Mythical Three Kingdoms: My Entries Improve Without Limit

I hope the author does this 🙂

I'm genuinely angry. The writing is so padded from beginning to end. I've read over 500 chapters; don't I have the right to criticize? I've held back for so long, but I just can't take it anymore. Sometimes I only read a whole chapter for less than two minutes before scrolling past it. Why? Because I can tell it's just dialogue. Do you think readers are idiots?

The protagonist's logic seems illogical. Shouldn't this kind of farming novel address the shortcomings by filling in the gaps? The early game progression is decent, and I can practice my skills. I calculated that upgrading Advanced Spearmanship requires 11,100 experience points, and at 1.5X speed, it takes 7,400 attempts. At one second per attempt, that's two hours.

The water is so turbulent, it's making my scalp tingle. Such a good subject matter is wasted. Sigh.

The more I read, the more tedious it gets. Author, are you deliberately creating conflict to pad the word count? You don't want Lu Bu, there's always this problem, that problem. It's one thing to imagine things, but constantly blaming this and that, complaining about your own inadequacy, and then looking for this and that.

Author, come in and take a look. Whether it's in the comments section or the book reviews, everyone's saying you're just padding your work; you should be aware of that by now. If you don't have an outline, organize it first before writing, and occasionally update in bulk.

So it's not the readers' fault; authors who get banned are just asking for trouble.

I tipped 200 just to say one thing: trash. 😅 The early game was excellent, but the later game was incredibly weak; the protagonist's bizarre gameplay was truly heartbreaking. Those who can keep watching are either elementary school students or experts with maxed-out poison resistance. (P. S.: As for why it's still an intern, it's because I read it on QQ Reading.)

It's almost chapter 180, and the timeline is still stuck here—it's so tedious! They've taken this long to write about just one village; who knows how long it will take to write about the rest! The plot is progressing too slowly.

The main problem is that some parts are too drawn out. If you're going to write a farming/development story, then write about farming; if you're going to develop the land, then develop it properly. Why make it so long-winded to recruit generals? Don't try to explain everything clearly. Skip some things if you can, and speed up the pace. Farming does take time, but the best farming stories aren't written day by day. Write with varying degrees of detail and brevity. The theme is quite good.