Comprehensive Martial Arts: Starting from the Jinyi Guards School Lieutenant

It's too watery, I have to say the same situation several times. A situation requires several articles to explain, all of which are explanations.

The more you write, the worse it gets. Out of the 200 chapters, only 4-5 are the best, and the rest are all rubbish.

There are too many irrelevant contents, it's watery, it's too watery!

Just cut it, don't talk about balance. Highlighting one item is like a sword manual to ward off evil spirits. Balance the four dimensions, just like the Zixia magic skill. In the early stage, twenty people have already hacked you to death, so there will be no future. . .

It's embarrassing to look at adding points. Either the direct attributes are withdrawn, and it's unclear whether the number in the brackets is the total number of points added or the points added each time?

What does the court need? Talents are needed, and it is difficult to select talents from the ordinary world, and imperial examination selection also has limitations. In the world of martial arts, isn't it difficult to choose? Join the imperial court as a temporary worker and give you low-level skills. Once you become famous, you can become a regular worker and receive better training. Sects and sects cannot compete with the imperial court because they are not as rich as the imperial court. They can only educate elites in small classes and cannot select talents on a large scale. The imperial court ensured its military superiority through large-scale selection of talents, so that it could collect taxes from the sect families and force them to back up their family martial arts to the imperial court. This is the normal world view, and in the world of comprehensive martial arts, several imperial courts are bound to engage in arms races. You don't have an army of 50,000 soldiers with basic internal strength. How can you, the emperor, sleep at night? Aren't you afraid of being destroyed? If you don't have a great master to guard the capital and guard against masters from other countries carrying out beheading tactics, can you, the emperor, sleep well? Online novels must first structure the world view and then arrange the plot. To make dumplings to make vinegar, I can only write short stories. Only those who have performed meritorious deeds can gain internal strength. This is an analogy to modern society. When you join the army, you have to achieve third-class merit before you can be equipped with a gun. Isn't that funny? The nature of a gun and internal force are the same, they are a guarantee of force. In a world of martial arts, Jin Yiwei, who has no internal strength, do you think you are an urban management officer? Only dealing with ordinary citizens who don't know how to do martial arts?

It's good for ordinary people in modern times to be able to enter (Jinyiwei) and eat public meals, but in ancient times, it was still a world of martial arts. If there were still golden fingers, it would be too stupid and cheap to become a Jinyiwei! Why treat yourself as a dog when you can be a human being!

Rubbish, everything will collapse in the later stage, and all the green bamboo men will become masters, and masters are like Chinese cabbage

The start is disgusting. The protagonist of "Two Generations of Jinyiwei" is almost living as a beggar, and his martial arts only has a scumbag sword technique.

Chapter 4 retired. The most powerful empire in the Shenwu Continent is the Ming Dynasty. There are wars on all sides and the underlying economy is unstable. Is there a master hidden in the palace that even the emperor doesn't know about? He also established an organization and became as rich as anyone in the country?

I can't stand it when I see Chapter 25. The protagonist of Shark Arm has system space and no brains. Those four teammates are really unlucky for eight lifetimes. They met you Shark Arm. No wonder the whole family was killed in the previous life. It's strange that the whole family is not dead because of this virtue.

This book can contain hundreds of pictures. Everyone here is responsible.

The more I read, the more rubbish I saw. I became addicted and couldn't bear it anymore. Delete books.

The plot design problem is too big. Even if the system allows you to cause trouble, you, a low-grade Jinyiwei Xiaoqi, will find a powerful prince who can't even be an emperor from the beginning, and rub their faces on the ground. Who else will die if you don't die?

I saw Chapter 258 again. The author couldn't walk when he saw a woman, right? A good novel must contain some disgusting jokes.

After reading the first chapter, I didn't want to read it anymore. It added a lot of nonsense just for the sake of water, and it didn't read smoothly.

Saw Chapter 247. I personally think your book is rubbish.

This kind of author, if you go back ten years, you probably wouldn't have even looked at him at the beginning.

You can't watch this with your brains in mind. In the capital city of the Ming Dynasty, hundreds of people were taken over by the protagonist's system, and there wasn't even a splash.

Abuse mainstream novels. Whoever wants to watch it?

Oops, another space volume is measured in square meters. Am I out of date? Have the area and volume calculation methods been interchanged?

This system is a mess. I would like to teach the author a lesson. The simpler the system, the better it can be understood at a glance. It also has storage space. This kind of thing is very poisonous.

Rubbish novel. One sentence is repeated over and over again.

Pooh! Waste of my time! It's the law of immortality of women and the script of gay men but not gay women again! ! ! 🌶🐔

Why is the author obsessed with Hokusai? Is power so attractive to you?

The first chapter is about poisoning. Five vegetable bags cost thirty or forty cents. In the second chapter, one catty of rice costs more than forty cents. What did the author think?

I couldn't stand it in the first chapter, half of it talked nonsense about how miserable my previous life was.

This chapter is really bad, really rubbish.

There are a lot of typos, but the author just won't correct them. If you want to eat them, you can try them.

There is only one sentence in this long chapter: Bei Yuan conspired to plunder before withdrawing his troops. ． ．