My Game Kingdom of God

The creativity is very good, the time adjustment is very messy, and the players' abilities are also very messy. How can I put it this way? Specifically, there is no plot and no logic. It's that simple

Now when I look at this kind of game article about reviving people from a different space, I really feel like it's fucked. Is it more expensive to resurrect people from a different space than resurrecting local people?

Do you know what my advice is? My suggestion is that this book can be developed in the direction of pornography 😏

I think this is a work of self-interest and is extremely exclusive.

Maybe my IQ is too low and I can't understand what the author wrote...😢😢😢

At the beginning, I didn't want to make people understand the writing. It's a mess. It's better to just have the protagonist travel through time and find a golden finger that can summon players in the name of releasing a virtual reality game on the original earth to help the protagonist open up territories and spread faith. There is no need to think about Goldfinger where he came from, what his structure is, and why he was chosen as the protagonist.

Except for the good writing by the players, the rest is really messy. Also, the system is unclear

The writing is very messy, and it can be understood by the author himself, but not by others. If I give this book a hundred points, one point is too much.

A very simple thing has to be explained in a complicated way, like the setting explanation, which takes several chapters. In fact, it is just one sentence: the protagonist obtains the power of thinking in the beginning, but needs others to believe in him. Pulling people into the world of I Am Legend and deceiving them is a virtual reality game.

After reading the introduction, the protagonist is so powerful that I directly changed the different world into a game...

The author is great, no book is complete. Good job, Mr. Eunuch.

This book was written by the author in a dream

There is a book shortage, and those who are deceived by the name can only say that the front is trying to sell dog meat. 1. A novel about becoming a god should be positioned as a cool novel. It can be high-minded and close to the people. It starts like the protagonist and has to do everything. / Before the initial capital, it is the energy of the god. / Before it has its own territory, it is very dramatic. The protagonist still knows the situation of this world, and the sense of mystery is gone all of a sudden. 2. There is no sense of mystery in the front, and the protagonist still needs all kinds of science knowledge, as if he knows everything, but there is nothing he can do, and there is no golden finger, which can persuade most readers. Later, when the golden finger arrives, the protagonist has nothing, and he still has to find ways to find resources, and persuade some readers. It is not a book shortage, and I really can't stand it. 3. The author's writing style is still good, but there is little knowledge and routines, which makes people read very confusingly. There are still very few behind-the-scenes themes behind the scenes of becoming gods, but there are also many famous works. The author can read more books by great gods, learn from them, absorb the essence, and incorporate his own style when creating. Good-looking novels will naturally become popular. The protagonist gets a golden finger at the beginning. The golden finger has initial energy for the protagonist to summon people from the earth. The protagonist has a territory in another world to accommodate earth players. He slowly acquires the skills of the other world to improve his own strength and the strength of the players, and relies on the players to conquer the alien world. In the end, gods from other times invade other worlds, and the protagonist grows up and fights with gods from other worlds. In this way, early readers will have a sense of involvement. Tasks are released behind the scenes so that players can help them conquer the world and feel refreshed. Finally, fighting gods from other worlds gives them excitement. Isn't this good?

This book is just pure nonsensical comedy. So don't talk about chaos or chaos. There is no logic behind nonsense. People who like to be more serious should not read this book.

Your description writing skills are extremely poor. You don't explain many things. You don't say who shot the bullets, and you don't say who fired certain moves. The characters are not introduced clearly either. Some things you didn't mention the location at all, so I had to guess where it happened. If it weren't for the players who were really making fun of it, they wouldn't know how to continue watching it.

After reading a few chapters, I would like to give you some opinions. The most common reason why I can't stand it: the logical relationship is too confusing and the plot is confusing. Although I can understand the general meaning, it is still messy. I have given up on it now. It is too messy. Unless it is overhauled, it is really unbearable. I am looking forward to the next book.

The author used to work in Gotham City, right? The whole Riddler character relationship and power system is a mess, and it's up to the readers to make up their own minds.

It gives me a headache, I don't know what I'm looking at

Superman, since the background of the game is in Japan, let's remove the inability to attack NPCs!

Is he a eunuch? . No update for several days

After reading the first few chapters, I have four words for the author: It's nothing!

It feels like the author changed the outline after writing a few chapters, as if he was completely following the readers' reactions. Some people gave up and changed directions as soon as the characters appeared. It was too jumpy to read.

Is there only two people in such a big comment area?

Let me make up the numbers and make it fun

The plot of this book is confusing, the ideas are very good, but the writing is too confusing, and it is impossible to clarify the ideas.

Let's do some big sci-fi world, Star Wars, Borderlands or something.

I would like to ask, in Chapter 8, didn't He Jinyin and the others just ignore the protagonist and drive away, and then directly encounter the enemy? Isn't the madness skill a reward for the mission issued by the protagonist? Where did they get the madness skills?

Why has the update been discontinued? A eunuch? ? ?

Are there any similar novels like this?