Learn Magic from Hogwarts

The writing of this book is very good, I have followed it, but the biggest problem is that it is a fanfic. The author gives people the feeling that he has never read the original work. Many common sense settings are wrong or the second setting is really awkward.

There's nothing wrong with the writing and plot, why isn't it popular?

My favorite Harry fan. Dumbledore is my favorite character, and this novel does not demonize or vilify him. The protagonist, Slytherin, has a cold personality and silver eyes. He became a disciple of Grindelwald, and the image of Grindelwald was also well established. I feel that Da Da has mastered the shaping of all the characters very well. What's a little bit poisonous is that the protagonist has a younger sister, who was born when the protagonist was four or five years old. I don't like children, nor do I like younger siblings, so I have serious reasons to suspect that the author has a sister or wants a sister😎😎

It's quite beautiful, please give it a thumbs up to the author.

27 Freshmen? There are only 7 new students in Slytherin! If you don't add a 1 in front of it, you will make people laugh to death. There are more than 100 people in the school's seven grades in total, and the collapse of Hogwarts is due to your writing 😅

The protagonist is very complex, written as if he is quite capable, but in fact he dares not do anything. When Filch targets him, he will only have cold eyes and no way to deal with it. Peeves also bullies him, with cold eyes and no action. All I can say to the author is stop writing this kind of rubbish. It's such a waste.

The problem that is easy to fall into when writing Harry Potter-themed fan fiction is that the plot is too routine, and there is nothing exciting about it. I have read more than fifty chapters so far, and the protagonist has hardly done any interesting behavior. He is just constantly interacting with others. Goldfinger and other things have appeared, but they have little promotion effect on the protagonist and the plot. As an online fan fiction, it is too bland.

Oh, Dean, are there so few comments because Muggles can't read this book? This is so disappointing.

Is it that the male protagonist can't have his own schedule? He's always with Eve in the beginning.

Author, looking directly at the basilisk is immediate death. The petrification was caused by indirectly seeing the basilisk glasses.

It's written like a cloud, why the hell have all the details been changed? A snake with eyelids? Crossing the Black Lake is crossing the river? Filch is a Muggle? Will the basilisk's direct gaze only turn it to stone? What the hell is this?

I didn't believe it after reading the book review, but after reading dozens of chapters, it was indeed baffling! The plot is mysterious and the characters are sophisticated! abandon early

It was pretty good to write before Eve came along. Ever since she appeared, I felt a bit strange. The protagonist seems to be instantly charmed. On the train, Cedric greets the protagonist, Cedric first. It was also a cold attitude with another girl. Then when I arrived at Eve, I took the initiative to say hello and introduce myself. Even when they arrive at the dormitory, the protagonist finally introduces himself. The suddenness was very serious. Then when I arrived at Hogwarts, I did everything with Eve . There are obviously roommates, and the relationship between two of them is okay, but the protagonist is not with the same sex. Instead, he hangs out with Eve every day. The two met on the train, and their relationship is not deep. I'm not talking about anything else, I'm talking about the sense of dissonance, you know, the sense of dissonance. Then from Eve's side, she established a dominant relationship with her roommate, and two girls followed her. As a result, she asked the two girls to go first and be with the protagonist. The first time can be understood as wooing, but the result is the same every time, and they are inseparable every day. It can be said that both people are already in a leadership position when eating, but what about other times. Like the protagonist inviting her to the library to do homework or something. It's the two eleven-year-old children in the HP novel who are suspected of dating. If this was a high school and college novel written by a female protagonist, and the female protagonist hangs out with the male protagonist every day and is misunderstood to be together, you wouldn't feel much about it. But these are two children, they are only eleven or twelve years old and have just entered school. It feels very uncomfortable to write a plot like this. Finally, let's talk about the character Eve. She has a serious feeling of being pendant in front of the protagonist. The kind that the protagonist is with her every day and can't live without. But what is her role? The protagonist teaches her how to do her homework. It was to pull her away from danger when Peeves was causing trouble. It was Eve's provocation that caused Gryffindor's dissatisfaction with Slytherin. The two houses almost fought over the reason of "Quidditch". In the end, Eve's nod led to the inexplicable accusation of "targeting Gryffindor".

The first is the issue of magic power. In the original novel, no one ever ran out of magic power. They talked about the strength of magic power, but it is true that none of them lacked magic power, and the protagonist's magic power was not enough as long as there was something wrong with it. There is a plug-in that records a lot of magical knowledge in other worlds, but it basically has no reflection. Except for magic circles and enchantments, the original magic of Harry Potter can basically be used. Also, your magic setting is too soft. If you use fire to defeat the dark wizard, your robe will be set on fire. Later, the magic of fire is used to set the clothes on fire, and the expressiveness can be stronger. You haven't done anything about the protagonist's magical power. The original Harry Potter books were not enhanced because the enhanced magic is easy to send through magical transformation. You have a different world's cultivation method. Needless to say, there is some star magic, which says it has a lot of magic power, but you haven't practiced it either. You said that the protagonist is learning knowledge, but you don't even have enough magic power. What are you doing? Just to sigh when something goes wrong. I know some awesome magic that can solve the problem, but I don't have magic power. Do I need to use a risky method? I don't believe that in a different world with different magic systems, all warlocks rely on blood and long bodies to increase their magic power. You can either say that there is no cultivation method to increase magic power, or you can let him practice it, and don't write it down and not practice it. It makes people think that you are deliberately suppressing your fighting power. The protagonist knows the danger and needs to make equipment but forgets to take it with him when he goes out. He knows that magic power is insufficient and magic can solve the problem but he never practices it. The magic he uses cannot reflect the power of magic in other worlds. The magic system has a limit and kills gods. As a result, the attack magic you use can only hit people's clothes. Normally, there is no shortage of magic power in the school. When brewing potions and using magic power, there is no shortage of magic power. But when fighting two or three magic protagonists, they have insufficient magic power! Do you want to do this? Author, I think you write so well that I am willing to write such a lot of words. I hope you can solve these problems. Or make him reasonable.

If the daily life is too bland, it will be a bit boring. Eve has signs of a girl (she has a lot of roles), but I don't really like having female protagonists. I am a non-CP person, but she is very good-looking. Noah fits my image of a Slytherin male protagonist very well. He is handsome, powerful, endlessly knowledgeable, low-key, aura, not addicted to women, and will not mess with anyone who is short-sighted. Moreover, he also has a pet snake! Snake! It would be better if Eve were friends.

No, it's outrageous when it comes to pets. Even if you are a wizard, you shouldn't be like this, right? After saying not to bite people (to the little wizard), it is uncomfortable to bite people later (to Filch). Is this any different from letting a dog hurt people? Just because it's the protagonist's snake? Also, you all know it is a snake. On the train, people in the carriage say that they will not bite people when seen, and in the dormitory, they say that they will not bite people if they do not provoke snakes. This is as outrageous as a fierce dog walking on the street saying that it does not bite people and does not bite people if it is not provoked.

One of the reasons why this book is not very popular is probably that the character of Eve is really annoying. Sometimes she only considers her own preferences and has to force others to join her. She also plays a petty temper (Who gave you the courage? Liang Jingru?)

The heroine is Eve? It's better to be beautiful alone!

You are such a misunderstanding, and you said that taking a holiday in the first semester solved the problem. But after school started, you said that little wizards can't cast spells during the holidays, so they can only cast a few small spells. Am I wrong? Weird. However, overall it feels okay, except for typos, a lot! A lot of! Very much!

This style is very similar to , I really like it! Ignore those trolls, they only like to watch the stallion protagonist, and I have never really liked Hermione. Anyway, the author perfectly wrote the annoying girl in my impression. The protagonist's indifferent attitude made me get rid of the poison of those protagonists who like Hermione at every turn. I like it so much, I must write it down!

If the author were a little more generous in terms of the number of people in the academy, I believe there would be many more people reading this book than now.

Why do so many people spray it? It feels okay.

It's broken. I wanted to keep it for a while and watch it, but it seems I accidentally kept it to death.

After solving the Obscurus, it's time to start traveling! It's clearly written beautifully, but why isn't it popular? Ahhhhh!

This is the most vicious HP fanfic I've read recently...

This novel is readable, but there is too much nonsense. I don't want to subscribe directly and can only skip reading. It is good for sleeping.

Some Harry fans are too biased against the trio. It would be better for you to go independent and not be a trio at all. Moreover, the plot is too fast and the protagonist becomes invincible in the middle.

It's really okay to read it as a cool article

I was confused at the beginning. It started with the protagonist meeting someone who was suspected of being Voldemort inexplicably. Then it suddenly switched to a seemingly warm family routine. However, whether the protagonist was a time traveler, what kind of cheats he had, and what the family was like, none of these important information was explained! The scenes were cut too quickly, and there was no proper connection. It just seemed like it had no beginning and no end, and it was inexplicable...

After reading the book reviews, it seemed that the reviews were not good, but after reading it, I was pleasantly surprised 😁😁 The character of the protagonist is similar to Chi Feichi, who is liked by many magical animals, and there is no conspiracy theory about the principal. Thumbs up here 👍 The story is also good, I like the protagonist running around in a vest 🤭 There are too many other spoilers that I won't mention. However, the protagonists of this book are not very likable, and the protagonist is naturally not a nanny 👍 There is no female protagonist in this book, but Eve appears more frequently. To be honest, the protagonist pays special attention to things involving Eve. Many things depend on her, which makes me feel a little disgusting 😟 Overall, this book is great among HP fans, but I don't know why so many people criticize it? Is it just me who prefers daily writing? 🤔