When League of Legends Comes to American Comics

The more I read, the more pretentious and pretentious I feel. It must be a matter of writing style. I'll look through some old books.

First, let's talk about the experience of reading a book. The plot is incoherent and jumps all over the place, making it very tiring to watch. Personally, this allows me to skim through the page, quickly flip through the pages, and find what I want to see. Writing. To be honest, the writing style is not bad, at the level of an average author. The problem is, the author wants too many things, and some of them cannot be balanced. Whether it's dialogue or combat, there's something mixed in that doesn't go smoothly. It would be a pity to throw it away, and it would be tasteless to eat. A little suggestion. First the main line, then branch lines. The main line makes people want to watch it, and the sub-lines can make the characters fuller. Only by complementing each other can we go far. Don't delay the plot. Sometimes you really need some writing formulas. When to be explosive and when to be depressed, just apply the formula and there is no shame. Meme! Geng, this kind of thing... Doesn't care about oldness, what matters is that you use it in the right place. Used correctly, it's a blast! Used incorrectly, embarrassing. 80/200... Is it suitable for a beautiful country? Supporting roles. Have your own ideas and your own story line. It must be able to connect with the pig's feet, and the logic must be clear at the very least. Kneeling and licking is no longer popular. Moreover, you, who earn 30 million per day, go out and give fake certificates to people by yourself? Description. Conversations between characters and descriptions of battles can be mixed in, but the readers must discover them on their own rather than being forced into it. Mix in some little things. You have to drink soup to eat steamed buns. Do you think so? Of course, adding things does not mean you are procrastinating. While it's still early, change it if you can.

The writing is pretty good, but the more I write, the more chaotic it becomes. There are transitions here and there, here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and now here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and now here and there, and now here and there, and now here and there, and here and there, and now here and there, and now here and now, and here and there, and here and now.

The writing is quite good, but it is too messy and the transitions are inconsistent. When I turned to the next page, I even thought I had missed a few pages. And at the end of each chapter, there are a few sentences from the author saying, "For people like me who listen to books, the senses are really bad It's tasteless, it's a pity to throw it away.

It's well written, but the plot is not very coherent.

The first 30 chapters basically have nothing to do with Marvel. They spent too much time writing things that have nothing to do with the title of the book.

Why is the name of the tavern not called Chivalrous Tenderness?

The hero Yongen was released too late. Many people no longer play LOL. His popularity is not very high. I should write a story that everyone knows.

Come on, two million words a day

There are three or four men in one scene. Author: That Man. So who is that man? Which one are you referring to?

Very good. Why can't you sign the contract?

Let's re-open another book. This is the subject matter. Many people like to read it. If you write well, the results will not be much different. Just abandon this book. The early stage is too toxic.

Today, with this familiar writing style, it turns out that the author is Pang Tongmao.

If you want to see any heroes appear, you can leave a message here!

Can the plot be written more straightforwardly? Everything is described in various ways.

The author's writing style is very good, the plot is also very coherent, and there are basically no poisonous points The characters and heroes who have appeared have their own personalities so far. So far, the writing is very good. Recommended 🎁 There are just too few. I can only guess that it is a group portrait article? (Because the character's personality and thinking are handled very well in the book) But I can't guess the general framework. Here are some suggestions for the author: 1 As the plot progresses, more and more heroes will appear in Marvel and LoL. The author should spend time studying the characters of the heroes (because every hero has fans), and don't treat the heroes as tools. 2 For the same reason as above, the author needs to control the amount of pen and ink required for each character. Don't end up with a bunch of characters. You will be tired of writing and we will be dazzled by it. 3 Because there are two worlds, and because there are two worlds, the author must control the power system well. Finally I wish the author a great success❤️❤️❤️

Among the League of Legends fandom, in addition to the eunuch's portable League of Legends system and the League of Legends summoned from the next world, yours is the most comfortable to watch.

Suggestion post! Writing a book is not easy. If you have any suggestions, please give them! Thank you very much!

How is this book?

The back looks great. I give you 2 votes. I can dismiss my last comment, but I still suggest you change the front. The results should be much better.

I just realized that my post was gone, but the questions asked in the comment area were the same as what I originally said. Come on, author!

Strange: It hurts, it hurts too much 😏

Is there DC behind Marvel, or is it the merger of the two universes?

Enchantress can be the main villain. She wants to find a way to completely kill Mordekaiser in another world to win over and manipulate other villains.

I read Chapter 106 and I don't quite understand. Does it mean there is someone oppressing me in this world? ? ?

I have always watched pirated versions 😰 I just got on the train and paid for my ticket.

It's a mess, it's so messy, I don't know what I'm writing, can I write it clearly one by one? I was still fighting just now, but immediately Boss Liao started chatting. I glanced at each page, which made me want to read, but also made me resist. Maybe my level is limited and I can't understand it.