Investiture of the Gods: One Hundred Thousand Great Luos at My Command

If you had 100,000 Great Luo Immortals undergoing the Investiture of the Gods, the Chan and Jie sects wouldn't stand a chance; it would all be a matter between you and the Heavenly Dao. 100,000 Great Luo Immortals cultivating once would drain the spiritual energy of the primordial world completely. The author seems to have some misunderstanding about the Great Luo Immortals; the Great Luo Immortals of the primordial world are all well-known figures.

A woman appears in every three chapters. Do authors on Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) not know how to write novels without women?

The beginning was fine, but the plot about Nezha being captured at Chentang Pass was just ridiculous. Please give me a reason why he absolutely had to be captured? Don't you know how to develop your abilities discreetly? You're making sworn brotherhood with Yun Zhongzi and showing off your supernatural powers, as if you're afraid others won't know you have cheat codes?

"An incompetent general can bring ruin to an entire army"—how dare you? Just because you have good cultivation talent, you dare to immediately let a female slave command an army of ten thousand? These soldiers are your cheat codes! Don't you feel bad about them dying? At least give them some talent for generalship or command!

In this light novel, as part of the prehistoric world, innate spiritual treasures are incredibly common in the Investiture of the Gods. After all the protagonist's subordinates reach the Qi Refining stage, they each acquire two innate spiritual treasures. Then, upon encountering Deng Chanyu, her five-colored stone also becomes an innate spiritual treasure.

Here it comes! This one's going to be super exciting and awesome!

This setting is utterly ridiculous! The Jade Emperor has been cultivating for over two hundred million years, and his physical constitution probably doesn't even reach ten million. This protagonist, leading 100,000 soldiers, can cultivate for a few decades and become a Jade Emperor? He expects the Jade Emperor to carry his shoes after a hundred years of cultivation?

I really don't understand what you wrote. You offended the Chan Sect, the Jie Sect, and the Shang Dynasty, slaughtered humans, yet you yourself are a human and even became sworn brothers with the Chan Sect. This is very confusing.

He'd already become an immortal, yet he only had a lifespan of 23 years; he just died.

Of the three second-generation descendants of the three religions, only one is human, the others aren't. Don't sit on the wrong side.