I'm Just a Commentator in Elf

I really don't understand why the main character can abuse other people's main force after paddling all day long and giving birth to little Eevee, who is just over a month old. After all, the Electric Flying Squirrel still has the lightning bird gene, so why does Eevee have it? I mentioned earlier that the Eluredo route of pre-evolving special attack and post-evolving physical attack is not easy to develop skills because it is difficult to learn skills in real life. As a result, Larulas learned the Freeze Fist in a few days and mastered it. The protagonist trains the elves basically by freeing them. Not to mention that compared with the protagonists of other novels, the training intensity may not be as high as that of stupid things. He works part-time and buys a manual for them to practice by themselves. Then the skills will be mastered, and it is not difficult to practice the skills. He took the elves to the training room once in more than 100 chapters. Electric Flying Squirrel sometimes trains by himself, but more often he plays games with Eevee. There is nothing special about the other two except that the Electric Flying Squirrel has some lightning bird genes. In a fight, he is somehow stronger than other elves.

After reading more than 40 chapters, the plot is hard to describe and has no highlights. The elves are neither cultivated nor engaged in scientific research. There is only the self-righteous self-pleasure of pig's feet.

The previous plot is okay, and it really feels immersive, but Ibrahimovic's ability to degenerate at will is considered a poisonous point for me. I left first. It looks good, but I really can't accept this. I can only say that I cast my monthly vote early.

Recently, this has been all about daily life and combat. In comparison, I still prefer commentary. After all, I was attracted by the name.

I hope the main character won't be too eccentric... I hope the later chapters won't go too off topic... Many books often suddenly have nothing to do with the title as they are being written I don't care how many heroines there are The previous undercover book was very interesting... I hope this one will be longer I just read the second chapter, and I feel very good about the lack of system. Without a system, there would be no Pokémon and power that can be conjured out of thin air, niiiiice

Because the author updates too little, my current fan value can only vote for ten pieces 👿

There are too many running accounts about the protagonist's live broadcast, which seems to have no interest in reading.

Speaking of which, author, which form do you intend for Ibrahimovic to evolve into?

I feel that the author's writing level has dropped compared to the beginning. He has lost the enthusiasm for creation at the beginning, and many typographical errors have not been checked or corrected. The most important thing is, you just wrote the anti-theft chapter, why didn't you correct it in the end? ! One chapter is missing in the east and a section is missing in the west! ! !

The IQ of the supporting characters is similar to that of the people in the TV series, but on the TV they are 10 years old, and you are a college student It is Eevee in different evolved forms, and it is called a teacher after posting a video, and there seems to be an Eevee that can evolve and degenerate independently. Everyone has one elf writing base 5 years ago, which was written badly by others and then stitched together.

You've been talking about Gardevoir, Gardevoir, but here comes a male, Aluredo, who doesn't even have superpowers. It's so disgusting.

I don't know if it's my problem, but I always feel that it's only enjoyable when it's explained. The protagonist's own battles and adventures are unwatchable.

Chapter 228 Eevee has evolved and degenerated. I will check again to see if it is free evolution and degeneration. If so, I will discard it. I personally don't like this.

Mi Huyou died, died on the day I took out the piano at 72, and died on that cold night. His naked and unrecognizable body was found in an alley. I resented him in my heart. I didn't stop Wang Yi and Teng Xun when they came to play with him. I know Wang Yi and Teng Xun are not good people either. But I was busy opening treasure chests, going through the plot, completing quests, and doing construction in the Dust Song Pot. But even so, I didn't get General Thunder. Mi Huliu died inexplicably. I haven't given my most beloved Xinhai a life-saving zodiac yet, and I haven't waited for the return of the one I miss so much, Yula, who was deliberately kept in cold storage. I vaguely remember that he once gently coaxed me and said: "As long as you are willing to work hard and spend a little money, you will definitely have what you want." Now, these ridiculous lies were taken away with his death by the cold wind. Actually, I don't resent him that much. He has indeed done a lot of sins in his life, such as making me brush all the cinnabar notebooks to lose the sound. I haven't had an explosive head in the past six months. How I wish he could give me an explosive head, even if I have perfected the defense of the adverb. But he just didn't want to. Even if he said it now, it would be useless. He had already died inexplicably. I did not attend his funeral, and I was not interested in listening to others discuss his affair with Wang Yi and Teng Xun. I have no idea how he died. I sometimes recall his kindness. When we first met, he was so bright, charming and gentle. But when I think back, he was always so tight and only gave a little food in the event emails. When you still fight against me and twist my card. I felt that he really deserved to die.

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Is it a problem with the writing style? Why do I feel so uncomfortable when I read a chapter? It's because I have to read slowly and carefully when reading a chapter. I feel very tired and there is very little useful information. I usually read it smoothly at a glance and gradually absorb it, but there are always a few books where I feel this way. In comparison, I don't understand why I feel that the pace of this book is too fast and like a running account. There is no memory point for the plot and information. I can't tell what is wrong.

Stop doing this kind of degeneration. I can accept your evolution into a combination of Sun Eevee and Senbu. It's really hard for you to evolve and degenerate.

Looking at the name, I thought it was written as a narrator with a side job. I feel like the protagonist was written as a gangster. Doesn't the author plan to adjust it? Is the main character not a student? He made his fortune all thanks to his doctorate, but he doesn't handle things properly. As a commentator, he is still a live-streaming pigeon. He just takes advantage of various places and runs away, which is really a loss of character.

There is still clear mist under the thirty-tenth aurora curtain! Clear mist!!