
When Uchiha Finished Watching Naruto
当宇智波看完了火影
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 515k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
241Chapters
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Reader comments 28
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It took a long time for the time traveler to die. I only watched it when the indigenous protagonist killed the time traveler.
Since the protagonist is an aboriginal, then rewrite the aboriginal. If you rewrite the time-traveler, you can still write it pretty well, but you will have to write him to death later. . . This time traveler is still the protagonist. The enemy is dead and the protagonist will not awaken the kaleidoscope. You are putting the cart before the horse. . .
The last few chapters have finally gotten on track. To be honest, this book deviates too much from the main plot in the early stage. Normally, the memory should be handed over within the three golden chapters, and then continue to develop downwards. Most readers come in for the title, but end up abandoning the book if they don't see what they want to read within three chapters. Most readers today are not that patient. The core excitement of this book is the changes in the Uchiha clan after getting the memories. I skipped many parts crazily before, but these few chapters have aroused my interest recently.
The reason for the poor score is that I knew that Dohara would die before even watching it, so the experience was terrible. . It's better to just play the main character Tuhara. . . Just write about how good Iwa Ninja is. .
Old fans are here to support! Uehara from Iwa Ninja Diary has made me miss him for a long time, and I'm very happy to see him again 😁
The book is good. Most of the recent Naruto books are cool. The realistic and detailed battles like this were from a long time ago. Come on.
Let me go... Just read the introduction. Is it a reversal of the previous book? The protagonist Tsuchi accidentally killed Kazuya who trusted him. In this book, Kazuya became the protagonist after the death of his friend Tsuchi. Hahaha
To be honest, the author's writing style is indeed good. The early character descriptions and battlefield depictions are very detailed. However, the disadvantage is that the prelude is too long and seems a bit watery. Generally, readers are attracted by the title of the book and what they are most looking forward to is the change of the Uchiha clan after learning the plot. Or the protagonist changes his destiny and changes the destiny of the clan. The delay in entering the main plot will consume the readers' patience. Fortunately, it seems to be on the right track recently. I hope the author can control the rhythm well and give readers a better experience.
It stands to reason that a book about aboriginal car-traversing time-travelers should be just for fun and selling purposes, but the description of time-travelers in this book is too good, showing the wisdom, courage, bad jokes, one's own incompatibility with the world, the novices in fighting and the whimsical ideas of using ninjutsu, and being ruthless when it comes to being superior. Brother! How great is this kind of writing to directly write about time-travelers! (ノ_ _)ノ
It's really frustrating and the behavior is incomprehensible. The friendship with the time traveler is really outrageous. Kill all your teammates to restore the friendship. Regardless of priority, who is the protagonist, who is the supporting role, the protagonist Kazuya? You also wrote a lot about Uehara's psychology. The protagonist Uehara? You are doing a close-up of Kazuya again; the two protagonists also have to have priorities, you have to split it 50-50, which makes it uncomfortable to watch, and you keep describing it in unnecessary places. Kurama's genjutsu is emphasized from the beginning to the end, but it doesn't work. When the hostage was changed, he knew that the information was leaked, but he still changed his mind. Are you stupid? I'm speechless to negotiate with you knowing you have a gun.