When I Woke Up, I Became a Disciple of the Sunflower Sect

Come on, author! ! Too short and not enough to watch! ! Very beautiful!

Why does every protagonist who travels to the world's number one have to have trouble with Hou Zhu, the brave god? There is no conflict of interest in the first place. The power struggle within the royal family has nothing to do with you as an outsider. You have come all the way to show off. Is it because you have to be against him as a last resort? The time traveler and Zhu Wuli couldn't get along. Is it because of his loyalty to the emperor? For the justice in your heart? The protagonist just jumped out and accused Zhu Ignorance of harboring evil intentions. I was really a little drunk. When I said this sentence, it seemed like justice was engraved on my forehead. Two words, I really think that I am an angel of justice, a symbol of orthodox imperial power. It is ridiculous. As for the three treasures that the emperor promised to him, you are so capable, you can just grab them, or help Zhu Wuwu ascend the throne and proclaim himself emperor. If you want to take a few pieces, you can't just take them. Even if Zhu Wuwu doesn't give them to you, can he stop them? In the dungeon of Time Travel, No. 1 In the World, Zhu Wuwu is completely reduced to a high-level monster and becomes a necessary tool for gaining experience. The same way of doing things makes all the time travelers look like they have one head.

I'm looking forward to watching Wulin Gaiden! At present, there is no such thing as Wulin Gaiden Mao! It's almost a hundred chapters!

I found that in this kind of martial arts, everyone likes to arrange a lot of martial arts for the protagonist. If this enemy cannot be beaten, change the martial arts. Why? Martial arts are good because of talent, not because of martial arts. One page of the book and one move will make the hero laugh from the beginning to the end. No one has changed it! Even if someone later learns something more powerful, they should still focus on their original martial arts!

Sorry, I haven't written about Wulin Gaiden yet. Author, please make it clear first. The people who read this book are basically for those who come to read this book, and you have written 100+ chapters. You haven't even seen a single hair in the Wulin Gaiden. And how many people who read Wulin Gaiden are willing to watch the intrigues and intrigues all the time? If you change the map, there will be new intrigues waiting for you. If you change the map, it will still be the same. People who watch martial arts all like the relaxed and joyful atmosphere. But what you wrote has too many calculations. The reality is already so difficult. Reading a novel is still like this. This is probably the reason why your writing is not bad, and the settings are not bad, but you have not achieved results. You have failed in positioning at the beginning.

An ordinary citizen travels back to ancient times, without a system or a golden finger. I'll give you this Sunflower Book, will you practice it?

The most annoying thing is that you smile bitterly when you see it. If you draw a prize, you smile bitterly. Isn't it okay to be disappointed? I can't stand it anymore after leaving

What kind of limited exemptions are there nowadays? I feel disgusted when I read the novel.

The writing is very good, the fighting descriptions are detailed, and the IQ of the supporting characters is also within the acceptable range. The problem with the book lies with the author. The title of the book and the author's hints from the protagonist made me think it was a daily novel written by a Wulin Gaiden fan, but it turned out to be a martial arts novel based on a light suspense system! ! ! The author's target audience is not clear, and sometimes the logic of the protagonist's actions or system is slightly inconsistent with the logic of the author's outline. If it weren't for their love for Tongfu Inn, many people might abandon the book, because I don't know what the protagonist is doing? Do you want to become famous and live your daily life, or do you want to become a legend in the martial arts world and rise to the top? It seems that the protagonist is in a whirlpool and cannot escape. In fact, the reader knows very well that the protagonist can escape long ago by relying on the system. After all, he has no emotional ties, no imminent worries, and no grand ambitions. . . What is the role of the protagonist, a companion? ? ?

It's full of a sense of obsessiveness, and wherever you go you look like you're bitter and full of hatred, and the writing doesn't stand up to the character, with many flaws, but the general direction is okay. It was a readable version of the martial arts fan when it came out more than ten years ago, but now it's extremely toxic.

It looked okay from the beginning, IQ is online, and the plot development is also very reasonable. In recent chapters, it has become toxic since he went to Shangzhou to be the chief arrester. The plot development is inexplicable and too taken for granted. For example, Ling Tengyun inexplicably surrenders to the protagonist, and even does illegal things for the protagonist, avenges private revenge, and uses the six doors to eradicate dissidents.

Those who are bitter and resentful have the wrong mentality! Withdrawn

Poison... Can martial arts be improvised? The author usually survives in the jungle... While cultivating his internal strength... He has no ability to throw Xiao Feng into the Amazon rainforest.

The more I read, the less interesting it becomes. It's far worse than what was written in Wulin Gaiden. I'll keep it for now and see if there are other copies I like later.

What about Wulin Gaiden? Are you tired of fighting every day? Isn't watching Wulin Gaiden just to relax your mind? The villains are all bad and they stare at you every day and want to kill you. Forget it, when I see the pirated version, why don't I get out of here?

I admire this routine. It matches the protagonist one after another. I found it just like the Sunflower Book. After just one look, I felt that I could create my own martial arts.

The first world is passable, but the second one is unbearable. The Legend of Lu Xiaofeng is a series of separate movie stories, and there is no connection between them. If this world really existed, it would be impossible for Qingyi Tower, Qinglong Society, Red Shoes, Invisible Man, and Ghost Villa to appear one after another. It should be that you are in me, I am in you, and the East Factory and the West Factory will definitely be involved.

The author used the fairy tale perspective of Shushan to write the copy of Liaozhai, which made me nostalgic and surprised me. But the more you write, the more you pull yourself apart

It feels like a fantasy writing method wearing a martial arts skin. The beginning is a jungle survival trial with a fantasy routine, and then the points are ranked. The villain has someone above him in the sect. Then the villain pretends to be provocative at every turn, and then gives a vicious look when he is slapped in the face. You can replace the Sunflower Sect with any fantasy sect, or replace the internal energy with true energy, and there will be no sense of inconsistency.

The more I write about it, the worse it gets. The Western gods are very weak and cannot be shaken off no matter how powerful they are. They are combinations of desires that turn into rustics without faith. They are barbarian gods who do not talk about merit.

Call me when the new book opens 🙂

What red sleeve knife? What Acacia knife technique? This bitch is so cute. Isn't it nice to listen to the spring rain in the small building all night? Isn't the eight movements of Ruyi Tianmo chain delicious?

This book actually has little to do with the group of people at Tongfu Inn. Alas, I thought it was a fan of Wulin Gaiden.

Why do I like to write about a world view that mixes things with things? . .

All I can say is, it really doesn't look good.

I didn't read it, but I took a look at the introduction and asked, is it the Little Sunflower Mother Class?

I feel like martial arts writing still has that flavor, Xianxia is a bit too crotch-heavy, and isn't he the strongest man on earth? Isn't Li Xiaoyao delicious? Suddenly switched to the perspective of Liaozhai. It feels like I've changed a book

I have finished another book that I can read, Spread the flowers🎉

Martial arts is in decline. Is there a protagonist who is very powerful but is too weak to abuse the protagonist? The various layouts are linked together, and I can't solve the puzzle even if I subscribe to less than one chapter. Come quickly,,, I don't even want to skip reading, it's all water now

Martial arts is in decline. Is there a protagonist who is very powerful but is too weak to abuse the protagonist? The various layouts are linked together, and I can't solve the puzzle even if I subscribe to less than one chapter. Come quickly,,, I don't even want to skip reading, it's all water now