Druid of Life

I read it from the guide and was attracted by the introduction. I thought it was a light and cheerful slow-paced novel. After reading more than 70 chapters, well, how should I put it, the subject matter of the novel is quite good and the creativity is good, but the author is not sure about the rhythm of the plot. At the beginning, the gangster incident has too many points, and it has not been completely contracted later. There are still a few points outside, and the development of the plot is a bit convoluted. Some places could have been straightforward, with a knife directly inserted, clean and neat, but you just get around and it is annoying to watch. I would like to make a small comment to the author here. In the gangster plot, the author has stuffed a lot of information, and this information is also relatively fragmented, such as the relationship between the wanderer and the police station, the relationship with the protagonist, the previous stories, and what he is doing now. The story is too fragmented and detailed. There is no need to be certain about this. To make it clear, just mention it in one stroke, and just open a few pictures at the back to describe it. Otherwise, it will be crowded together and it will look a bit messy. There are also too many supporting characters written about, and the protagonist feels that there is no role. In the end, too little is written, and there are still a lot of things that have not been explained. The author will update soon.

A hammer in the east and a stick in the west. I had already caught clues before, but in order to make dark gold, I just left, left... I also said it later, I was afraid that the other party would attack the priest, so why not continue? For a level 23 druid, how big a deal would it be to catch a clue and kill a gangster? But it turned out that this mess had been in vain for several days, and he still had the nerve to say he was worried about the priest.

I saw a few readers posting that the plot was a bit confusing, and it would be too cumbersome to reply one by one, so I decided to post a post to talk about it. I must admit that different readers have raised similar questions, and I have to find the reasons from myself. Then I discovered that the problem should be that from the author's perspective, after all, he came up with the story himself, and all the plot lines are very clear. Therefore, when I write down the plot that I find interesting, it is difficult to notice the confusion caused by too many routes involved. This also largely means that my writing power is limited. I will try my best to make adjustments and improvements later to try to depict better effects. I am also an old bookworm, and I know that most of the readers who are willing to post about the author's problems feel dissatisfied after reading the article, and encourage the author with the mentality of "you should be able to write better like this". Thank you. At the same time, I would also like to thank the readers who have always supported and liked this book. Most of you don't like to leave messages, but I can see you in the background coming to vote for me every now and then. Thanks to "Destruction War Famine Plague Fear Death" and "Li Shuiyang" for their monthly votes. Thanks to "Book Friends 20181125133313578" for the reward. I will try my best to write this book🙏

Brother, your writing is a bit confusing.

It's not interesting. The author is not strong enough to write that kind of thing. It's messy and confusing. It's better than a running account, but the difference is only a few percent.

So far, the author has a lot of ideas, but the writing is a bit messy. The author's writing power is not enough to control a plot with several lines running simultaneously. It may be better to simplify one or two lines appropriately. In addition, this book is biased toward group portraits, and the protagonist does not occupy the vast majority of the space, thus weakening the protagonist's presence. So far, the writing style of this book is quite good, although the place names are a bit dramatic... The characterization (protagonist and important supporting roles) is okay. The flaw is that the writing method of parallel lines makes the content a bit messy. The main reason is that the transitions are not very well written, which often makes me feel confused. Personal humble opinion, light spray

After reading the book, I felt that each chapter was filled with long dialogues, and these dialogues did not advance the development of the plot, so it felt very hollow. In addition, the author has updated it for several months, but the timeline in the book is less than a month, and the plot is really advancing too slowly.

If you want to write the female character Emily as a high-IQ character, then the two new updates are a failure. Really smart people will not be misled and seduced by others time and time again and have the right to speak. They are the ones who hold the dominant position, even if they are not too old. A smart person is just an ordinary person if he cannot even achieve his own supervisory goals.

So greedy! There is no main line, either daily life, combat, conspiracy, or researching the role of skills. The author cannot choose one to be the main line. The others can occasionally write a few auxiliary cards. You will have a headache looking at this mess!

All I can say is that the protagonist of this book is stupider than the protagonist of the movie and TV series. He has the ability not to be a big capitalist, but to "deal drugs" on the streets. In the name of it, he can't stand the harassment of his friends. Will he be able to carry a nuclear bomb or something if he reaches the full level? . .

The subject matter is quite interesting, but the writing is disorganized, with no main line or focus at all. The main character comes up as he pleases.

Author, your plot can't be said to have no development, it can only be said to be a crazy spiral It's like the scenes of ghosts and beasts in Journey to the West have been stretched twice as long Pharmaceutical delivery, gang remnants, the temple in the hands of the neon man, the rich second-generation drug tester, It's not enough to mix these plots together, you have to continue to add various background settings and jokes.

Keep writing, I have some hopes (not necessarily correct). I found a book about Marvel + Druid earlier, but it's a pity that I originally wanted to read Druid, and then the author later wrote that the protagonist put on a steel suit, which felt very inconsistent. So I hope the author can make the protagonist not feel too inconsistent. It doesn't matter whether he is strong or not. It's about life anyway. In addition, if the author can take the time to understand the background of the druids in Darkness and the similar cultural background in reality, it should be helpful to the writing. A relatively one-sided case is that when many people write about the Dark Necromancer, they treat it as the image of the Necromancer in other fantasy novels. However, the Dark Necromancer is strictly a priest of Rathma. He believes in the balance of life and death. He should be very self-disciplined and be very cautious in the use of power.

Regarding Qin Duanyu's codename in this chapter, I'm really speechless. Firstly, he directly sells himself as a Chinese. Secondly, he is a magical Chinese who lives here and is related to the Chinese in the middle school. Haha, as long as someone is willing, the protagonist will basically tell others by name that I am Mo! Whether you use Son of Nature, Beast Whisperer, Shapeshifter, Son of Storm, etc., They are all more reliable than your nickname. Sell ​​yourself so thoroughly!

Is there a female protagonist? 🙂 Are you considering finding a hunter as your wife?

It is about life, and half of the content revolves around gangsters... When did Chinese people think that gang crimes are part of life? Is this the reason why people feel that the plot is confusing? For me, the plot confuses my expectations for the main theme of the book title, the content is not developed, and there are too many gang-related plots that make me confused.

I'm convinced that I've spent more than 200,000 words talking about a gangster, but BB talks about things that have nothing to do with the plot, some of which are missing, and the dialogue is extremely awkward.

Druid? Oh, I've been looking for it for a long time. Most of the novels written by Druid as the protagonist have been rejected. I have read some of the few that have achieved good results. I hope the author will not be rejected.

It's a little wordy, so I had to skip reading it.

I personally feel that the writing is very good, with a very unique style, and the content is very game-like and very close to reality. However, one thing about the recent plot makes me uncomfortable, that is, the problems are increasing but not decreasing, the contradictions are becoming more and more bloated, and there is quite a sense of powerlessness that cannot solve the problem. It is as uncomfortable as being constipated for a week, similar to that I feel like a multi-mainline game is still stuck in the main line (science students are not very good at expressing it, sorry). I personally prefer to complete some less important things or relatively simple things, or to prevent more conflicts. Aba Aba, that's about it. Judging from the detailed game data, this serious attitude has the potential to become a boss. In short, I hope the author will write better and better, come on!

The author was very angry when he saw in the post that someone suspected that the author had directly copied the foreign text. In fact, in a sense, this is also an acknowledgment that your writing has that flavor. As for how this book is written, at least I think it's okay. It does take a long time to deal with a small gang. After all, you, the protagonist, act as a dark druid in a world with no other abnormal abilities. In a sense, it can be said to be an invincible book. However, although the pace is a bit slow, the writing is not watery, and the multiple parallel lines will not make people feel confused. The crow transition is a good idea, just hope that the protagonist will not suddenly be fascinated by a little girl and then lick it in various ways. After all, he claimed to be looking for a life partner before. Of course, this is just my conjecture. In general, the writing is vivid and colorful. Keep it up. It is still difficult to write long invincible articles.