start a new one.

This thing tells us that the protagonist is a bitch. Just abandoned by a system. (Abandoned by a goddess) Encountered another system. (I met another goddess and immediately became a licking dog) My eyes filled with tears immediately, and I finally met her again.

The military expenditure of the navy is too expensive. At the top, it must recruit 100,000 elites and hundreds of thousands of left-behind personnel. How can we recruit these people without a million basic personnel? In this way, the military expenditure is usually less than a trillion (the world government gives the majority, and the navy loot is a small part). The navy was at its peak during the Warring States period (five generals, dozens of lieutenants, and the commander-in-chief Kong who was born in the navy and had a deep friendship with the navy's top brass) (I guess it would be easy for a Yonko Regiment to be released for them all) Two Yonko regiments were seriously injured and three Yonko regiments died together). As long as we have the name and strength to solve the navy's logistics problems, it is very possible to convince the navy to become independent.

Not for pirates. I hope you won't resist when the Celestial Dragons capture you as a slave. If you resist, you will become a pirate.

Hey, this name is too inconsistent. I won't say that the main character is Li Yan. After all, he traveled through time, but the sisters rescued from the pirate ship are named Zixuan and Ziluo. This is fan fiction, you are so uninvolved

Can you just do as the Romans do? If you have such a special name for pig's feet, it will look very awkward. Do you know?

Originally, there were many pirate novels of this type, which were mixed with original settings and other anime settings. It was like a hodgepodge and was uncomfortable to read. It really didn't have that flavor. Although this film is a little bit toxic, from this point on it only adds settings from Dragon Ball and modern science. There is originality, but it only embellishes the plot rather than being the main part of the plot. The rest of the settings basically respect the original work, so go to the author.

The biggest poisonous point is that the system is conscious

Forget it if the fruit is repeated. Later, the aircraft, cannon, power system, and mobile phone came out, and a double penetration was outrageous. Say goodbye.

The author has a bug. The Supreme Fast Sword is obviously Liu Ying. Why does it turn into a big sword Zhuri later?

I feel that killing Kaido directly is better than making a mess of fruits. Killing Kaido will at least have a small climax.

In order not to add any other fancy and messy anime settings or original settings that violate the concept of dementia, it only adds Dragon Ball settings and modern military settings. It is also a top-notch naval ethics. This book is a favorite.

Why do I feel like I didn't write it as well as I did at the beginning? I added too many messy settings.

Maybe I read too quickly. I'm currently seeing 148. I'd like to ask if Nami will appear again and if Double Thunder will appear.

It's the Chinese New Year, so why don't we just explode?