One Piece: Invincible Starts with the Zombie Army

Moria is still dead. What's the point of the plot? Brother Ming was captured several times but he didn't die and then turned into a monster. I just want to say it's very poisonous. Come on.

Isn't this combat power just plain writing? Too messy

Ah, Moria has just given up. He is still dead without a whole body. I always feel that something is not quite right.

The protagonist should be called Gianluigi Buffon, and the protagonist's white gloves should not have a black cross, but a black J.

Author, let me do the math for you. You code one word per second, which is 3600 per hour. There are 24 hours in a day. You sleep for six hours, eat for one hour, wash for an hour, and give you another hour for conception. With 15 hours left, you can code 54,000 words, a chapter of 2,000 words, almost 27 chapters, but what do you mean by only updating 2 chapters?

Wulaoxing

If this book is not popular, I will stand on my head and eat flying!

Perona

I don't understand some of the protagonist's behaviors. Obviously, some characters who can be killed immediately insist on not killing them, but give them treatment, and then continue to cause trouble for the protagonist, such as Doflamingo and the like. Moreover, when I saved Moria for the first time in Impel Down City because of greedy shadows, Moria has not learned the lesson. After saving Moria in the war at the top, I didn't want to evacuate immediately and insisted on making another big fuss, which caused the death of Ace and Moria. What is the difference between this and the original work?

Give me some advice, don't complain. I feel like the author didn't grasp the readership well. If I want to write the protagonist of Wei Guangzheng, he should change his birth point and accurately identify the readership. I can't figure out why he wants to lick the protagonist after messing with Moria, and his personality is not suitable. Sorry. I can't tell you what the title of the book is. Most of them want the protagonist to be a heroic personality and an egoist. Even if you want to write a story where the protagonist is friendly and interested, you have to sit upright. I can't figure out why you want to lick the protagonist's balls (it's a bit confusing, just understand what I mean)

It is a food and grass. Hope Moria has a good ending.

The writing is very mature, but I am thinking about Akainu. I don't know why I abandoned the book that depicts Akainu when I saw that part. There is something wrong with O'Hara's government, but I have always felt that there is nothing wrong with Akainu's operation.

I understand. Anyway, no one in Blackbeard will die in the end. Ace will definitely be caught. The protagonist will definitely fight on top and show off. Anyway, we have to follow the plot, so we have to let Blackbeard go. Otherwise, how can we show off? I'm sure Ace will fall over.

The book would be better if the author knew half as much about One Piece as he does about football. The setting is okay, but it feels like there is no main line or goal. The previous ten years of development before the plot are all scattered here and there with some small plots, and there is no sense of how the protagonist improves his strength. It just vaguely improves towards the beginning of the plot, and it also declines when writing about women. Then when I saw Chapter 38, you almost finished the content in the introduction before the anime plot even started. Are you planning to write about the women in the supporting roles in the character column next?

Blackbeard can easily kill him and then sew him up directly. He has abilities and zombies, and Blackbeard's body is also top-notch. This can also make all his members run away, making this battle a waste.

? Become the ship's doctor on Whitebeard's bed?

No, after reading five chapters, there are so many poisonous points that I really can't stand it. Ryoma is T1 level, so his strength is too high. He is very strong, but in the world of pirates, there is Im, the big boss behind the scenes. He (she) must be the highest, which is the TO set by the author. After ruling the world for 800 years, he must be the only one with strength. Don't say that Im doesn't know his strength without taking action. Hot-blooded The final boss of the shounen manga will definitely not be weak. If we count the ones with personal strength, power and reputation like Rocks Roger, they should be T1. Can you say that Ryoma and Rocks Roger are on the same level? The strongest man in the world with Whitebeard at his peak should be T1. The Red Earl was named after Roger, Whitebeard and Golden Lion's pirate group when he was young. He must be T1, Cyborg Sora and Red Earl. King 5 and 5 are also T1. The relationship between Garp and Roger is similar to that of the red-haired Hawkeye. Garp should have a T1. This level should be better than the current generals. Garp said to let Sengoku pull him to stop beating Akainu to death. Regardless of whether he was bragging, Garp chased Roger, or whether Roger was afraid of Garp's fleet, he did not want to tangle with Garp. It's a fact, and the five old stars don't give Akainu face but don't embarrass Garp. In addition to Garp's contribution, his personal strength is definitely also the reason for the attitude of the five old stars. It is more reasonable for the four emperors and three generals to choose T2 Ryoma, T2 or T3. The current few great swordsmen except Hawkeye and Red Hair are 50-50, and the remaining Bista Peach Rabbit can delay time in front of the generals. Secondly, make socks for Perona and gloves for yourself. The color of the armor turns black when you touch it? You think this is enchantment. The color change of your socks and gloves is due to the principle of the black knife. But how can it be so easy for the black knife or the weapon color to remain unchanged for a long time? There are only two black swords in One Piece now, and there probably won't be too many in the future: Whitebeard's sword, the twelve-level supreme sword, Congun Kiri, the red-haired famous sword Griffin, Bista's twin swords, Oden's Tianhaha Zan and Enma, Momo Usagi's Kinkunra, and the Golden Lion's Sakura Towa. Deadwood and these are not black swords. All the great swordsmen only have one black sword, Hawkeye, which is enough to show how rare black swords are. Black swords should be formed by people with strong armed colors who have attached the armed domineering energy for a long time. It is like the natal magic weapon in fantasy that is cultivated in the Dantian, that is, it is marinated in flavor. This time span is at least 20 to 30 years, otherwise there is no reason why none of the great swordsmen have black swords. You just touch the stockings and gloves with your little hands to enchant them. Is this reasonable?

Read 20 chapters. The plot and writing are okay, but I really can't understand the character's fighting ability. Lieutenant General Ghost Spider, who has mastered life return, only has T4? At the same time, Zhan Momomaru and Brooke had T3? So, does Brooke have the power to defeat the Lieutenant General before the start of Luffy's plot? Wait until Luffy arrives Zoro > Zombie Ryoma > Brook. According to this, does Sauron on the terrifying barque need to be at least an elite lieutenant general? It's funny, if the author can't write the combat effectiveness, then don't mess with it, OK?

The setting is okay, but the writing is not good, and sometimes certain plots make people feel inexplicable 😒

Introduction Whitebeard: Come to my bed, are you serious?

I really don't understand. I can kill or not. Even if I want those people's abilities, I can cure them and then kill them. There is no need to let them go. You are here to play Batman with me. It really disgusts me. The more I watch, the more I feel frustrated🤮🤮🤮

Suddenly I realized that the Shadow Fruit and Impel Down City were a perfect match, and it would be a waste to keep them in Moria's hands.

The setting is pretty good, that is. . . . How can I put it, the combat power aspect is too big, not to mention stitching attributes, but also to combine fruit abilities, and the skills are a joke based on the original setting. The swordsman uses the swordsman's routine to combine a bunch of messy fruits, and before he does anything, he singles out the general Yonko. It's all just for the sake of being round. There is also the amplification effect of the battle suit. Is it really that powerful that Gaji will be desperate and find a way to join the aunt? Really strong people don't look down on peripheral equipment. The character of the protagonist is also a big flaw. There are three male characters and one male. It feels like Lu Qi has a completely normal outlook on life. Moreover, he looks like he has undergone facial nerve resection surgery. No matter what the situation, he always has a cold face.        ，，， The second master has too many hangups and is too messy. Copying, fruit fusion, and skill fruit fusion are completely unreasonable.

No brainer, still very beautiful

I saw that the protagonist was fighting with Ghost Spider because he knew the Six Styles, and Ghost Spider called the protagonist to abandon him.

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The combat power is too vague. I have only read one Pirates fanfic so far. I loaded the game board of Pirates. Your time span is unclear and your combat power is unclear. You won't be able to hold on until you see Chapter 8.

I always think of this name as Boomer

Everything revolves around the protagonist, which is a lot of strong writing. Granary Level

I am curious, what happened to your profile? Whitebeard's bed? Have I discovered a blind spot? Shouldn't it be on the ship? Why is it on the bed? Why do you still want to be Whitebeard's wife?