Ximen Immortal Clan

Did Ximen Qing and Pan Jinlian make money or lose money? I think it's a loss because not many people are willing to change their stereotypes because of your book.

The writing is quite good, but there is one thing that is quite annoying. The protagonist's surname is Ximen. When I see this surname, the first thing I think of is Ximen Qing in Water Margin. If that's all, it doesn't matter. After all, it's just a surname. But if you bring Isn't it disgusting to mention the heroine's name? If you want to make jokes, just make jokes. But the problem is that you have to make the main plot into jokes, which is annoying. Could it be said that when I read your book, I am constantly "synchronizing"?

I have read more than 200 chapters in this book, and I would like to ask if the author has an outline for so many logical errors? Is there any setting? First, only level 3 monsters can transform and activate their spiritual intelligence. How does the protagonist's first-level insect become intelligent? Second, why can the five major sects not destroy the Ximen family? Are you raising a tiger under your nose? Third, how many people can afford 100,000 boiled eggs? The number of Foundation Establishment monks is so small. As a result, the spiritual weapons used by Foundation Establishment monks only cost a few hundred or even thousands. How do those who refine weapons make money? The magic weapon used to make the golden elixir is only tens of thousands. I think the golden elixir costs more than a million, right? To whom are these magic weapons sold?

The characters I write about do not have the wisdom of the Yuan Ying Transformation God at all. I write about the protagonist being smart and the others being stupid.

It's really poisonous. Don't read any further. It's just a waste of money to subscribe to a few pictures.

A bunch of bugs, can it be reasonable? For example, the Fire Spirit Pill is harmful to the ghost clan. When the Tianwu Sect changed the pill formula, it was said that this pill formula was common. How could he make a fortune from disaster? Even if over time, many small family pill formulas were gone, then the forces at the same level as the Tianwu Sect would not be gone. And what do you think of the healing magic used to make elixirs without capital? Or it may take time to use magical powers to condense the required green liquid. Alchemy requires a large amount of condensation, which will definitely delay the protagonist's practice. Or it is okay to use magical powers to absorb the essence of flood-level spiritual plants. The protagonist can be awesome but it must be balanced and reasonable. Will there be infinite green liquid after practicing magical powers? Even in battles, if the true energy is exhausted, it will take time or spiritual milk to recover. And that Tianyi, selling materials to the protagonist actually makes more money than selling them to his own sect. How can a sect that only sucks blood use to maintain cohesion? Can it rely on feelings? Do the disciples of this sect have good things that they don't use and sell them to others to strengthen other sects? How can our sect grow stronger? It is impossible for merchants to charge 10 yuan for something worth 10 yuan. They have to lower the price. The market price is 8 yuan. Can't the disciples of our sect charge 9 yuan? The materials are taken back and processed and sold for 20 yuan, and sold to the disciples of the sect for 18 yuan. In order to prevent the disciples from harvesting the sect's wool and making a profit on the price difference, a sect rule is set up to impose a heavy penalty. This way, money is earned and the cohesion of the sect is increased. It doesn't make sense to upgrade a magic weapon to block lightning tribulations. You can upgrade it several levels in a row. Your setting is that the quality of the material and the amount of restrictions determine the level of the weapon. It would be funny if you directly block thunder tribulations and upgrade. You can also add restrictions to thunder tribulations. Even if it is tempered by thunder tribulations, the material is improved, and artificial restrictions can be added later. In addition, the general weapon refiner will try his best to refine the materials to the extreme to exert the maximum power, so even after tempering by thunder tribulation, it can only be improved by one level. There are still many bugs like this. If you want the protagonist to become stronger, please be reasonable. At least it makes sense logically and don't brag.

It took more than 20 years of Qi training to break through to the first level, and you have to hide everything you get. Although this is correct, what you write is about family cultivation, not an invincible lone ranger. You are also proficient in alchemy, formations, and talismans. Other clan members are like waste, and the aura of the protagonist is too prominent.

Garbage, fighter among garbage

While talking about practicing the Wealth Couple Dharma Land, wealth is the most important thing; but you don't use elixirs when you practice by yourself? Then your space is useful for planting.

Hey, instead of seriously cultivating and improving yourself, I dream about things every day that don't match my own strength. It's heart-wrenching to watch. I won't learn any secret techniques and work hard to improve my cultivation!

There are too few chapters. I just read a few and they are very interesting! This is a very exciting novel. The author must write it to chapter 2600! ! ! It's so hard to wait for books, especially good novels. You need to wait until you have gained enough weight before subscribing. You should at least reach 600 chapters before subscribing! Please author write more chapters! ! The author please be sure to work hard and update! Come on, keep working hard and write! ! I am very optimistic about your book. The author must stay lonely. Only if there are more chapters, will people read it. This is generally the case for new writers. If you want more people to read it, you should write more chapters! Come on, work hard, you will get good results!

I finally found out how many millions of words this novel has, and why there are so few subscriptions. I recommended it. After reading Chapter 62, I felt that the protagonist's plot was too strong. The protagonist first learned to make weapons, then to learn to make alchemy, and then he would probably have to learn other aspects. The author's understanding is that as long as you learn, you can learn it. I am speechless. . . . I can't stand it anymore, bye bye

After seeing more than 300, I felt that it was a little too watery and the rhythm was too loose. I killed monsters for a few chapters, and then everyone formed pills. Everyone formed pills for a few chapters, and then I fought monsters for a few chapters, and then practiced weapons for a few chapters and passed again. The pace is tighter, otherwise you can write the whole book about forming pills.

Ximen Qing, Pan Jinlian, Song Jiang, Wu Dalang, Wu Song! Are you trying to tamper with the names of people from the Water Margin and put them in this book? Author, you are really capable

It seems that during the Chinese New Year, you can get away with 300 yuan 🤓

The first few dozen chapters were good. I thought the main character had a normal mind and was in line with the character of a young man. I thought the main character cultivated his cousin because he was a companion, a relationship, something that could help him, etc. However, I saw that his family just wanted to have sex for nothing, without any intention of paying anything, and they also wanted to give his cousin to someone else as a wife. After reading a little more, I suddenly became less interested. The family story is really not good, because as long as a woman is a woman, she has to have children, etc. Thinking from another perspective, it is impossible for a truly promising person to leave offspring, etc. When pursuing the road, I felt that the protagonist's mind was not normal. Something went wrong around chapter 80. The protagonist suddenly showed a selfless behavior. The main reason was that the people in the family were disgusting. It was another thing for the protagonist to take the initiative, but they were all shameless people (they all wanted to prostitute for free. The protagonist's family members are like vampires. Also, the author suppressed the protagonist's cultivation a bit seriously). The heroine was well described and a little skinny. The protagonist's family members couldn't stand it. I wasted several hours of my time.

I'm almost finished reading it. There are too few chapters. Please write more, author! So wonderfully written! ! The author must keep writing! I must write it to chapter 3000! ! ! The more I read, the more interesting it becomes. I'm really looking forward to the plot below! ! As long as the author keeps writing, it has the potential to become a god. I am very optimistic about this book! ! ! The plot is very well written! ! The author must work hard to write! ! ! !

Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Nascent Soul, spirit transformation, refining the void, integrating body, Mahayana, transcending tribulations, true immortality, this is the personal center of the starting point, the realm in the profession! Official Realm!

Map Nine counties of Cangzhou

I am Ximen Hei Niu. Anyone who calls me by my true name will live forever 🤓

Isn't the 100,000 spirit stones of the Foundation Establishment Pill a bit too much?

Come on, 300 will be sold during the Chinese New Year

Finally saw it on the shelves! It's fully booked. Come on, I wish you write better and better!

Come on! It's getting more and more exciting! Five updates a day is a must! You have to be tough and update more to become popular 😊😊😊

This book is so awesome, four recommended tickets every day will be placed here, and three hundred tickets will be sold here.

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The creation of heaven and earth has changed, and every time there is a Tao hidden in it. Kong Ren Yun Chang Yong, loyalty and filial piety promote the family tradition. Ximen Hidden Sword, ancestor, weapon refiner Ximen Rende, grandfather, Patriarch Ximen Renzhi, second uncle, eldest elder Ximen Renshan, third uncle, alchemy Ximen Renhou, fifth uncle, Lingzhi Ximen Rendao, sixth uncle, shopkeeper of Qingyangfang Ximen Renzheng, seventh uncle, Yunjian Shopkeeper of the shop Ximen Renhui, the eighth aunt, the eldest wife of the Pan family Ximen Renjing, the ninth uncle, Mr. Xuexue Ximen Yunshan, father, deceased Ximen Yunsong, second uncle Ximen Yunlong, third uncle Ximen Yunfei, fourth uncle Ximen Yunjin, fifth uncle, alchemy Ximen Yunya, sixth uncle, Lingzhi Ximen Yunlan, seventh aunt, Ximen Yunying, eighth aunt Ximen Yungui, ninth uncle, Ximen Changkong, eldest brother, direct disciple of Yunjian Mountain Ximen Changfeng, second brother, Ximen Changge, third brother, Ximen Changqing, pig's foot, Ximen Changyu, fifth brother, talisman maker Ximen Changping, sixth sister,

It feels like the routines in each realm are the same. Open the secret realm, grab treasures in advance, and become a fisherman.

There is a setting that is very strange. Why do you have to wait until hundreds of people have reached a late stage of a realm, advance together, and then the characters described in the family are just three generations of old, middle and young. At the beginning, they did not say how good his grandfather's qualifications were. After thousands of years, the family has not had a few new people with excellent qualifications. Every time, he only takes over a hundred or five hundred, which is becoming more and more perfunctory.

The author must write to the God Realm, and then to the Chaos Realm! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! This book is so beautifully written! Please encourage the author to update! ! !