The One Who Descended from Beyond the Heavens

Science is the eternal god. What good is talent if the level of science is too high? It can directly replicate your talent, making everyone possess the same, or even greater, talent. Therefore, scientists are the eternal gods.

The writing is excellent, but unfortunately, it lacks political comprehension. Signing the ceasefire after Nagato's death was the optimal solution, but the protagonist views it as a compromise made by ordinary people yearning for peace, and as a lack of resistance stemming from their expectation of a savior for a better life.

Not bad, he might become the next Dr. Chen.

The book is not bad, but it doesn't quite fit the way Tianmo does things. Although it might be because he's afraid of being banned, why would you choose Tianmo in the first place? It's bland and uninteresting. Nobody knows what the Heavenly Demon needs. The soul of the strong? Why not just quickly harvest a wave of (a metaphor for easily exploited people) and then create a new world?

Let's talk about some controversial points. Spoilers ahead, proceed with caution. 1. Was Black Zetsu persuaded too easily? If Black Zetsu doesn't back down, the Gedo Mazo will be destroyed by the protagonist using Kamui. 2. Did the Akatsuki organization change too quickly?

Can Qidian (the online learning platform) release a feature that allows users to block authors with a single click? He could become a eunuch just by watching. Still a repeat offender 😭😭😭

The Heavenly Demon, capable only of devouring the essence of souls and mutually devouring each other, is too rudimentary. In my view, the Heavenly Demon should parasitize the minds of all living beings, absorbing their desires to grow stronger, and guiding them into demonic possession. It's merely a means to stimulate a surge of desire in all living beings.

Uh... So what exactly is the protagonist trying to do? Is it to enlighten and reform the ninja world's ideology?

The protagonist is a fun-loving character, which was quite entertaining at first, but looking at the table of contents, there's way too much focus on Naruto. Spending a day playing with a nest of ants might be somewhat enjoyable, but spending ten years doing so just raises questions... The protagonist really doesn't seem tired at all.

The lack of romance with Nan Jie is a major drawback, and without a female lead, the map changes too slowly. Few authors truly enjoy their time-travel experiences; only by incorporating their own desires into the real world can they feel genuine. I don't believe the author himself wouldn't want to live a life similar to Wang Sicong's. Constantly saving the world and the characters makes him feel like a mere tool; he'd be better off just working as a laborer on Earth.