In My Leisure Time, I Became an Ancestor

It seemed pretty good at first, and very novel. But the further you go, the less you can stand it. The plot has no extension, and things are always repeated. I keep writing them in different ways, and it feels more and more dull. Not to mention the depth, it just feels like a child playing house when he was a child, still playing house when he grows up, and still playing house when he is busy with his career! People will grow. After years of experience, the personality and the way of doing things will change. Especially in this kind of immortal novel, as the strength becomes super strong, the mentality will be different. Moreover, the protagonist group has such a high force value and will go through various troubles. How can it be the same mentality as at the beginning! The characters are too flat and the impact of the development of the timeline is not felt. Of course, personal opinion, the author is great

If your book is a harem novel, arrange it as soon as possible so that I can get out of the trap. If you continue to be so ambiguous, it will be uncomfortable to watch.

It's not a cool novel, but it probably wouldn't read as well as it does now. I think this book is more readable than many cool articles. When you read it, read it slowly and don't read at a glance.

Um, is this novel only about women?

Why I like "Detective in the World of Film and Television" is because the protagonist is stable and rational enough, and did not reveal any flaws in the end, and the vest is interesting enough. I hope this new book can inherit the advantages.

After reading some reviews, what I want to say is that this book is really about casual farming, rather than those casual farming stories where the main line is still about killing and killing! In this book, fighting and killing are really embellishments in life! ! Some people say that there are too many elements in this book, but they are basically just background walls. Just look at it. The protagonist is just farming in a leisurely way! ! The protagonist's actions have always revolved around the main line. During the farming process, he slowly transformed the world! ! Um😓, change it if you can, the important thing is to feel comfortable, can't you? Time and opportunity are on the protagonist's side!

Let's make a complaint, there are still people who take the saying "Poverty makes you treacherous and wealth increases conscience" as the truth. Countless events in history tell us that the first half of the sentence may be true, but the second half is completely impossible.

The style of casual daily writing is paired with a shell of weird spiritual practice. If you talk about daily life, it is systematic. You can call it weird, but it's just daily making something to go around. Coupled with the system, the sense of accomplishment in doing things is also reduced. The author failed to find his own point, and wrote dozens of chapters of loneliness.

It's better to write an American variety show. The police detective is clever and powerful in solving crimes. Don't bother with it. There are many excellent materials in the American, British, Japanese and Korean dramas about police detectives. You can also open a poll in the group to see if you want to see how many of you write American variety shows.

The pace is very slow, and there is no main plot, which gives people the feeling of writing whatever comes to mind. After reading more than fifty chapters, I can sum it up in one sentence: There is a system, and you are farming (>_<)

I was convinced. When I read more than 60 chapters, I felt like I had ordered all the food and grass. However, in chapter 80, I opened a roadside stall and gave the alien species to the villagers. Didn't these villagers have the live alien species planted by Xiantian? If the government knew about this, wouldn't they kill the villagers in order to monopolize the alien species? This protagonist is still called a human being in two lifetimes, has he lived on 🐶? He didn't consider these things. If he didn't consider everything carefully before, how could he become so wise now? Doesn't he understand that even a common man is innocent and has a jade in his arms? I gave it up, and the ten yuan I ordered was used as a reward for the author to buy oryzanol to supplement his brain.

Guarding a group of women, eunuchs. Alas, I don't want to watch anymore

You are awesome. The first chapter was harmonized. I want to know what the content is. The new book has just been opened and DB has no time to save it.

There are very few books like this on Qidian. The plain and simple ones are the real thing. They are my cup of tea.

The character Xiaoman would be barely acceptable if it were set in a modern setting, but it would be awkward if placed in an ancient setting. Without mentioning the differences between men and women, just a word of "Lao Gu" instantly makes the drama... After reading so many ancient and fairy tales, I rarely see a name like Lao X...

There is no system for cultivating immortals, no spiritual fields for farming, they are just fantasies of the little eunuch before he starves to death⑧

What about the new book? Have you opened a trumpet account?

I just want to know whether the protagonist will receive it or not? Md If you want to write a novel without a female protagonist, don't surround the protagonist with a dozen women. If you want to write a harem novel, then recruit people into the harem! How many years? The protagonist's internal injuries have long since healed! These women are all interested in the protagonist, so why are they holding her back?

The main line is not obvious and can be plain but not boring.

Seeing that the protagonist in Chapter 150 is still a eunuch, I can't stand it anymore. I really can't stand it 😆😆😆. I've been putting up with you for a long time. Damn you damn eunuch 😆😆😆 Damn eunuch.

North American Detective, American Iai, is that you? There is a slight resemblance

What about the new book? Or what about the new account?

I have caught up with the latest update, let me know what you think. The first ten or so chapters are relatively compact, and after about twenty chapters it becomes a casual farming article. The author's writing skills are quite strong, and his driving skills are first-rate. It's almost like a behind-the-scenes sect, wearing a vest to travel around the world, while the main body is stable and farming. If you feel that the new book is too young, you can also read the author's completed Marvel fan fiction. His driving skills are top-notch, he can dominate the female CEO and transform into a female secretary in the office, he can also learn painting from a female artist, and he can also make people ghost while making cakes.

There are more than seventy chapters left. I originally planned to read it for a while, but I was poisoned by another book. I came back to relieve it.

It's been over a year and you still haven't written a book? ? ? No need to eat? ? ? Or did you say you found a job? ? ?

The bright moon shines in all directions in front of the bed, and you are the only one missing from the vote

Contribute a comment. According to the novels I have read for seven or eight years, this one is relatively leisurely and I can bear to read it. Maybe my knowledge reserve is not enough and I am a rough person, but I personally feel comfortable reading it. The casual novel is very good, there is weirdness but it is not the main thing. Unlike other weird books, it is about fighting monsters and upgrading to show off. It is boring to read more. Like casual books, as long as it is well written, you can never read enough. Maybe the reality is too tiring. I want to relax in the novel and imagine myself as leisurely and comfortable as the protagonist

Have you opened a trumpet account? Come back and write a variety show soon.

I have received the multi-player audio drama license for this book and it is in production. If you see the author, please contact me. Or if anyone can help me contact the author, Dad.

It's been 24 years and you still haven't had a break, okay?