When Uchiha Finished Watching Naruto

It took a long time for the time traveler to die. I only watched it when the indigenous protagonist killed the time traveler.

Since the protagonist is an aboriginal, then rewrite the aboriginal. If you rewrite the time-traveler, you can still write it pretty well, but you will have to write him to death later. . . This time traveler is still the protagonist. The enemy is dead and the protagonist will not awaken the kaleidoscope. You are putting the cart before the horse. . .

The last few chapters have finally gotten on track. To be honest, this book deviates too much from the main plot in the early stage. Normally, the memory should be handed over within the three golden chapters, and then continue to develop downwards. Most readers come in for the title, but end up abandoning the book if they don't see what they want to read within three chapters. Most readers today are not that patient. The core excitement of this book is the changes in the Uchiha clan after getting the memories. I skipped many parts crazily before, but these few chapters have aroused my interest recently.

The reason for the poor score is that I knew that Dohara would die before even watching it, so the experience was terrible. . It's better to just play the main character Tuhara. . . Just write about how good Iwa Ninja is. .

Old fans are here to support! Uehara from Iwa Ninja Diary has made me miss him for a long time, and I'm very happy to see him again 😁

The book is good. Most of the recent Naruto books are cool. The realistic and detailed battles like this were from a long time ago. Come on.

To be honest, the author's writing style is indeed good. The early character descriptions and battlefield depictions are very detailed. However, the disadvantage is that the prelude is too long and seems a bit watery. Generally, readers are attracted by the title of the book and what they are most looking forward to is the change of the Uchiha clan after learning the plot. Or the protagonist changes his destiny and changes the destiny of the clan. The delay in entering the main plot will consume the readers' patience. Fortunately, it seems to be on the right track recently. I hope the author can control the rhythm well and give readers a better experience.

Let me go... Just read the introduction. Is it a reversal of the previous book? The protagonist Tsuchi accidentally killed Kazuya who trusted him. In this book, Kazuya became the protagonist after the death of his friend Tsuchi. Hahaha

It's really frustrating and the behavior is incomprehensible. The friendship with the time traveler is really outrageous. Kill all your teammates to restore the friendship. Regardless of priority, who is the protagonist, who is the supporting role, the protagonist Kazuya? You also wrote a lot about Uehara's psychology. The protagonist Uehara? You are doing a close-up of Kazuya again; the two protagonists also have to have priorities, you have to split it 50-50, which makes it uncomfortable to watch, and you keep describing it in unnecessary places. Kurama's genjutsu is emphasized from the beginning to the end, but it doesn't work. When the hostage was changed, he knew that the information was leaked, but he still changed his mind. Are you stupid? I'm speechless to negotiate with you knowing you have a gun.

Is the author really about to become a eunuch? I feel that the author is muddled in the content of recent books. If he writes like this, he will become a eunuch sooner or later 😰

It stands to reason that a book about aboriginal car-traversing time-travelers should be just for fun and selling purposes, but the description of time-travelers in this book is too good, showing the wisdom, courage, bad jokes, one's own incompatibility with the world, the novices in fighting and the whimsical ideas of using ninjutsu, and being ruthless when it comes to being superior. Brother! How great is this kind of writing to directly write about time-travelers! (ﾉ_ _)ﾉ

Novel setting, but the forward swing is too long

He is also a talent. If the time traveler is not the protagonist, then let him die quickly. In one war, there were more than a dozen pictures where the protagonist was still alive. When I looked at the catalog, I was like, holy shit. It took more than a hundred pictures for the time traveler to die and give the memory to Uchiha. At the end, he was resurrected.

In that chapter Uehara died? Please let me know! The author is really good at this. Just one sentence. I once had a trustworthy companion named Uehara with a strange mind. Before he died, he told me the future of the Naruto world. Now I want to change my family and the world!

Come on! Uehara is finally finished! So, Uehara is dead! He should stand up!

The protagonist of the previous book used it to worship God!

The writing is too long-winded. A pursuit battle similar to the prologue has more than a hundred chapters, and the whole book is going to have two thousand chapters? Three thousand chapters?

Ha ha! This is a series where time travelers die tragically.

The native protagonist is from Konoha, and the time traveler is the Iwa ninja. The two sides fought in the Kingdom of Rain, and then were surrounded and killed by the Rain Ninja. They united under pressure, and finally the time traveler was killed after almost escaping. During this period, the indigenous protagonist had just graduated from school and was very immature. The time traveler was the protagonist. During the escape process, the two established a friendship. The time traveler gave his memory to the indigenous protagonist before he died. At present, the time traveler has just died, and the natives were rescued by White Fang back to Konoha. Here, White Fang chased after him and seemed to kill all the remaining Iwa Ninjas. The natives have not checked the memories in the time traveler's body. In total, there were about 150 people, and in the end ten survived. Among them, the ten Iwa Ninjas who survived were killed by White Fang. The current content is very detailed and exciting. For example, the Konoha ninja saw White Fang coming and asked the Iwa ninja to run away. It can be seen as a prequel. The natives died carelessly, because they were accidentally killed by the natives because of the enemy's trick, and they were interrogated in Konoha and did not hand over the bodies of the Iwa-nin who died on the road. The natives and the surviving teammates should be prepared to secretly return the bodies to the Iwa-nin for the sake of friendship, especially the bodies of the key time-travelers. To say that this is unreasonable is actually a bit nitpicking. The writing is excellent, realistic, and logical. It is not a brainless piece of writing. It is worth recommending.

... There is definitely something wrong with you... If you want to write about pig's feet, then write about pig's feet well! What to write about Iwa Ninja!

Red leaves, also known as scarlet leaves

It's good if the protagonist doesn't die. Why should he die?

It's actually pretty good-looking, and the details of the battle are well written, so go to the author! ! ! Although many people give up the book after reading the first few chapters, don't forget that there are always people who support you. Don't give up and work hard to finish the book.

Jumping directly to the end, I felt that the ending was rushed and very didactic.

I've written half of it, but the gift package hasn't arrived yet.

A chase station was written to be released on the shelves, which is really awesome, but the plot has completely stalled, and this is going to hit the street.

I skimmed through it, but I didn't finish the free chapter. Combining the title/introduction/table of contents and character cards, I learned that the time traveler was dead, and showed the memory to Uchiha. I would like to ask the author whether he will become a traveler in the future.

In fact, the writing is quite good, but the pace is so slow and the pursuit battle is too long.