Marvel's King of the Undead

To read this book, you must first forget about the timeline of the original Marvel novel. A person like me who doesn't care can still read it, but those who are entangled, textual, and aggressive will probably die of discomfort.

This author has such a big heart and wants to connect all the story lines in the Marvel universe, and then it appears. Each story plot is very good, but when they are put together, there is a sense of tearing. The fighting scenes are very good, but there is a hot-blooded Japanese manga style, just a sense of passion, and it is over. The protagonist is also well drawn and has a charming personality, but I feel that there are some shortcomings that I can't say.

Similar people include Wolverine and Deadpool. . Wolverine at least still has claws and alloys. . But the protagonist seems to be just super resilient. . And strength and speed. . . It doesn't feel like there's much growth. . . It would be nice if there was a hand that could increase strength and speed during the month. . You are getting more and more tired in the later period. . . . Especially having to face it. . , Thanos. ,, Phoenix,, whatever

The reason why superheroes are called heroes is not only because they have superpowers, but also their spirit and their bravery and fearlessness are worthy of praise.

When I saw the King of the Undead, I rolled in. When I saw it wasn't Old Bones, I rolled out again.

If you have any comments or suggestions, you can express them at this level, and I will consider your ideas.

In Chapter 2, the black man is 2 meters tall and the protagonist is 1.8 Meters tall. Still stuck in an orphanage! ! Fighting over tasks to have food to eat, shit... You can make money just by serving dishes outside, right? The 1.8 Meter tall man is still living in an orphanage!

No, how come everyone becomes a superhero after joining Marvel? The American people need you?

Now when I see the King of the Undead, I think of fighting against the sky and the earth 😅

My thoughts so far This Marvel fanfic is one of the best ones I have ever read. First of all, the main character is a mutant and subsequently attends Xavier Academy for the Gifted, a subject rarely written about, which is fascinating. Secondly, there is no such thing as a system or a time traveler, he is just an aboriginal boy. Many American comic book fans, whether they are DC or Marvel, as long as they are time-travelers, have all kinds of conspiracies and plots, scheming people everywhere, and then showing off in front of the widowed sister Wanda. They are so low-key. In fact, the hearts of such time-travelers are already dirty. The protagonist of this novel is still growing up, has a clean heart, knows how to be grateful, thinks about his fellow mutants, and reflects on himself in failures. It's a little funny, but it made me laugh out loud and happy. Many of the interactions with friends in the college reminded me of my student days. In many fanfics, mutants are written as victims by the authors and used as a stepping stone for the rise of the protagonist. No one, including the X-Men, has written it well. But this book at least made me feel that the characters in it are flesh and blood and have their own thoughts, rather than purely serving the plot or revolving around the protagonist. There is nothing too unreasonable about the setting. It also describes the unity and cooperation of the team members and the combination of various abilities, rather than the one-man show of the protagonist. As for the poisonous point, I think since the protagonist has a super brain, he can change the setting of being unwilling to learn serious knowledge. Two or three sentences can be written in one sentence, such as the protagonist's super brain allowing him to complete the basic training course of an agent in a week, and so on. It would be more reasonable to exhibit Superman's super learning ability.

Tony becomes the protagonist's old father, and the protagonist becomes Spider-Man's old husband, so Spider-Man suddenly changes from a son to a grandson.

Those who saw the King of the Undead coming in thought that the old bones had been worn out again. . .

I was so angry when I saw Chapter 56. The little fat man can obviously hide behind the scenes and command, but he has to go on the scene to delay. If Captain America's command ability is 100 points, the male protagonist is 10,000 points worse. The male protagonist does not consider the personality and attributes of each team member at all. He takes care of every enemy he encounters, and perfectly displays the tactical concept of 1+1=0.

This is the first time I have been calculated...

Damn, Gu Aotian has seen too much. When he saw a king of the undead, he thought it was Gu Aotian. How could he break it 😂

They were all dragged into doing experiments, and they still had an attitude of being aloof from the world. I can't accept it

Damn, the writing style is so stable, it's actually the author's first novel.

My complaint is that although the book is quite interesting, can the protagonist not be too mentally retarded in the early stages? This is what i think

The name of this book was thought to be something like a necromancer or a skeleton, but I was a bit disappointed.

When I saw this title, I thought it was Bone King. . .

The writing is average, there are typos, and the language is not smooth in some places, but anyway, I quite like this style of writing. The author can try to describe the scenery, that is, to highlight the characters. Just like flowers with green leaves, the flowers will appear more beautiful. The protagonist can highlight the protagonist by describing some things from the side, such as expression, clothing, demeanor, and scenery, which can perfectly highlight a character. Characters, the psychological description of a character, is also very important. I think the author takes it lightly. Everyone has psychological activities. For example, they complain silently, feel a little bit in their heart, have bad secrets, are close to collapse, and almost have an explosion of mentality. There is no wave in the ancient well, there is a trace of anger in the heart, uncertainty, and murmurs in the heart. You can also describe the character's expression in detail, such as The head is black, the face is green, the brows are slightly frowned, the teeth are slit, the eyes are round, the face is ferocious, and the eyes are fierce. The main description is highlighted through side description. The author can try side description, which can make the character more vivid and vivid. In short, remember, side description can make the character more vivid. For example, if a person wants to poop, you can write about how uncomfortable he is holding it in. It feels bad. Interesting, you can try a profile description. The protagonist moved back and forth, his face turned purple from holding back, and he thought to himself, "Hold on, don't come out, my little ancestor." At this moment, my butt felt like a flood that had opened a valve. With a pop, the protagonist's pants changed color visibly to the naked eye. At this time, I only felt a stench coming. By describing it from the profile, I felt much better.

Come on author, although I haven't read it, I don't like Madonna novels when I read novels, dark wind is suitable for me

In fact, when I saw Chapter 20, I forgot that I came in after reading the title of the book.

When I saw King of the Undead, I thought it was a story about Gu Aotian's intrusion, but after reading the introduction, I thought it was. . . . It seems that Xiao Jianjian was created by this person?

Looking at the name, I thought it was Gu Aotian Marvel Game. . . It turns out it has nothing to do with Gu Aotian. This name is inappropriate.

I haven't read it yet. The author is great. Is the protagonist free, or does he have to obey the orders of the US government? Could he be like some Ultraman who were betrayed by humans but still want to help humans?

I am also convinced by this book, with more than 1 million words and 120 comments.

There seems to be a male protagonist in an American TV series named Wayne, who is very resistant to beatings.

Is this protagonist not a time traveler? ? ?