Who Is Using If Phone Booth

Regarding the shortcomings of the future world The technological gap and the inability to synthesize organisms are understandable. But the technology of synthesizing carbohydrates does not require advanced technology, nor is it a technology that requires living things to light up Synthesizing carbohydrates is essentially manipulating atoms to synthesize molecules. In any case, it is a laboratory of molecular physics and molecular chemistry, and there is no need for a biological laboratory. Since it is a science fiction world rather than a fantasy world, you should be logical and scientific. You can say that technological gaps have caused silicon-based life to be unable to understand the existence of carbon-based life But you say that silicon-based civilization, which even defeated the aliens who exterminated mankind, cannot even synthesize carbohydrates, which is like saying that our modern technology cannot make the iron swords that people in the Bronze Age saw. It is suggested that the author make some small changes. It can be said that there will be no production line for synthetic carbohydrates in the future world, and it needs to be synthesized in the laboratory, instead of stupidly purchasing "antique" honey from all over the world...

This book is all about creativity. But I have to say that the author's efforts are really not enough. From the perspective of time and space these times, the monetary era is just fine. Ancient times were just a passing scene. Modern is simply unwatchable. I hope there can be improvements in the future.

How about the author rewrite it? I think the subject matter is good and the idea is good, but the development of the plot is too toxic and the logic is wrong. Although it would make sense if the phone booth was forcibly changed and the timeline was like this, it feels strange and pity that it could have been written better. Just like in World of Warriors, the landlord kicked him out because he was a low-class man, because low-class society treated him like this. This kind of development really feels confusing. It is actually quite strange to force Zhou Ba to change his gender or to have him everywhere. When I first started watching it, I thought it was very interesting, and I really wanted to know the follow-up development. However, I felt that the plot development was very illogical, so I could only take a look at the good parts. I think if I reopen it and write the plot well, maybe it can become popular.

It's an interesting subject matter, but there are a lot of plot logic that make people confused. It will be a good book to make up for this shortcoming later.

To be honest, I was very interested when I read the title of the book, and my curiosity was completely aroused after reading the introduction. Then I clicked in and took a look... The scene where the protagonist who grew up in modern society sweetly calls "Mother" not only scared me to the point of quitting the novel, but also created a huge psychological shadow on this novel.

It gave me a sense of déjà vu with Martin. Martin Martin wakes up every morning

The idea is good, but unreasonable. There are a lot of confusions and contradictions.

It's really interesting. If it didn't break down, it would definitely be a masterpiece.

In the later stages of this book, it feels like the writer has changed. The current world is that the god of war comes home and finds his wife living in a mental hospital. He becomes a takeaway rider out of anger.

This idea is really wonderful. If it is well written, it will be a masterpiece, but if it is not well written, it will be a waste... I think this arrangement is very problematic. I think the normal arrangement is to change one major event at a time, rather than forcing changes once a month. The biggest shortcoming of this book is that there is no core gameplay and no core strategy targets. I am currently compiling a book, drawing on this idea, and getting a new identity every month. I compiled it while typing, and then directly set up a big boss for the protagonist. The protagonist at the beginning is a delivery boy, delivering food in a relatively remote place, and then being chased. Then the system appears, extracts the identity of the motorcycle champion and obtains the corresponding riding skills, and then asks you to chase him. Then he will be dragged to a crowded place, and then he will set a target to catch the murderer behind the scenes. During this period, he will participate in various competitions to show off his driving skills and defeat the city's best car god. Then there will be a second round of pursuit. For example, first let the "police" investigate him and impound the vehicle. The plot will further progress, and then he will get an identity, a fighting master or something. Finally, through each plot, the identity was revealed, and the murderer behind the scenes was found. Oh, it turned out that he was drunk and beat up a certain young master. In order to prevent the plot from being boring and demanding twists and turns, we set up a boss, which is more powerful, and finally kill him. When he is about to stand at the highest peak of power and glory, he will then unveil the system. Oh, it turns out that it is his uncle's grandfather's nephew's uncle's neighbor Lao Wang who is looking for an heir. The system is a biochip he ordered to develop, which can input knowledge and ability into people's brains. Everything that happens is to train him to grow. In fact, it's time to end here. I really couldn't bear to have an alien invasion and finally attack the universe. When I was about to unify the multiverse, I woke up from the dream and found that I was still the stinky loser delivering food. A beautiful girl with big waves charmingly shouted to him: "Little brother~, is this my takeaway?" … Yeah, it's easy to write two or three million like this! Even if it is forced to change for a while a month, it should be easy to write. The changes should be regular and the rules should be obvious. The protagonist should not be confused from beginning to end, nor should the jump be too big. The readers should be taken care of. Now there are warriors, now the Ice Age, now alien invasion... I think there is nothing wrong with the first warriors, mainly because of what they have gained. Let's analyze the changes first. There are only two general directions, one that is beneficial to the protagonist, and one that is detrimental to the protagonist. The changes are nothing more than these two! So! Go on, the logic is clear, right? In order to cope with this changing world, the protagonist must obtain equipment and strength from good ones! To cope with bad disasters, the protagonist must have a goal. What do you think of the goal? The most basic thing is to live, live forever? Anyway, there is only one good direction, gain strength? Protect the people you want to protect? Protect your girlfriend, protect your parents, or investigate the system, slap the enemy in the face, start a harem? Enjoy the family happiness of three thousand beauties in the harem? It's a very easy thing to decide. Right, while acquiring these things, you can also create some characters, conflicts, and tribulations... Use these things to express images and enhance the sense of immersion. You can also play some jokes if you are relaxed, martial arts master 🐴 protects the country, fights all over the world with one hand, Qiao Biluo, xxx, high-quality human

It was a good subject matter, but in the last two chapters I lost my character, the female protagonist was driven crazy, and the male protagonist is in such a big company, are the rank of major general and the strength of the grand master just for show? Are you going to work as a delivery boy and go fishing for just one sentence? Author, if you want to write about conspiracies, you must at least write at a certain level, not to mention how good it is. It's really not possible to forcefully reduce intelligence like this. This should be the longest review I have ever written. It's a good subject matter, but it's a pity.

Chapter 60 is too dramatic. As the helmsman of one of the world's largest corporations worth over a trillion dollars, there will definitely be an army dedicated to rescue the protagonist in such a crisis. But this is not the case now. The protagonist has no thought process at all and contributes technology from the future world for free. It is really too poisonous. Contributing technology is fine, but there must be a reason or thoughtfulness, such as rescuing the protagonist, and then the protagonist is moved to hand it over on his own initiative. The loopholes are so big that they are totally inconsistent with the logic of reality. Of course, if it's fun enough, it's okay to be illogical, but the problem is that it's not fun at all at this point, and it's also a bit frustrating. This is unbearable for bookworms.

The Bug World was good to watch before, but it's ugly after The World. It's like a different author, and the author is stubborn. I seriously doubt that the author's logical thinking is completely different from the public's aesthetics. The further it goes, the more it deviates from the theme. First of all, the assets and identity obtained by the protagonist are completely useless. It looks like the return of the God of War. Since you don't have to work hard to get it, what's the point of writing it? Then you can be framed by others wherever you go, which I don't quite understand. And your cultivation seems to be of no use in modern times. Everyone can deal with you for a while, and then the author pretends that what I wrote is very reasonable. Most readers are stubborn and think that what they wrote is very reasonable, but they don't know that in the eyes of most people, it is very unreasonable.

I announce that the 100th chapter of this book has been completed. Later, the aliens replaced the author, and we could completely re-open a book "The Return of the Dragon King: The God of War": The God of War returned and found that his wife was imprisoned in a mental hospital. After giving an order, he also entered.

Post it here as proof! I will fight this author to the death! Twelve novels in five years, all of them unfinished, but I still have the nerve to silence myself and give my opinions. From now on, I will scold every novel written by this author until he finishes it!

This subject matter is great. Is anyone planning to open a new book?

What do the future and ancient protagonists get? Emotion? Inexplicable feelings, the future robot has no desire and can completely turn the earth into its own. The king in ancient times is preparing for the future, but the inexplicable two people have passed. The invasion you want to write is burning, but there is no foreshadowing, no resonance, and it just feels awkward and poisonous. This is not how a running account is written. You can look at a typical running account written blindly. If you change the characters in the story, it will be another book.

I found the introduction interesting at first, but unfortunately I couldn't stand the first change. The logic didn't make sense. The realm was written like pure strength, but I couldn't do weightlifting all over the world, or it was like a cold Nezha. Women would probably be similar. It's okay to lose a job because of low physical strength, but it's illegal to rent an apartment. I didn't expect it. Is it illegal for the sick and elderly to rent a house now?

My suggestion is that if the author writes about an area that he doesn't understand, please check it online. I don't ask you to check any professional literature, but at least use a browser to take a look. It's outrageous enough that the incomplete settings in the work are supplemented in the chapter reviews, but it's even more outrageous to add many settings that don't conform to realistic logic and rely more on conjecture. If you want to just mess it up and let yourself go, I can't stop you, but if you want to write a good book, you cannot ignore the logic of reality. The content of an excellent work must withstand verification and logical reasoning.

The overall feeling is that it is chaotic, with multiple main lines running in parallel, but there is no complete series connection between the main lines. Every time I change the map, the sense of fragmentation is particularly strong. It looks disorganized. And based on the protagonist's current situation, will he act like the God of War returns again and again every time he travels back to the world of no one?

The idea is good, but there is still a lot of room for improvement, especially the third world, which is completely illogical. A world-class consortium, no military agency, no scientific research institution, I am speechless just thinking about it.

All I can say is that it feels like the protagonist was captured by aliens for psychological experiments. In fact, it is a different kind of torture article, a brain in a vat. If you want me, I will commit suicide. It's terrifying to think about it.

After reading the second chapter, because force is worth renting a house, going on a blind date, or going to work are all illegal, the author needs to study the law well.

It was quite interesting at the beginning, but after World of Insects, I was forced to lose my wits and gave up the book.

It can be seen that he is about to become a eunuch.

After reading the latest chapter, and then reading a bunch of people's chapter reviews and book reviews. I thought about it carefully, does this count? What about the effect of a phone booth? A lot of people said that this feeling has become very weird, but I think this should be an effect, that is, turning into an urban dragon Aotian or something like that. Whether this can be considered an effect, in fact, what the author wants to tell us is. This is also if the phone booth exerts an ability on the protagonist, making the protagonist become what he is now. If you think about it, wouldn't it be quite reasonable to see such big changes in these pictures? And I don't see what's not good about it? I really want to take a look at the back. I haven't seen anything unreasonable yet.

Is it possible that the author is Caiyun Xiaomeng?

Is this garbled code? 🤭

The subject matter is interesting. That's all. I feel like I'm watching a running account. It's normal to be happy, but there's nothing very exciting about it.

The first monthly vote this month, I voted