Weird?

I haven't seen such outrageous writing for a long time.

This is the first time I've seen such outrageous writing.

The writing style is too outrageous. The author should practice more.

Come on, author... My writing skills were about the same at the beginning, but now I'm much better. I need to practice writing more. The author's ideas are okay, but his writing skills... To be honest, I really can't praise him. To give the author a thumbs up, the pain of stand-alone writing is indeed difficult. However, the author can come over to discuss writing and just make friends.

I said, "Isn't there even a dialogue in this?" And I took a quick look at it and found that it seemed to be an expository essay. How should I put it, it was very bad. Also, the number of words in each chapter was too few, at least about 2,000 words. If you really want to write, you don't have to keep emphasizing that you are at a junior high school level. Readers like to read high-quality novels. It doesn't matter which academic level you have, as long as the writing is decent and the content is smooth and readers can keep reading. Since you want to write about weirdness, you should find a high-energy clip from the beginning instead of slowly leading out. As the so-called golden three chapters refer to the first three chapters, the first three chapters must be good. At least you can know what the protagonist wants to do? Why do you do this? What turning points occurred? What abilities do they have? Who does he want to be in the end? Okay, let's talk about this first this time, read high-quality novels carefully, so that you can know what you want to write!

Just write a paragraph and have a look Liu Rulong's eyes were like a torch, and he did not hide his greed for the Ye Sui family's feng shui treasure land. He straightened up his fat body and spoke to Ye Sui menacingly "The boy from the Ye family has the sense to demolish your broken house quickly. Such feng shui The treasure and land should belong to me... If not..." Liu Rulong's words suddenly stopped, and he waved his hand to signal the adjutant to light a cigarette for himself I saw the sly and dog-licking adjutant Wang Huan, he understood... ​

Li Li's original score, but Zhang Zhang's is even more outrageous. I suggest the author read more written by others.

Primary school students' writing, a running account

Although, but, I really want to say that this is not a problem with the writing style at all, but that the punctuation marks are not used! And there are many typos qwq I hope the author can improve it a lot