The Metaverse of Infinite Worlds

Let me make it clear that no one cares about your three views. If you want to refine it, that's your business. Just write a book and that's it. As a result, I have to write a long article in the main text, confront people in the book review section, and the latest chapter is ridiculous. (Don't say you don't know how good the parameters introduced in that chapter are, and I haven't seen you write down the parameters for the protagonist's whole body equipment like this) If you have this time, you might as well write more about Warhammer. Why are you always thinking about your slutty heroine? I'm always thinking about tattoos, what are they doing in bars? ? Are Space Marines not good? I really don't understand what you are doing these days. You don't focus on the key points of anything you write. You have a certain demeanor like the magic witch Liuliu.

First of all, the text carries the meaning, the author is the expresser of information, and the reader is the receptor of information. A good author should not condescendingly say, "It's all your fault that you didn't understand what I meant" when there is a deviation in conveying information. Second, the author provides high-quality works, and the readers provide subscriptions and monthly passes. Now you go to the comment area to confront the readers, and you are arrogant and sarcastic in the text. Readers are a group, and their quality varies from good to bad. Some people criticize sharply, while the rest are silent. Will your weird and eccentric attitude make the critics break their defenses, or will it disgust the remaining readers? It is understandable that online article authors must maintain continuous updates and cannot always maintain a high level of writing. The Platinum Writers of Cuttlefish's Long Night and Chen Dong's Holy Ruins will also arouse dissatisfaction among readers because of their plots. Have they personally ended the battle? Still the same sentence "Can't you even accept a little criticism?"

In fact, I have always wanted to say, has the author considered the audience of this book? There are probably three types of people who come to read your book, Warhammer fans, Infinite Flow fans, and passers-by. Some senior Hammer fans may dislike your so-called lack of Hammer flavor and leave, and Infinite Flow fans will no longer read because of the niche of Warhammer. A group of people left, and because the protagonist is in the technological stream, there will probably be fewer. The rest are some passers-by and readers like me who like Warhammer but don't pursue the Hammer flavor too much and think your writing is very creative. However, I relied on the novelty and ignored some shortcomings of the book until now. But the plot is really boring recently, and with the heroine issue, except for Fei, other female characters are more or less criticized. Your female character is really not well written, why do you have to write it, and keep adding more to it? It's not a question of whether a Warhammer novel needs a woman, it's that you really don't write it well, especially the last one. After recently losing the novelty feeling of opening a book, some female characters and their plots are really boring to think about. This is far from just me. You can tell by looking at the number of likes on a review I posted before. Many people think that your writing of female characters is not good. Do you really not consider changing it? I think this book is a pity, he should have had better results. I really hope you can write it well. There are not many books that include Warhammer plus Infinity and are mainly Warhammer. Not to mention that your writing is not bad. Unfortunately, not many new people are attracted to it now, and those who are attracted may be persuaded to leave. I also voted for the monthly ticket before, but now I am really not very motivated to click on the next chapter. I will give you a monthly ticket this month. I may continue to read it in the future, but maybe not. I am not typing these words to spite you, I just want to say that boredom is the biggest enemy for me when reading a book. It is interesting enough for me to accept many small flaws. For example, the Alien part has a female protagonist, but now I have to say that this book is indeed a bit boring (The above remarks only represent my personal opinion)

In fact, I can accept the plot of the protagonist growing up through setbacks, but there is no need to use a whole chapter to teach people. It is better to crush these things into the plot than to slap them on people's faces in a whole chapter.

In my humble opinion, there are too many descriptions of women I just wanted to watch the fight for hegemony and farming, but 20 to 30% of the latest chapter was about those women and the protagonist's love affair with each other. . .

Damn, if you write less about women, your book will do much better 🙄

The full text has 402 chapters and 1.74 Million words. Feiyi is mentioned a total of 94 times. The first volume is 78 and it is mentioned 69 times before reincarnation. The second volume has a total of 150 chapters, including Returning to Hometown to Find Feiyi. Feiyi mentioned it 27 times. Leaving the hometown to the latest chapter (I haven't decided on the latest chapter, 170). Feiyi mentioned it 4 times. In the 85th chapter, he said that Feiyi's benefits were not as great as Evelin's. Curious, who forgot who drove the motorcycle to take him to the spaceship?

Dual-wielding power maces, a brand-new and completely different iron pagoda battle group

Actually, I didn't want to post this review, but I couldn't help but read the author's response to the recent controversy. It's obvious that the author still hasn't been able to figure out what his problem is, and why readers have such big objections to the latest two or three chapters. I need to reiterate that no matter what you write, author, readers support it, and we can follow the latest chapter, which means that we like your book very much. This is your novel, and all your plot designs are not a problem. The problem is: you didn't write the plot out! ! ! ! ! It means that the plot and meaning written by the author only exist in the author's mind, and the readers do not feel the same information from the author's narrative and writing (this involves the reader's reading experience) The author personally commented on the latest two chapters to explain: The main meaning is "Eveline, an indigenous character, is very important to the protagonist and embodies the human side of his Space Warrior. Readers should express their understanding." In fact, there is no problem with the author's explanation. The problem is that the readers do not have empathy, because the previous description of the character of Evelin does not make the readers feel her importance to the protagonist (the protagonist's character itself has some playboy style, and when he first came into contact with Evelin, he was just taking advantage of it) Purpose, in the narrative, the protagonist did not respond much to Evelin's efforts.) Therefore, in Chapter 84, when the protagonist says "I can't do it," it will make the reader feel very abrupt and inexplicable. In terms of emotion, a lot of details are left out and not shown. In summary, I am writing this long review because I like the author's work. But recently I saw the author's explanations and comments and found that the author was not aware of the problem. Unless you, the author, write this book just to entertain yourself, if you still want the support of more readers, you must consider the reading experience of the readers. Still the same sentence: Whatever you write, everyone will support it. But you need to understand that readers' feelings about the characters in the book change and progress based on your narrative and characterization. I hope you, the author, will pay attention to this reader's comments and reactions. If you, the author, still think that the readers cannot understand what you mean, you will still have similar problems in your subsequent writing. I hope you can write better and better

Personal opinion! I'm just talking about character handling How can I put it this way, the protagonist's feelings towards this woman in this paragraph gave me a funny feeling like Tang Bohu holding Xiaoqiang and crying. Stephen Chow creates a sense of absurdity in the film by using Tang Bohu to cry over Xiaoqiang; the author expresses human nature by killing a woman under a green mountain without moving his hands. It didn't take more than a minute from when Tang Bohu saw Xiaoqiang to when Xiaoqiang sent it; how long it took for this woman to enter the copy and send it away (not as long as Druid). Her existence was too short, so short that we all thought she was indeed a tool. As a result, The protagonist's emotional reaction goes beyond what the reader thinks of an item The essence is to use an individual as a tool to express something else. It doesn't matter whether the thing is a man, a woman, or a monkey. What matters is the mismatch of virtue. This woman is the least important. In my opinion, it is completely unable to reach the importance of touching the protagonist's thinking. The protagonist's interaction with her other than sex is not even more than that of the Druid. Judging from the description, it is really a daily necessities. Therefore, when you sacrifice her in a position intended to inspire the protagonist's thinking, all that is left is the absurdity of Tang Bohu crying and Xiaoqiang, and the readers' incomprehension and abuse. As for the effect the author wanted... Someone probably felt it. (The following is my personal complaint) What really makes me feel a little uncomfortable is Bai Yueguang, who is almost forgotten now. I believe there are many people like me who still remember her. At this stage, the nuns and the state religion did not try to recruit people before they developed into a behemoth, but they were still pressing back... Based on the outrageous level of 40K, it was already foreseeable. The protagonist who was originally a deviant and jumped repeatedly on the red line of the empire, and the religious lunatic nun who was once Bai Yueguang and has now been brainwashed, the explosive degree of opposition between the two... To put it bluntly, if there is such a plot in the future, I will like it more. The development of 40K is not the worst, only worse.