I, Konoha's Life Coach

Why are Obito and Shisui the same age?

The subject matter is still novel, and the words with teachers as the theme seem to be too high at the beginning. A long-term, step-by-step description may be better. The teacher's words are centered on thoughts and the value of force is slowly revealed. It may be better without a system.

Nice Naruto fan, support!

Kanda Kyoichi? Please give me some advice

Except for the father and son Shisui and Matt, this book is actually pretty good, at the level of a normal Naruto fan. Even Kai and his son are just personally disliked by me, and they are not considered poisonous. So this book is actually pretty good.

Who did you learn how to use this conjunction? The author, it is separated into paragraphs and followed by periods... You... I can't even pass the elementary school Chinese exam

I don't know if I've forgotten it - I remember that body training can only exercise the main body, while the clone can practice ninjutsu and combat experience, or learn cultural classes. After the clone is released in this way, the knowledge and experience learned will return to the original body and become memory. ——You use your clone to exercise. After the exercise is over, there is no benefit except for bringing a little fatigue to the main body. It also won't exercise the body and muscles (the heat will be relieved after doing the exercise separately).

With all due respect, there hasn't been a good book on Naruto in the past two years. If you don't agree, come and argue.

Any conspiracy theories? I won't read it if it's not a conspiracy theory. The third generation must be dark, dark to the core. Recently I read that some novel authors are afraid to even write conspiracy theories, for fear of being criticized by fans of the original works. You've already read fan fiction and why do you care about the original work? Kishimoto knows how to deal with Naruto.

In fact, the original comics are clearly drawn, and there is no room for conspiracy theories. First, everyone knows that White Fang gave up the mission to save his companions, but why do so many people not know that White Fang gave up the mission, causing the mission to fail, which directly caused heavy losses to the Fire Nation? Second, White Fang is an elite jounin of the Sannin. I don't need to say more about the level of the mission that White Fang can lead, right? The consequences of failure can be imagined, more people may die because of it, and the ninjas who accompanied White Fang must also be elite jounin who have experienced hundreds of battles. This is why the companions who were saved by White Fang in turn accused White Fang. Third Konoha's final treatment of White Fang can be said to be extremely kind. After White Fang committed suicide, he blocked the news and publicized his sacrifice for the village. Only the high-ranking Jonin and Kakashi knew about it.

How do Uchiha arrange it? This is the biggest contradiction in the whole series. Who is the heroine? Is it Tsunade? If so, I will chase her.

Sorry, I'm stupid, I clicked on this book. The main character's three-skin jutsu showed others that he was definitely not only a chuunin, but was also speculated to have awakened the Senju bloodline. It almost made me laugh to death. The author has never watched Naruto!

When I saw your cover, I didn't know if it was a hallucination or something, but I felt like I was looking at the cover of a book 🙂

Now I suspect that the author has not watched Naruto at all, but has read some noob fanfics! The Battle of Mount Kikyo was in the 50th year of Konoha, and it was the final stage of the Third Ninja War. The third battle you wrote about hasn't even started yet, so I'll just end it here. Can you look at the timeline when writing the novel? This is not how magic changes are done

It poisoned me to death. Chapter 1: Dissuade Me Obito and Shisui are in the same class. The timeline is so messed up. . Chapter 2: Just teach Shisui. But that's a ninja school. You also said "That instantaneous body technique... Is worthy of the future instantaneous Shisui" and it instantly poisoned me . This is obviously not something that a ninja school should master. It's like Naruto rubbing balls in the ninja school Minato used the flying thunder god directly at the age of 5 Metkai directly opened the door to death in the ninja school Konoha White Teeth used excellent sword skills to rival Jonin in the ninja school Shun Shen Shisui directly used Shunshen in the ninja school The young Kakashi directly used the Mangekyō Sharingan "I can't understand your brain circuit at all" I can't understand Naruto's timeline behavior like rubbing a ball directly in the ninja school. You can write it as you like. This is your freedom. Anyway, I have only read two chapters. It is my freedom to comment. I will just post my thoughts after reading it in the comment area. The timeline is the most taboo in fan fiction. If you want to write more happily, you can just make a hodgepodge of them, and it will be fine even if a little Naruto uses magic spells. Anything can happen in your writing, but I can't understand it

Which heroine is it, is it Tsunade? Or Yuhihong?

Looking at the introduction, is it possible that Three Generations asked you to brainwash these younger generations? With Konoha's corrupt politics, you can just teach basic ninjutsu and the will of fire. If you do other small tricks, aren't you afraid that Danzo will knock you out?

Chapter 8: Improvement in instantaneous body technique? The three body techniques are clone technique, instant body technique, and substitute technique. It has been raised to the highest level before. . . The author really doesn't even understand what the Three Body Technique includes. . .

This level can be recommended, can I also write Naruto? ?

Naruto is too poisonous and cannot be explained without conspiracy theory The first one is Itachi Uchiha. First of all, there is nothing wrong with your family. As a result, others just lied a few words that the rebellion would not succeed, so he helped others kill his whole family, There were three pairs of kaleidoscopes at that time, and both of Shisui's eyes were still other gods. You only need to give one of the three kaleidoscopes to the Sandai and Zangdan, and Konoha will have your last name. Just like that, you still told me that the rebellion can't succeed And what if it fails? In this way, if Sandai wants to maintain his good-natured persona, it is impossible to exterminate all of you to annihilate your race. At least those pregnant women, those babies, and those ordinary tribesmen who have no talents and do not pose a threat to him can survive Besides, even if you don't intend to rebel, just show your blood eye and show an attitude of "I will die with you if you dare to touch me." We will all die together. With the stubbornness of Konoha's high-level officials, they will never dare to touch you. Does he really love his brother? If you love him, kill his entire clan and let him. A life worse than death, Kill his parents, kill all his relatives, and let him live in hatred for most of his life You can even give Shisui's eyes to Naruto, and ask Naruto to let him go. The gods control his consciousness and enslave his thoughts, Let Sasuke give The high-level officials of Konoha are working as dogs for the enemy who killed his whole family and wiped out his whole family. My God, how much hatred must be required for you to love him so much. Is this love? Is this because they are worried that Konoha will not have a dog handler to train the dogs for them? And Shisui, he is not your spiritual guide. The best brother in the master, he was killed in front of you and had his eyes gouged out. The first thing you did was not to take revenge, but to help the enemy kill your whole family. I wonder, what kind of logic is this? The second one is Naruto, who is he, the son of the fourth Hokage after the hero? He is equivalent to the crown prince of Konoha, but you did this to him He has been bullied and humiliated since he was a child. Just looking at the performance in the anime, he was stoned when passing by, often beaten by children, and drank expired milk thrown away by others. Sometimes it's so miserable that he can't even eat instant noodles, and he's almost always hungry. Even a beggar is not so miserable. His father is the Fourth Hokage, and his wife is the princess of the Kingdom of Whirlpool. I don't believe that he didn't leave any legacy. His son can be so miserable that he can't even afford instant noodles, and his life is worse than a beggar. And the Fourth Hokage, there should be many loyal subordinates. Even if any of them help his life and take care of him, he will not be so miserable. You said this is for his own good to keep it secret. Almost everyone knows that he is the demon fox that almost destroyed Konoha. Are you afraid of other villages? Can't the spy see that he is a Jinchuuriki? You said this is to protect him from fear of others peeking into his inheritance. As a result, no one can stand up for him when others bully him. Even if we don't mention the above, who is he? Man, this is how you used a nuclear bomb on your family, and this nuclear bomb is still intelligent and capable of emotions, so you are not afraid of him exploding. Of course, what is most difficult for me to understand is Naruto himself. It would be unbelievable for any normal person to grow up in this environment and not retaliate against society. How can you still protect Konoha and protect those who have experienced it in the past? It is simply incomprehensible that you often bully your villagers. Of course, what makes me most incredible is that when you learned that your father was the Fourth Hokage, in order to stop the Kyuubi, he decided to sacrifice his own life and sacrifice your happiness to seal the tailed beast in you. Your first thought was, Dad is so great, I must be like him. A great Hokage like his father, if any normal person, his first thought is not, my father has paid so much for you, I have paid so much for you, and you treat me like this, I must blow your ass off The third generation also hid in Konoha Village with Danzo and Konoha senior officials during the war. Sending those civilian ninjas and those children of several years old to die on the battlefield, After finally winning the battle, the first thing to do was to find a way to suppress the heroes. First, they killed White Fang, Then they forced the three ninjas away. The most outrageous thing was that the delegation of Kumo ninja came to arrest them, and the one they arrested was the young leader of the Hyuga clan, who was finally rescued. Here we come, but the first thing this guy did when he came out was to ask the head of the family to commit suicide to apologize to the traffickers. What a shame The last one was Senju Hashirama. Madara Uchiha put aside all hatred and prejudices and joined him to conquer the world and realize his ideal. As a result, when he was about to win and was about to dominate the world, this guy suddenly had a brain convulsion and ran away. Go and make peace with those hostile forces that you tortured to death. The key is to make peace without talking about it, but also to cede the land and compensate them. First, return the land you conquered to them, and then compensate them for the (tailed beast) nuclear weapons you worked so hard to obtain. Not to mention Uchiha Madara, any normal person would have to jump up and kill him,

You don't need quantum reading when reading. The article clearly states that it was because of the war that classes were temporarily combined and several grades were together 😅. Some people are not good at reading books. Anyone who has watched Naruto's timeline knows that there is a problem with Naruto's timeline itself. If you don't care about this, it is better to go back and play Naruto 🤫

This timeline is really messed up. Uchiha Kenji launched the Nine-Tails attack on the village when he was 16 years old. The eldest son was 5 years old at the time, which meant that Kenji was a full 11 years older than the eldest son. The original work does not say how much older Shisui is than the great dutiful son, but most people assume that he is three to four years older than the great dutiful son based on the original picture, which means that it can be considered that Uchiha Obito is seven to eight years older than Shisui. Then the question is: How can Obito, who graduated at the age of nine, attend the same school as Shisui, who is one to two years old?

It would be nice if the main character Tsunade worked hard to make the Tsunade trio become like this.

It's so poisonous that I couldn't stand it in the second chapter. Being good at the three body skills is equivalent to awakening the bloodline of Thousand Hands. I can't stand this far-fetched thinking.

I'm afraid the author has never seen Naruto. Obito and Shisui were in the same class?

I discovered that I have read all the Naruto fanfics written by the author.

After reading the introduction, it seems that the protagonist has no will of fire even though he can still live while conveying these wills.

I saw the name looked familiar, I clicked on the work and took a look, oh, it turned out to be you

This is the best fanfic I have read so far. It is natural, not flirting with girls, and the plot is written seriously. It is also very interesting. Please keep updating.

Personal opinion, it's actually okay, but it's a small bug. I'm not a senior Naruto fan. I don't know if Shisui is in the same class, but judging from the age, it shouldn't be too many years apart, probably two or three years. Putting this aside, I feel pretty good. The recommendation is really good, and it can reach the food level.