Arcane Glory Begins from the Throne

Chase customers at the beginning Boss, you have to understand, What you write is an online article. If you want to make money, you have to write cool articles You are not a master, and you don't have so many die-hard fans Just like a Hollywood blockbuster, you must arouse people's interest at the beginning and have a small climax within half an hour After all, you don't want to make a highbrow art film, do you?

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It gave the protagonist an identity he shouldn't have! It is positioned as a high-level player, but in fact, it is just a newbie who has checked the guide.

I feel that the author's writing has a very Western fantasy flavor. Nowadays, many Western fantasy mage protagonists rarely stay at the low level for too long, and the opponents they face are stronger than themselves. They basically do not face ordinary people. It is as if the whole world is full of powerful spellcasters. This gives people the feeling that ordinary spellcasters are rubbish and cheap. There will be a sense of fragmentation, and I will no longer feel the flavor of Western Fantasy before. I remember when I watched Western Fantasy, as long as a mage character appeared, I would think that he was a big boss who would help or bring danger to the protagonist. Even if the protagonist was very strong at the time, as for the gods, they were just background panels or appeared at the ending. Although I know that this kind of Western fantasy will disappear soon as the protagonist upgrades, I still hope that the author will write more plots of this kind of traveling in the mortal world.

I feel like the rhythm of the plot is so strange. Why is the protagonist facing racial conflicts again? In the last book, the protagonist chose to side with the elves and cooperate with humans, but that was before there was any deep hatred between the two sides. But in this book, I think the elves and humans are almost going to have their brains broken, and other races can't stand the alien race. What kind of plot is this? Racism? This is very different from the plot I originally thought of studying spells, going out on adventures, meeting partners, soul mates, creating a team, establishing an organization, fighting evil gods, defeating conspiracy, saving the world, traveling through the world, and becoming a legend 😰

After reading Chapter 46, the author's writing is quite good, but so far I feel that it is very depressing, and it has been very depressed, and there is no point to vent my emotions at all. Most people who read online articles may be like me, just for entertainment. The emotions have been stacked up for too long, so I am not happy to read it. Come on, author!

I really like Andrina, the heroine of the previous book! I hope this novel also has a good heroine! Also: Congratulations on the new book

After reading the novel, I just felt it was too heavy. I can accept the description of the tragedies caused by the war, the hatred between both sides, etc. However, I don't quite accept that the entire article is about tragedy. I think the writing style can be a little more relaxed, add some daily life, and let the protagonist build bonds with other people. Don't leave the protagonist alone, as this will look heavy. In addition, it is not necessarily the case that the characters who appear have depth and have goals that they have to do and complete. Since it is a DND system, people from the chaotic good camp should also exist, and believers of the Goddess of Joy also exist, so why can't there be more relaxed characters? He has no goals, is humorous, kind, and does whatever he wants. For example, an adventurer appears! Cat people are beautiful, wandering, simple, carefree, and adventurous. She has no goals, how can she be so happy? Another example is a talkative demon pet. Most of your characters are very naughty. Why aren't there those who see through everything, then firmly choose a path, and are more heroic? And why are there no honest adventurers, or brave adventurers, or naive adventurers. You can be depressed, but it is not necessary for everyone to be depressed. You can be wise, but it is not necessary for everyone to be wise. Many gods, such as gods on the chaotic side such as the God of Cats and Dances, have been gods for so long, but in the end they are still curious and playful, so why can't other people have some little hobbies of their own?

It's not exciting enough, and the characterization is not likable either.

If possible, I hope the author can write more about the process of establishing his own wizard organization and the process of running the organization. If he can write it in detail, the effect will be very good The following content is used as an introduction, welcome to discuss

Would it be okay to engage in less contradictions and confrontations? There should also be less inexplicable sympathy, don't be too pityful, okay? A female elf has to comfort and listen when she is in a bad mood. She feels inexplicably emotional when she sees a human skull. I thought that these have nothing to do with him unifying the world. Without these operations, he can't unify the world? Is it okay to upgrade properly 😒

This is the second book of The Eunuch, and both books are fully ordered. Well! There are no shortage of recommended monthly tickets, which is really a pity The plot writing is okay It's just that sometimes I am a little pretentious, I complained at the beginning that I didn't use my own identity to develop, but in the end I used it, and then cut it off If this plot is put at the front, maybe it will be much better The Rise of the Little Character Forget it, it doesn't mean that it's impossible for the prince to run away from home, but it's really a pity not to use it when he has status and resources. And the protagonist is too pretentious from beginning to end. Yes, the mentality needs to change, but the 930,000 words you have processed really feel pretentious to me It's not that you can't write like this, but before you get results, you should change the direction. Or you can make a narration and repeat it later A single adventure has a separate way of writing, and a leader of a force has another way of writing Whether farming or taking risks, you still need to think more carefully.

The protagonist's character is not as likable as the previous one. It always feels weird and awkward. I am still interested in having a country and a prince. Apart from anything else, this identity can bring a lot of things, such as economic and material resources, which you can easily handle. And the mentality is more awkward than the previous book, or pretentious.

Why do I feel like humans and ghosts are all showing? The people around me are either talented or have unlimited potential. I feel like the protagonist is not very good.

The protagonist is a decent and good guy who is rare in popular novels nowadays. The three views are normal, and there is no inexplicable killing of innocent people. What I hate the most is the excessive killing in today's novels. What is called decisive killing is simply treating people as human beings and managing the people. Especially the killing of saints and the killing of good people is disgusting to death. I like that the character of the protagonist is very good. He is more decent than the protagonist of a certain Paladin legend in the past. Let's add a Holy Light profession.

Postscript? ? ? I haven't even started watching yet and it's over? ? ? ?

The drama of love has been a bit slow recently. The male protagonist of the salvation line went to find clues to the main material world, but he kept encountering random encounters in the description (repeatedly), and was still unable to enter the desert magic tower instance. Brandon, the stand-in male protagonist of the Lord line, was also trapped in the road, and he had not even crossed the border. He did not experience any major crisis in several scenes, and was never able to deliver letters. I personally hope that the progress can be accelerated, or that the lord line can hang up and focus on the salvation line to speed up the strategy. The lord line can occasionally give a camera to explain the progress.

The damage of The Eunuch was too great. I didn't have the heart to read it. I paid attention to it but didn't want to read it. After reading the postscript, I want The Eunuch again?

The continuation of this book, Mathematical Olympiad Journey, is very exciting.

Suddenly I realized that deleting half of this book would not affect the reading at all, nor would it affect the plot advancement or character creation at all. The author's word count is really high. I've read the Icewind Dale trilogy and the Dark Elf trilogy, and I'm not as verbose as you.

The story plot of this book is well arranged, but the protagonist is too weak to attract readers.

Why was I permanently banned from the new book? I just posted a cool comment and saw the subscription page. .

After looking at the catalog, is it interesting to stay in the small world? Withdrawn

After returning to Asnor in the new book, you must remember to tell me the whereabouts of Brynden's team, especially Tistan. Don't tell me that they died in such a miserable way. In fact, it stands to reason that at the time of the postscript, at least 5 months have passed. If they are still alive, there should be news. The author did not mention it, maybe he forgot, so I specially posted a reminder.

The beginning of this first page is so confusing. You can drive the monster into the cave. Why is it still in this situation? It makes people afraid to continue reading.

Let's read the next book written by the author. The subject matter is the same, but the next book looks much better than this one. This one is a bit messy, and the outline setting is not done well. The next book Mathematical Olympiad Journey is not bad!

There is actually a prequel, but the next one is obviously much better

Are you still opening a new book? I haven't seen a complete novel about Master of Nine Swords yet.

I have stayed in the small plane for too long.

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