My Sword Thirsts for Blood

The author has a good writing attitude and it can be seen that he really loves it. But don't care too much about the readers' opinions, keep writing with your own ideas. We read your book because we are moved by your words, not by others. Keep your pace and don't rush. Like you said. It's a success if it doesn't collapse. As a reader, my biggest expectation is to see a story with a beginning and an end.

It's very cool, and it's very well written. Personally, it doesn't feel good that there are bloodthirsty cursers other than the protagonist in society later. I personally like the one-of-a-kind kind, that is, I like the kind where only the protagonist has a golden finger and the outside world doesn't know about it. Personal opinion, it doesn't matter if the author insists on writing it, I just mentioned it casually.

Thank you all so much for your advice and encouragement. I have gained a lot of collections in the past two days, and I am very happy. About the works, some book friends asked if there are other works. Sorry, there are no other works. I will only have other works after writing this book, because I think writing novels is very interesting, and I will continue to write, haha About kendo, this kendo is not that kendo. In order to facilitate the development of the plot, the kendo comparison in the book is The rules of the competition are also completely different from those of real-life kendo competitions. Please don't care about my tricks, thank you 🌹 Regarding Xu Fei's Golden Finger, I have read many novels on this theme, most of which have no ending or are unfinished. I am full of resentment, so I have the idea of writing one myself. I am fully prepared, so you don't have to worry about me not being able to finish writing or the combat power system collapsing. In addition, I can't answer the question about my own method that everyone is currently concerned about, because answering it will spoil the story. I can only say that please rest assured that this question will not reduce the fun or write a big fight Finally, newbies and new books really need support. Every comment and suggestion from everyone will give me motivation. I am really grateful to you. I hope you can support me and share it with fellow book friends. Thank you ❤️

It's well written. I'm really lucky to have found this book among all the hydrology books. The writing is fluent and the IQ is online. To me, it is like fairy grass. I hope the author will continue to write. I don't ask you to update, but I don't ask you to do it. Take care of yourself (Chasing Reincarnation Paradise has chased out the psychological shadow)

Can you please forget about your broken betel nut? It has nothing to do with the plot, it just has to be mentioned as disgusting, right?

It captures a creative idea of ​​attacking with soldiers, and it is an armored attack, so it looks good. As a newcomer, the writing is quite smooth, the pace of switching between time travel and reality is okay, and the suspense setting of the different world is also quite good, making people want to read it. However, there is a lot of pressure to survive in another world. The protagonist needs to grow up quickly. In reality, his strength needs to be suppressed otherwise it will arouse suspicion from people around him. Moreover, the protagonist is in an environment where he is temporarily unable to come into contact with powerful bosses. Therefore, how to achieve a balance of simultaneous strength improvement in the two worlds will test the author's writing skills.

I saw a book that relied entirely on hard work. It wrote more than 2 million words in two updates every day, and even double-digit subscriptions did not give up. If you let him know about this situation, he would probably jump off the building on the spot and be unable to hold it back. The newlyweds opened a book with 4,000 orders, and unexpectedly met Kavin who asked for a eunuch... There was no one left.

The key point is too obvious, and the reason for being late is too ridiculous and childish. It is impossible to even give an explanation. The original article may only use "overslept" to describe it. Just like when I went to another world one night and "disappeared" and my aunt called the police (seven or eight hours in one night did not meet the standards for accepting a missing person case), the protagonist or the author could not explain the reason at all. It seemed stiff and deliberate. A good card point should be based on the plot. Just give me an analogy. For example, you can meet a vampire on the way to the gym, attack someone or Jiang, draw your sword, wait for the opportunity to act, grudge and grudge, learn a little bit about the origin of reality and the other world from the vampire, kill him quickly, delay a little time here, injured his right arm, bandage it with a cloth, and then the taxi driver who saved his life drove him to the gymnasium with a speeding ticket, or the previous chapter can be because of the vampire incident and There is a certain connection with relevant figures in official organizations (actually, there is no such thing. The protagonist is only obsessed with exploring other worlds and does not take the initiative to solve real-life crises). This time, he saved the lives of several policemen on the long street. The traffic police took the initiative to drive them to the gymnasium. Later, he was awarded an honorary citizen, which can also add a little more force. Finally, one person and one sword entered the gymnasium with a bang, participated in the kendo final, and staged an astonishing drama of a lone swordsman and the return of the king. The author always leaves the vampire branch as if it will be written later, but it also gives people a dragging feeling. Sometimes the dark and murderous writing style is much more comfortable to deal with. Never mind him, just kill him and that's it! The readers enjoy it and the author feels comfortable writing it. Of course, this metaphor was mentioned casually in a short period of time, and may not be suitable for this novel, but in general, I think that the coincidence in this plot cannot be classified as a reason that is too childish, very ridiculous, and completely unworthy of such a result. "Overslept again and again", and I was late when I saw that the previous chapters had not been changed. At the time, I thought it was too deliberate and treated me like a fool. If this had appeared in novels 10 years ago, it might not have mattered because not many people wrote it at that time, and there were relatively few novels read at that time. But nowadays, people have abandoned this kind of thing. There are hundreds of readers reading novels. What routines have I not seen before? So when writing, the author should strive to be smooth and error-free, and do not easily write things that he has not written before, is not good at, and does not conform to the style of writing. If he does not have enough writing power to control, or has made long-term preparations in the early stage, do not forcefully add parts, especially parts that he is not good at. First of all, the subsequent plot was assigned to a supporting character who had not appeared a few times in the early stage. I didn't even remember the names of two of the supporting characters when I saw this. The coach's tactics of using defense instead of offense and dragging tactics are for the victory and honor of the entire team. The author's description here makes it seem as if the coach's tactics have harmed the interests of several other people. Now he describes Zhou's inner drama in a large section. The supporting character Zhou wants to show his youthful style and realize his life dream in the finals. His approach can be said to be very juvenile but also very childish, and he has no idea of his own strength. He has enough understanding and underestimates his opponent. He is only a third-level swordsman and has a high chance of losing. This also shows his stupidity and stupidity. As a reader, I felt very inexplicable when I saw this. The overall style is not that of a light novel. Suddenly, there is a passionate expression of the second level, and the description is too deliberate. When the two are added together, it becomes a bad bloodbath that gives readers a bad feeling. Secondly, the author may want to describe the spirit of kendo. The spirit of the sword has many meanings - tenacity, gentleman, cutting everything, piercing thorns, self-improvement, etc. But it can be completely changed. Moisturizing things are hidden silently in the plot details and stories. There must be foreshadowing bit by bit. There must be small stories and small details one by one. This kind of spiritual world view and values ​​​​are piled up and then there is such a passionate explosion of the second grade. This is because the previous emotional foreshadowing is in place and can make the readers empathize to this moment. This is called the climax of the novel's plot. In many novels I have read before, some of the excellent descriptions are that the description of a supporting character or the protagonist is not so deliberate. Some are about idleness and playing with the world, some are about diligence and perseverance, focusing on something, and some are superficially jolly. He doesn't care about anything, but actually pays a lot for his brothers... The value of such a description lies in the long-term accumulation and detail preparation. Gradually you fall in love with such a character, and in the middle or later period, you suddenly write this character to death, and I couldn't help crying in that chapter. For example, "The Immortal Rebellion", "Wreaths Under the Mountain", "Never Decrypted", etc., There are also several fantasy fairy tales, military books, books that travel to the 1960s, and anti-Japanese books. I can't remember all the names at once. Some of them were read a long time ago. I would have cried at that time, but I may not cry now. But I can clearly realize that it was because I was immersed in watching it that it didn't feel abrupt and deliberate, but I enjoyed it. Gradually, the emotions were in place. The detailed description and foreshadowing of this character had enough partial background, so that I could empathize with that emotion. Thirdly, the author may still want to make a group drama and describe the supporting characters with flesh and blood. But this is the test of writing skills. If you don't make a good outline and detailed preparation in the early stage, you will not seriously portray such a character in the previous 70 chapters. At least when I was reading, I did not feel that this supporting character was vivid, and there was no implicit or explicit foreshadowing in this regard. Nowadays, Internet articles are like this. Since it is difficult to write all the supporting characters well, then everyone should deal with them in a stereotyped and clichéd way. Even the books written by the great gods are written in this way. The only difference lies in the quality of your clichéd and clichéd descriptions. There was a fat man in the earliest "Ghost Blowing the Lamp", who was very outstanding and hard to forget. Later, in "Tomb Robbers Notes" by Nanpai Sanshu, such a classic golden supporting role of Fatty was also added. They are all fat men, and they are both supporting characters. It is not because of the homogeneous and stereotyped character settings. Instead, they are very brilliant. Many readers like Wang Kaixuan and the Mojin trio as well as Fatty Wang and the Iron Triangle in Tomb Robbers Notes. In online novels, 2 million words or at least 1.6 Million words must be used to describe the protagonist. It is easy to write against the routine and either become a god or a general manager. And it's too easy to lose readers. If the author wants to write the supporting characters well, there is an author named Ye Yu Piao Deng. In several books he has written, not to mention how brilliant the supporting characters are, there are always remarkable points. Moreover, the writing style is sophisticated and the emotions are in place. No matter what plot or plot, he can control it with ease. Above. Good writing is not easy.

I would like to give you a suggestion. Since you emphasize that it is not an island nation's kendo, don't keep using bamboo swords and basically change them to wooden swords. No one has any use for that bamboo sword except the Japanese. Words like kendo are also rarely used. Your idioms in wording and sentence making are completely the result of watching too many Japanese anime and can't change them. What is cultural invasion? This kind of subtleness that is not even easy to detect by yourself is the real cultural invasion.

Thank you for teaching me a lesson. I will give you the monthly pass and the automatic subscription is on. I am afraid that I will die. The result is like this. I gave up even if I ordered 3,000 yuan, but others insisted on 500 yuan. Thank you for teaching me a lesson.