I Play the Sims in the World of Cultivating Immortals

Don't rush to write a novel first, write a diary and essays first, learn how to express what's in your heart, and then talk about the novel!

Although the imagination is great and the conception is wonderful, the expression is a mess and not smooth at all. The author can learn from it. I was forced to poach the evil god's corner.

What is the file reading margin? Now it's simulation, now it's loading, and now it's reality. The timeline is so confusing.

What is the use of adding this sister? There is no need to add this sister at all

I haven't read the book, but after reading the introduction, I didn't want to read it. Supreme Blood, Rebirth of Reality, this one is so shitty. Goldfinger was discovered and I had no motivation to read it. The Fox Lady Supreme is even more disgusting.

There is no need to read this novel because I finished it after reading the introduction.

It's inconsistent. My sister turned into a zombie in the front because of the big formation, and then turned into a powerful person who can control space later? The great power that controls space is not immune to a formation aimed at mortals, right? If others don't like my sister, you can just send a master to take her as a disciple and train her, and you will be wrong.

Simulation after simulation, and when the book was finished, he archived it and found that his father had not put down his hoe.

Author quick update

In this book written by the author, the world of immortality is like a prison and a dark forest.

Deal with that Taoist priest. Didn't I already write about how to kill them both? Just pay the Taoist priest to catch the ghost, let the ghost kill the two Taoist priests, and then go to the Taoist gym to get the exercises. If you hire someone to catch ghosts, you have to go along with them yourself.

The subject matter is great, and the early opening is exciting, but unfortunately the writing is terrible and too messy! It feels like you are just letting yourself go and don't care about your grades at all.

The author clearly wrote well before, but by chapter 32 it started to be inexplicable, inconsistent, and messy. Before chapter 32, the idea was clear, the theme was clear, the positioning was clear, and the plot was okay. It can be regarded as top-level luck, and it has been practiced quietly for thousands of years. After chapter 32, it no longer works. After Chapter 32, there is no theme anymore.

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style is a bit poor. I hope the author will read it again after finishing it, sort it out before posting it, especially now that a new book has started, and it will be difficult to attract people by trying to persuade people to give up.

Everything else is fine, but the division between monsters and immortals is too g8 stupid.

The plot is quite to my liking, as long as it doesn't feature a female protagonist... It would be great to continue the plot as it is. I'll start a new book soon.

The introduction is confusing enough that I can't even understand it after reading it over and over again.

I don't like the waste stream, so bye bye.

. . I added the bookshelf the day before yesterday and started reading it yesterday. I finished reading it today and realized it ended 8 days ago. I should have known better than to read it. In fact, the early writing was quite good, but then I let myself go.

This kind of book can be used as a poison. If I really can't understand it, it's just corrupt.

I feel like the protagonist is like a pervert

The author's operation of deducing phenomena backwards from the results and then directly deducing the results from these phenomena that can deduce a lot of possibilities was originally acceptable with the simulator, but after adding a lot of restrictions to the simulator, it became very subtle. The next one may not be reliable and it will become bad. When the heroine appears, the theme will be meaningless.

I was finally moved once, but you made me lose so completely.

It was well written at the beginning, but quickly fell apart later on.

Daily drug guide, recommend a eunuch's book to me.

The writing was actually pretty good at the beginning, but as the worldview got bigger and bigger in the mid-term, I knew there might be a problem. It was really difficult for a new author to grasp such a big worldview, and the bosses came one after another. Even though the sister boss hadn't been solved yet, another one came, and there was no need to solve the golden finger. You can leave it alone in the early stage, and now it's even connected. I want to fly before even leaving the Novice Village, and it's obviously a simulator theme. As a result, all the characters in it are better than the golden finger described in the title and introduction of the novel. Obviously, most readers are here for this, but the theme of the novel is getting further and further away. Alas, the author sums up his experience. I don't know if you are still writing. I hope you can keep up the good work next time.

This is a good book if polished well. Some parts are not good enough. If you write and revise over time, you can write an interesting book.

Does the author have a group? I want to join the group

I was really surprised to see this book about cultivating immortals. It is different from the ordinary world of cultivating immortals. Just like mortals in the world of cultivating immortals, most of the characters are very selfish. The cultivating family slaves to mortals and the gods slave to the world. Dark Cultivation Novel

I'm on the street... There's no wood down there