Learning Magic at Hogwarts

27 New students? Slytherin only has 7! You'd be laughing your head off if you didn't add a "1" in front of that. The school has 7 years in total, and you've only got a little over 100 students in your writing. Hogwarts' demise is due to your writing 😅

The protagonist is utterly useless. He's portrayed as quite capable, but in reality, he's too cowardly to do anything. When Filch sets his sights on him, all he does is give him a cold, icy look, without any countermeasures. Even when Pippi bullies him, he just stares coldly without taking any action. This kind of complete waste is simply unacceptable. I can only say, author, please stop writing!

A common problem when writing Harry Potter fanfiction is that the plot becomes too mundane and lacks exciting moments. Having read over fifty chapters, the protagonist has hardly done anything interesting; he's just constantly interacting with others. He has some special abilities, but they hardly contribute to the protagonist or the plot. As a web novel fanfiction, it's too bland.

Oh, Dean, are there so few comments because Muggles can't see this book? That's so disappointing.

Can't the male lead have his own schedule? He's always with Eve at the beginning.

The author believed that looking directly at the basilisk would result in immediate death. Petrification occurred because the author indirectly saw the basilisk's glasses.

It's written like a cloud, with all the details drastically altered – what kind of nonsense is this? A snake with eyelids? Crossing the Black Lake is like crossing a river? Filch is a Muggle? A basilisk's gaze only petrifies? What the hell is this?

I was skeptical after reading the reviews, but after reading dozens of chapters, it really is nonsensical! The plot is deliberately obscure, and the characters are unnecessarily profound! I dropped it long ago.

The story was quite good before Eve appeared. But after she arrived, it felt a bit strange. The protagonist seemed to be instantly bewitched. On the train, Cedric greeted the protagonist first, and treated the other girl with indifference. Then, when it was Eve's turn, she took the initiative to greet her and introduce herself. Even at the dormitory, the protagonist introduced himself last.

The writing style is quite good, and I've been following it, but the biggest problem is that although it's fanfiction, the author seems like they haven't read the original work. Many common-sense settings are wrong, and the secondary interpretations are really awkward.