The Zhao Immortal Clan

Could the author please change the realms to something more common: Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Purple Mansion, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, and Deity Transformation? That would be easier to remember and understand. Of course, this is just a small suggestion. Ultimately, it depends on the author's own vision.

This is way too much of a cheat code! They didn't even bother to explain where they came from.

Is it really necessary to suddenly have a beautiful girl and a cheat code appear after you've already reached Foundation Establishment? You might as well just ascend to immortality on the spot and become invincible.

I think it's a bit absurd if a market town can't guarantee the safety of people doing business (various transactions) within it. The protagonist is, after all, a member of a Qi Condensation family; if even he's treated like this, what about the other independent cultivators?

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I had high hopes for it, but it stopped updating a few months ago, which is a bit of a shame.

He was originally a genius who wrote really well, but then suddenly this system-like thing appeared.

The character portrayal is too pale. 😳

Aspiring novelists lacking vision become monks.

I'd like to take this opportunity to recommend the new book by a veteran author, "The Supreme Immortal Cultivation Family." Thank you!