I Have a Volume of Huang Ting Jing

After reading it, I think it's okay. But there is still a problem. Take the protagonist's family as an example. In addition to being related to the city lord's palace, the strongest person in the family who can establish a foothold in the inner city is Gu Ying, a blood coagulation expert. Let's look at the martial arts gym where the protagonist is in. The master of the gym has great blood coagulation skills, and several of his apprentices have only minor blood coagulation skills. They can only stay in the outer city. In this world where martial arts is respected, this is a bit unreasonable. The only thing left is that there may be some typos in some chapters.

Are you going back to the same old routine and starting matryoshka dolls? Great achievements, great achievements, mid-term great achievements are simply disgusting. Is there still a later stage of great achievements, great achievements and perfection, half-steps to perfection, half-steps to perfection, and then perfection and so on. Damn it. Readers who see the following please leave a message. Are there any of these naughty things? If they are, they will run away. Who can withstand this?

Is this still positive energy? Randomly killing passers-by? The poisonous points of the article come one after another. Stop writing books, brother, and listen to this advice and do something else.

To be honest, you persuaded me to quit in the first chapter! The original article said that there are 100,000 people in the surrounding villages and towns, thousands of people can achieve the blood coagulation achievement, and about 50 people have internal energy. Then a servant who has not yet reached the level of blood coagulation can fight more than a dozen. Although the protagonist's family background is not bad, there is not even a single person in the family who is good at coagulation. I was speechless when I saw this. You, the author, don't follow any logic at all. It's very embarrassing.

As the title says, record every day of your life. See how long you can hold on. Let's also take a look at whether ten thousand days can change your destiny!

After reading it, please share your thoughts. First of all, the background setting of the protagonist's family is not very reasonable. With such a big business, not only are there no powerful warriors in charge, but there are also no collection of martial arts secrets. Later, I mentioned that the protagonist's family is related to the Chu family (it seems to be the city lord's family? I didn't pay special attention to it, it's almost the same). The key protagonist himself takes it for granted. He goes to the outer city to learn martial arts, collects martial arts and asks his friends to help. It is best to have a general description of the family's position, such as being a relative of the city lord, doing business under the care of the city lord, but having only money and no background.                                   Secondly, my sister was a failure. I almost deleted the book when I saw it. I felt that part of the plot was just like the plot of a bloody TV series. It was too haloed as the protagonist. I arrived at the most critical moment and carefully described how my sister was tied into a strange shape. It was very incomprehensible. Normally, the protagonist should not be from A good gay friend got the news that his sister was in contact with an alien ranger that the authorities were paying attention to. He was worried, so he secretly went over to take a look. He saw that the alien ranger was preparing to give his sister a smectant, and then kill him indiscriminately, so that his sister would have a long memory. As long as the fights and dialogues are well written, wouldn't they be highlights? The author explained that originally the sister subplot was intended to give the protagonist an opportunity, but then he didn't want to write it that way, and then it was written like this. The subway old man looked at the . Jpg on his phone and either cut off this subplot, or wrote it into daily life to teach the naughty child a lesson. Writing it like this really feels like a waste of food and a pity to throw away. In the end, the author wants to highlight how powerful the bosses of other small gangs or martial arts schools are. They can definitely learn from Tomato, separate the martial arts and martial arts, and have a blood coagulation master. If a certain martial arts master reaches the peak of perfection, he can master dozens of moves in the hands of a blood coagulation master. Or do something more mysterious, such as artistic conception, violent blood secret method, etc. If you master the level push at the same level, you can fight and escape by leapfrogging. Don't always talk about coagulation and blood coagulation, small success and perfection, and coagulation and blood coagulation, which made me think I was going to write something like "quasi-half-step peak perfection", so I almost deleted the book and ran away overnight.

Good guy? Start killing innocent people indiscriminately when you have some ability? If you want to kill the person who injured your senior brother, no problem. The problem is, if the other person is innocent, you also kill him? ? ? Cowhide,

When I saw the enlightenment, I felt that your book was not good. It was well written. If you suddenly poisoned it, it was probably a brain twister...

Author, you wrote Dacheng Ningxue in such a bad way, but there are thousands of people among 100,000 people. Even though the protagonist's family background is not bad, there is no one in the family, and I am speechless. Would you like to change it? It's really embarrassing to watch

It's really uncomfortable to watch. There is probably no outline setting or anything like that. It all depends on free play. There are only 100,000 people in the city at one time. Five thousand blood coagulation masters are very rare. Even the top families in the city can't afford to hire one. There will only be fifty in a while. They will break through and become one of the hundreds of thousands of warriors in the city. One percent, the nursing home beat up the old gym owner who was a master of blood coagulation. As a result, he needed to hire a master of blood coagulation from outside. In a city of 100,000 people, there are thousands of masters of blood coagulation. This ratio can be said to be all over the streets. Among the top martial arts schools, only the master is the master, and they rely on weak chickens to teach the strong.

When I read the title and introduction of the book, I thought the protagonist practiced the Huang Ting Sutra, cultivating all the body's apertures and countless body spirits. However, after reading more than ten chapters, there was no trace of the Huang Ting Sutra at all. There was only one called the Huang Ting Breakthrough Device, which has the same function as dark blue with a little gold finger. Let me tell you, the author, what you wrote is a bit inconsistent with the title and introduction of the book? Or did I read too little and didn't get to the point?

To be honest, the writing is okay, but can it take away the positive energy and classical fairy tales from the label? Although I will continue to read, Chapter 34 is actually a bit nauseating for me. Writing about darkness is acceptable, but I first read the book based on your positive energy label. Isn't this the Minotaur letting the Pure Love Party in to kill?

Just like the title! Collects immortals, Buddhas, characters, mythical beasts and monsters, introductions to strange monsters, and strange stories from ancient Chinese myths and legends. Ps: Original is the best. You can outline the fairy, gods and monsters in your heart and leave a message below. I will write it into the book! (Only subject to your consent!) Small requirements: Name (Western style is enough)—— Rough appearance—— Main abilities (and hobbies)—— Approximate personality—— [As the saying goes, all good and evil depend on what is right and wrong in the heart! It doesn't have to be weird, it has to be bad! So feel free to leave a message boldly! ! !

It's outrageous. With a population of nearly 100,000 and almost 30,000 adult males, there are thousands of people who have mastered coagulation. There is one person among several people, and no matter how you look at it, he doesn't look like he is very powerful.

Gain karma by killing weirdos? Why don't you change the word, or the Religious Affairs Bureau will get you into trouble?

It looks good, the only immortal in the world, the one hundred and eight spells of the earth evil Tiangang, the dual cultivation of immortality and martial arts, no female protagonist! ! ! Come on! ! ! !

What does the content have to do with the book title and introduction?

Come on, why are you changing your vest?

It's really disgusting. This level of coagulation is small, perfect, early, middle, and so on. It's really poisonous. Are you divided into more than a dozen realms in one coagulation stage?

I've always wanted to ask one thing, how do you do it? Twisting a great and upright religion into a demonic heretic, and thinking that it is justice. I've never liked it. Novels about Buddhism appeared at the starting point, because of all the novels, few people wrote them. That kind of religious flavor. The only situations that arise are fights, robbery, murder and arson, all kinds of evil. But it's okay. Taoism has been around for a long time, so it can be said that some of it is almost blackballed by people like you. It can be said that there is no way to clean up, and you guys still think this is justice. If those Taoist predecessors knew that there was a group of people who completely distorted their thoughts and actions and praised them, they would not be able to rest in peace.

The only genuine version I have ever chased, I will decide how much you write, and I will chase it till the end! 😁

Full ordered I still like to watch this kind of dark and unscrupulous drama for one's own benefit. At present, it is a bit less enjoyable. I hope the author can write better in the future, so that I can regain the feeling of watching Gu Zhenren before.

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