The Destiny of All Heavens

I have been following the author for many years, I am really tired of this book. I really want to see warriors fighting all the way, punching to the flesh, honing their martial arts between life and death, love and justice, and the limit. However, since the author's first protagonist Lin Sha left the prehistoric world, after the protagonist explored the way of using the Nordic way of heaven as a field, integrating all the worlds, and seeking promotion, it seemed that he became obsessed with this method in the subsequent books. There are always a few world copies that follow this pattern: 1. Protagonist (Extremely high spiritual level) → 2. Based on the national martial arts and internal martial arts → 3. Integrate the will of heaven and earth (gathering momentum from the world) → 4. Immerse yourself in development (outsiders don't understand it at all) → 5. Mainly focus on Qi and blood martial arts, supplemented by medicinal diet and acupuncture (personalized improvement plan) → 6. Change the world within the power (speak with fists, everyone is like Dragon) → 7. Develop quietly and gather the world's knowledge → 8. Explore the mystery of Qi and blood (the magical effect of the soul) → 9. Once he comes out of the mountain, the world is shocked and sweeps the world (end of this article) The protagonist has basically no bonds, no love and righteousness at all (perfunctory scrawling), society is purely without calculation, and speaks with fists (but the previous book) Tianfu Lun is really a honey operation), and there is basically no profound portrayal of the supporting characters (the facial makeup is serious, and the author also tried to avoid poisonous points in the original characters, but don't they have flesh and blood?) The classic scene is always: the protagonist laughs, punches me first, and then the wind surges, the supporting characters are horrified, and hate to leave after receiving a hard punch. I really saw the shadow of the history department in the author's recent chapters. I am tired and hope there can be some changes. A humble reader who has read the author's three novels "A Dream of Red Mansions". .

The protagonist is a martial arts practitioner, not a turtle. Movies and TV series are deliberately blocked and they don't retaliate.

I have read this book, as well as the author's previous books, and I feel like every one of them has Red Mansions, and they all make people feel like you are traveling through time for the first time. It is very strong, but I have to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and then I will really become a pig while pretending.

The Red Mansion written by the author is really a masterpiece, but it is not very friendly to LSP.

Normal men generally won't read Dream of Red Mansions. However, this author keeps writing about Red Mansions and is speechless.

Except for the very first one. Why does Paiyunzhang write about Red Mansions in every book on astronomy? Moreover, the Red Mansions chapter in every book is stinky and long. A martial arts training protagonist like you and Dream of Red Mansions are not suitable at all, the contrast is too great. Martial arts protagonists just want to fight, they just want to fight, clean and neat. As a result, as soon as I moved to the Red Mansion, the plot began, and the intrigue between the mother-in-law and mother among the big families began. I want to lean into the literary world, but Paiyun Chang's pen is not strong enough to write in a literary style. Don't you think there's a huge contrast between this and the previous worlds? The protagonist's character was distorted, the plot was unhappy, and readers were lost again. If you put a good protagonist whose strength has been honed in the heavens into the Red Mansion, his style of painting is not right, and there is a sense of gap as his strength declines. A copy of Red Mansion has more than 300 chapters in length. Hey, Paiyunzhang really doesn't want to make money? I feel like if you didn't write about The Red Mansion this book would be a masterpiece. You really like The Red Mansion too much. Why don't you write a book specifically about wearing red buildings, and leave the world alone. The market for red buildings is pretty good right now, and you might be able to make a good profit by focusing on writing about red buildings. I have read the author's second and third books, but each time I discarded them at the Red Mansion. The fourth book, The Red Mansion, was unreadable at the beginning, and I didn't dare to read this one even after hearing about the Red Mansion. 🙉

The first part is really good, the protagonist is decisive in killing and not sloppy, but the second part of "The Red Mansion" is really full of poison, and the wife is taken advantage of by Jia Baoyu and is not punished, and the wife goes to the Rong Mansion that looks down on her every day to join in the fun, and doesn't stop her, and laughs to death. It really turns from a wolf killer to a doormat.

The Red Mansion is written in such a fascinating way that it makes me annoyed just to read it.

This author's books are no longer interesting. They are all the same routine, and the plots are very similar. It feels like his thinking has been solidified.

Every time Soul Crossing is re-exercised and re-introduced, it is good, and it has been bad since the beginning of Red Mansions. The author was immersed in adapting Red Mansions and could not extricate himself, so it almost ended amidst the criticism.

This book can be renamed Kung Fu Miracle Doctor: Urban Rebirth

Why does it feel like there are only good reviews? This chapter says there are only so many negative reviews. Have you deleted the comments?

Seeing that because of realistic materialism, I can't understand fantasy things, I can't practice internal skills, and I just give up on the useless situation. In what era are you still engaging in these bloody plots?

The Red Mansion, farewell. I am not interested in this one among the four great classics. The author has several books. I lose my appetite when I read about The Red Mansion😓😓

The author had brain surgery when finishing the last book. He has been in trouble in recent days, so he has not been able to update steadily. I hope all readers will understand 😢

He's coming! ! He's coming! ! He came with the red building! This time it's Jia Rong's turn! I don't even need to look to know that this is another dwarf with a giant's mouth and actions!

Every book is the same. The understanding of farming is to set up a school + inexplicably form strict discipline + all the people to practice martial arts. The results of the training are basically of no use to the protagonist except shocking the visitors. The most ridiculous thing about abcdefg is that every force/master who comes to the protagonist's territory has to follow the same set of templates to be shocked. He actually runs a school/discloses knowledge+Aren't you afraid of problems with the rule+Everyone is so elite+A family that monopolizes knowledge/skills will go crazy. Such a psychological process will be finished in one chapter...

I like the protagonist's strategizing, not panicking when things happen, and his long-term vision for farming and development. Although the development routine is relatively similar to the first two books, I don't know what other people say, at least I won't get bored of it.

How much does the author love Red Mansions? I looked through the catalog of works and found that every book is about the Dream of Red Mansions, and he also wrote many chapters.

Red Mansions is a pure literature. Every time this author writes about martial arts, he always writes about Red Mansions. Does that make him look literate?

First place today

Your heart is as high as the sky, but your destiny is as thin as paper. Do you want to write a novel as a script? But I don't see that he has this ability at all. There are really not many people who can successfully write novels using film camera techniques.

I always feel that the character of the protagonist in this book is a bit strange...

This catalog is too outrageous, the martial arts of the Republic of China - The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty - Pretending to pick up girls in modern society - Dream of Red Mansions - Dragon Balls. I really don't know how to string them together.

This author's writing skills are pretty good, but none of his books are good-looking.

How much do you like Red Mansion?

It's over, it's a pity, I feel that the author has exhausted his talents. The plots in the novel are all written by the author in previous works. Maybe the Dragon Ball chapter is a new idea and is more interesting. The previous plots, especially the urban chapter, are written in the ocean... The "Martial Arts World Travel" is still the best, or the imagination is very exciting, and the subsequent ones are not satisfactory. I hope the author can adjust it and stop looking at hydrology, or open up his imagination and come up with some new ideas. In fact, it would be good if it promotes the world more. Unfortunately, for this novel, it promotes the development of the world a little, but it feels that it is not strong enough, and the passion and development of martial arts are not enough...

Also, every time I travel through the dungeon world, it happens several years or even more than ten years before the plot begins, and the reading experience drops by half.

The author has weak control and the writing is even less satisfying. The main line of the protagonist's behavior is unclear and has a hydrological feel. I am even less sure of the exciting points of the plot, and the writing feels aggrieved and irritating. However, the author is indeed rich in experience. His writing is fluent, the characters are well created, and the plot connection is not stiff. However, he lacks a general grasp and real attraction. If the author doesn't think about summarizing and improve his ability, I'm afraid this is the end.

I feel that the part about returning to Earth to do business and develop Chinese martial arts is good. I can write a novel with the Earth as the main world. The writing style of the previous novels is too similar.