I, Naruto's Life Mentor

Who did you learn how to use this conjunction? The author, it is separated into paragraphs and followed by periods... You... I can't even pass the elementary school Chinese exam

I don't know if I've forgotten it - I remember that body training can only exercise the main body, while the clone can practice ninjutsu and combat experience, or learn cultural classes. After the clone is released in this way, the knowledge and experience learned will return to the original body and become memory. ——You use your clone to exercise. After the exercise is over, there is no benefit except for bringing a little fatigue to the main body. It also won't exercise the body and muscles (the heat will be relieved after doing the exercise separately).

With all due respect, there hasn't been a good book on Naruto in the past two years. If you don't agree, come and argue.

Any conspiracy theories? I won't read it if it's not a conspiracy theory. The third generation must be dark, dark to the core. Recently I read that some novel authors are afraid to even write conspiracy theories, for fear of being criticized by fans of the original works. You've already read fan fiction and why do you care about the original work? Kishimoto knows how to deal with Naruto.

In fact, the original comics are clearly drawn, and there is no room for conspiracy theories. First, everyone knows that White Fang gave up the mission to save his companions, but why do so many people not know that White Fang gave up the mission, causing the mission to fail, which directly caused heavy losses to the Fire Nation? Second, White Fang is an elite jounin of the Sannin. I don't need to say more about the level of the mission that White Fang can lead, right? The consequences of failure can be imagined, more people may die because of it, and the ninjas who accompanied White Fang must also be elite jounin who have experienced hundreds of battles. This is why the companions who were saved by White Fang in turn accused White Fang. Third Konoha's final treatment of White Fang can be said to be extremely kind. After White Fang committed suicide, he blocked the news and publicized his sacrifice for the village. Only the high-ranking Jonin and Kakashi knew about it.

How do Uchiha arrange it? This is the biggest contradiction in the whole series. Who is the heroine? Is it Tsunade? If so, I will chase her.

Sorry, I'm stupid, I clicked on this book. The main character's three-skin jutsu showed others that he was definitely not only a chuunin, but was also speculated to have awakened the Senju bloodline. It almost made me laugh to death. The author has never watched Naruto!

When I saw your cover, I didn't know if it was a hallucination or something, but I felt like I was looking at the cover of a book 🙂

Now I suspect that the author has not watched Naruto at all, but has read some noob fanfics! The Battle of Mount Kikyo was in the 50th year of Konoha, and it was the final stage of the Third Ninja War. The third battle you wrote about hasn't even started yet, so I'll just end it here. Can you look at the timeline when writing the novel? This is not how magic changes are done

It poisoned me to death. Chapter 1: Dissuade Me Obito and Shisui are in the same class. The timeline is so messed up. Chapter 2: Just teach Shisui. But that's a ninja school. You also said "That instantaneous body technique... Is worthy of the future instantaneous Shisui" and it instantly poisoned me This is obviously not something that a ninja school should master. It's like Naruto rubbing balls in the ninja school Minato used the flying thunder god directly at the age of 5 Metkai directly opened the door to death in the ninja school Konoha White Teeth used excellent sword skills to rival Jonin in the ninja school Shun Shen Shisui directly used Shunshen in the ninja school The young Kakashi directly used the Mangekyō Sharingan "I can't understand your brain circuit at all" I can't understand Naruto's timeline behavior like rubbing a ball directly in the ninja school. You can write it as you like. This is your freedom. Anyway, I have only read two chapters. It is my freedom to comment. I will just post my thoughts after reading it in the comment area. The timeline is the most taboo in fan fiction. If you want to write more happily, you can just make a hodgepodge of them, and it will be fine even if a little Naruto uses magic spells. Anything can happen in your writing, but I can't understand it