I Have a Golden Coffin

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Finished reading. It's very nice. Come on, author.

After reading dozens of chapters, I came out to read the book reviews. Can you believe that they are all good reviews?

Subscribe to a special chapter and talk about the point that makes me poisonous. God created Jesus and gave Jesus a golden finger that could be as powerful as himself. Then Jesus was stolen and raised by Lucifer. After God found Lucifer, he killed him and made Jesus a god like himself. In the end, Jesus exalted Jehovah with a backhand and even called it revenge on Lucifer. This chapter directly made me poisonous. I haven't even finished the free chapters, so I subscribed to one chapter and posted a comment. I really can't sleep without commenting. In real life, this is called treating a thief as a father, and being a wolf with white eyes. Then the underlying logic is confusing, and the weapons used by a special countermeasures team are worse than Xiaomi plus rifles. Weapons and ammunition are really inexpensive. Even if guns are banned, please look at the squads in Ultraman and Kamen Rider.

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than ten chapters. I subscribe to one chapter and post a post. If you have this golden finger, why don't you go to places where there are so many dead people and try to add more points? What are you writing about?

Because I'm watching pirated copies, so don't scold me. Let me briefly talk about what I have read so far, the general outline of this book... In the early stage, Su Bai knew that he was different, so he hid, observed, and tested. After he was resurrected, he just wanted to kill the person who killed him, but later I found out that it was a conspiracy, and I didn't expect that the murderer became a resurrector. Maybe it was to supplement Su Bai's experience of guarding corpses, but it was actually a bit buggy. What impressed me most was the scene where Su Bai removed the camera. I felt that my suppressed nerves were relieved, and I smiled heartily for some reason. I feel two points worse. Readers all have quirks. When I read this book by my math teacher, I always felt like something was missing. Atmosphere group. I think the atmosphere group is an indispensable thing for every good book. Whether it is the Zhao brothers and sisters, two of his men, or the Dragon Slaying Department. This book is so emotional that sometimes I feel like the math teacher wants to have a harem. Ceiling. This is easy to understand. For example, resurrectors include insects, snakes, dragons, and evil dragons🐉. Since the resurrectors were there from the beginning, there should be bosses who could suppress and restrain the resurrectors as they kept appearing. But later on, when the alien giant copies of the two world beads began to appear, the ceiling seemed to no longer matter. Math teacher! As for Bei Nan, when I read Weird, I felt numb with numbers, so I gave it a name as a math teacher. It was too smooth for the math teacher. Su Bai grew up too smoothly. He killed the people he wanted to kill and got what he wanted. Is this a cool article? I will do my best to support the genuine version. Math teachers, don't give up. Although this book has improved a lot, the emotional lines are really too complicated.

I found that in this type of novels, from the ones I have read, no country is useful, the law enforcement agencies are all mentally retarded, and the emotional intelligence of everyone in them is even worse. Someone inside asked why it is not made public. To be honest, I don't understand. It is better for everyone to prepare for war than for most people not to know, unless you have other purposes, such as breeding in captivity.

Rational comment, I feel like the writing style has changed in the last few dozen chapters. The protagonist in the beginning is a cautious person who will consider his own interests. When he met Zhu Yingying and Zhao Kongqing on the bus, he didn't want to help, but put on black clothes to lick their bags at night. The next few battles were either for yourself, for the people around you, or for profit. But what about recently? For example, when the male protagonist saves a woman who is being choked, why does it make me feel that I have to save it? Then there is Ender recently. Who is Ender? He has only appeared in a few scenes, but the hero wants to kill him immediately. Did Ender violate the male protagonist's interests? There are so many people outside, and the male protagonist is not a public person. Will Ander notice the male protagonist? Is there any special benefit for the male protagonist to kill him? I can only say that this contradiction is outrageous. To paraphrase what other readers said, decisive killing is not the Holy Mother. This is what attracted me to this book. I hope it will be as good as the beginning.

When did it become so popular? There are so many monthly tickets. It's almost 2,000 monthly tickets. I've been ordering more for fear that the author will be killed. I didn't expect that there were so many monthly tickets after not reading for two days. Sure enough, good books will slowly become popular {"TopicId":"598921104752574464","TopicName":"My Years with Qidian"}

The biggest problem now is that everyone who comes in after reading the introduction thinks it is a cool article, an invincible article, but now it is not even considered a pseudo-invincible article.

The first 150 chapters are good, the characters are well-drawn, and the plot is compact. It looks like a good book, comparable to the works of those great masters. However, it becomes more and more unsatisfactory later on, the combat power collapses, the plot is messy, the characters are pale, the protagonist begins to have low intelligence, the rebellious characters become more and more mentally retarded, and there are more and more nonsense... In short, the first part is okay like Lao Mao, but the second part is simply a rewrite.

It's really uncomfortable to watch. Although the subject matter is really good, but how can I put it, first of all, the portrayal of Chu Hongyue is really a failure! It is impossible to become a captain with only combat ability but no judgment. It is like having explosive force but not knowing the art of war. People who are not good at leadership can only serve as generals but not as commanders. Don't tell me that generals can also lead troops. Everyone knows what I mean! Then there are the twists and turns in the plot that are a bit stiff and even awkward! I understand what the author wants to express, but I am limited by my writing power and cannot express my thoughts in words very well. At present, I can only see Zhu Yingying's children coming out of the mountain village, and I will still look down, hoping to make progress in the future.

Now I have developed a habit of reading the character list at the bottom before reading a novel. If there is only one male protagonist and a bunch of female protagonists and female supporting characters, then you can basically say goodbye. No matter how good it is, it is probably a brainless harem. If there is a male and female protagonist each, plus a similar proportion of male and female supporting characters or characters such as the protagonist's parents, it means that the book can still be opened and read.

I want to ask one thing, when you learned that you are more than one resurrected person and you have never killed anyone, why can't you report yourself to the country and let the country help you, for fear of being dissected? You are not the only one in the world, and there are still people who don't cooperate with the country. If you are the only one who cooperates with the country, you can't Is it bad to be able to dissect you and kill someone who doesn't cooperate with the dissection? Wouldn't it be better if you weren't the only one who cooperated with the country? There must be some rules to help the resurrected people who cooperated. The country can't be so short-sighted and solve the resurrected people who cooperated. Of course, I only read about 80 chapters. If anything changes later, it's my fault.

On a sparse and ordinary morning, a regular and slight buzz suddenly sounded in the dark room. Su Bai suddenly woke up from his sleep. He picked up his mobile phone and saw an unknown call. After hesitating for a while, Su Bai answered the phone. The two sides were silent for a moment, and a familiar voice came from the other end of the phone: "It's me." "What's the matter?" Su Bai walked to the window with his mobile phone and opened a corner of the curtain. Outside the window, there were already vendors selling breakfast who had gotten up early. Several medical staff were surrounding the breakfast stall. They must have just finished working overtime and were preparing to go home to rest. "Ninth Shadow, a member of the organization encountered difficulties in performing a mission in Province J. The last news sent back was 5 days ago. The organization hopes you can investigate. The reward for this mission is 20 contribution points." "I can consider this matter, but I must know detailed information before I can make a decision." The person on the phone seemed to have considered this for a long time, and immediately gave a reply, "I have sent you the general situation by email, please take a look." "Ding dong", there was a new email, Su Bai clicked on the email to check it quickly. "Several strange things happened in a small county in xzhou, J Province two months ago. Some villagers dreamed of a dark shadow lying under the bed in their sleep, but they themselves were lying on the bed unable to move. The room was extremely dark, with only a ray of moonlight coming in from the window. The strange thing is that my perspective is at the window of the room, and I can see both myself and the shadow clearly. I watched it like this for more than two hours, during which time neither I nor the shadow moved, as if time had stopped. Suddenly, the shadow moved, and then slowly crawled towards the window. It moved very slowly, moving forward bit by bit, as if it were an old turtle, but for the person involved, from the moment it started moving, horror spread like wildfire, "It's crawling towards me!" It's about to touch me! " Although it was just a perspective, no one wanted the black shadow to come closer to them. The black shadow crawled little by little. When it approached the window, it was finally possible to see its outline. It was a crawling man! His limbs seemed to be a little abnormally bent, which made his movements a little clumsy. , But still crawling relentlessly on the ground. As time passed, the figure who was about to reach the window stopped moving. He slowly raised his head, revealing a broken face. Although his appearance could not be clearly seen, it was certain that he was deeply malicious at this moment! After the figure stopped, he looked towards the side of the camera, as if hesitating for something. Suddenly he turned his head, and instead of continuing to crawl toward the window, he crawled back toward the bed. Just when the villagers thought he was about to crawl under the bed, the figure slowly stood up, and saw that he had taken out a hammer in his right hand at some point, and stared directly at the sleeping person on the bed. He suddenly raised the hammer in his right hand and hit the person on the bed hard. "No! Don't want! Don't smash it, please! "The villagers who had nightmares could only look at the figures and screamed in their hearts. Maybe the figures heard the villagers' voices, maybe it was just a nightmare. At the most dangerous time, the villagers who had nightmares woke up. It was still a familiar bedroom, still a familiar bed, and there was no human figure. Even the window outside the window gradually became brighter, and the sky began to dawn." After Su Bai read the first piece of news, he didn't see any clues. This kind of strange rural stories often appeared in some unknown magazines, about why some pig farms kept screaming in the middle of the night. The original version differs greatly from the most widely circulated version. People always have to find something to do when they are alive. Even if it is a trivial matter, it is worth talking to others. But what happened next was enough to attract attention. At first, only a few villagers had this nightmare one after another. Later, some villagers were found dead at home. The deceased's expression was horrified. They must have been greatly frightened before death, but there were no external injuries. After reporting the case immediately, the forensic doctor found that the deceased's brain had turned into a puddle of mud, as if something had smashed the deceased's brain into pieces. This kind of unscientific matter was suppressed immediately, but the organization still learned about the situation through connections and sent members to the scene. However, they did not expect to never return. Su Bai thought for a moment and said to the other end of the phone: "I agree to take on this task." "Very good, the organization did not misjudge you. After the work is completed, the benefits you will get will definitely be more than 20 contribution points." J Province X Prefecture Small County After greeting Zhao Mingshan, Su Bai quickly arrived at the location required by the task. After resolving the last threat, Zhao Mingshan does not need Su Bai's protection for the time being, and as the resurrected people she encounters become stronger and stronger, Su Bai also needs to increase his strength as soon as possible, and plan ahead to ensure that he and his friends around him are not harmed. Pulling his thoughts back to reality, Su Bai took a long breath. The cold weather made the air he exhaled quickly turn into a white mist. After arriving in the small county town, I found that the economy here is indeed not very good, the roads are in tatters, and there are not many vehicles on the road. Fortunately, there is still a dilapidated long-distance bus station open, otherwise it would probably take an extra day to get here. After leaving the bus station, two people wearing hats and coats came over. One of them, who looked older, said: "Young man, is this your first time here? Do you want to earn money to get a wife?" "Don't look at how small this place is, but it is a famous coal city. Big trucks are transporting coal. The whole country needs coal. This is a treasure." "Hey, young man, don't ignore people, my uncle has a..." Su Bai quickly left the bus station. This kind of place was full of people, and it was easy to be deceived, especially people who had just left the society. Anyone who comes to you on your own initiative is not a good bird. After leaving the bus station, he got on a local motorcycle and went around to a small village in a ravine. Only then did Su Bai truly arrive at the first scene. The small village is a standard small mountain village. There is only a dirt road to enter the village. There is not even a sign. There are not many people usually. When something like this happens, every house is closed and it looks even more deserted. Su Bai walked around the village and found a two-story building for no other reason than the word "Village Committee" was written on the door. As soon as he entered the door, he saw a middle-aged man wearing outdated clothes coming out angrily, "Mr. Ma, Shanzi is my good brother. I must report this matter to the city. Don't stop me!" Behind the middle-aged man, a man dressed as a cadre with a belly and a shiny belt chased him out, "Stop, Tiedan! When did my old horse lie to you? This kind of thing is being investigated by the superiors now, so I can't say anything about it." Su Bai stood aside and listened carefully for a while. After the middle-aged man came out, he stepped forward and stopped him. "Hello, I am an investigator sent by the city. If you need anything, tell me and I will help you." At this time, as long as you pretend to be someone from above, you will definitely learn a lot of information. Tiedan looked at the person in front of him. He had fair skin and looked very gentle. He didn't look like a liar, but he still kept an eye on him. "You said you were sent here from the city. Do you have ID?" ID? This stumped Su Bai, "Well, it's not convenient for me to show you my ID. I'm a secret investigator, but I can show you the kung fu I learned in the army. I close my eyes and turn my back to you. You punch me in the head. No matter how many times you punch me, as long as you can touch me, I lose." "That's what you said. I don't care if I hurt you." Although Tiedan has never practiced kung fu, he can always punch. However, no matter how many times he tried, Su Bai swayed to avoid it. "If you don't come, you win. What do you want to know?" Tiedan thought to himself, I am single and have nothing to lie to, so I might as well trust him once. Su Bai immediately asked, "Did something happen to your brother Shanzi?" "You know? Well, my brother has been a bachelor all his life. He has never done anything or committed any crimes. He hangs around the village every day. Two months ago, I went to see him for a drink and found him dead at home. His death was definitely not an accident, but Village Chief Ma has been delaying the investigation, and no results have come out recently. Some people in the village even said that it was done by ghosts and gods and moved to another village. "Hmm, I also believe there must be something fishy. I am willing to help you. Can you take me to your brother's house to have a look?" Su Bai wants to go to the scene to find out. "Of course." Following Tiedan to the victim's home, Su Bai looked at it carefully. Shanzi's home is a very old small house with shabby facilities and few appliances. After opening the room where Shanzi lived, there was a heavy smell of coal smoke. "Shanzi slept on that bed before. After his death, he had no relatives, so I have always kept the house." Tiedan pointed to a bed in the room. Su Bai walked over and found that this was a typical brick and earth kang. When sleeping at night, coal was burned under the bed for heating. There were still a lot of unburned cinders inside. Although heating is already used in many places, if it is a single-family home, the cost of heating is relatively high.

The writing is pretty good, not too toxic, but some of the plots are too boring and make me irritated. Also, it's best to keep the female characters to yourself and not be too nymphomaniacal. If the protagonist doesn't like the female character, he should reject it and don't hang on to other people's feelings. And judging from the current female characters, the protagonist has the rhythm of developing into a scumbag.

Why does it feel like the more I look at it, the less like a resurrected person, like a warrior who cares about the country and the people! I feel like I'm off topic!

The Chinese regard the dragon as a totem and regard themselves as its descendants. But why do dragons often appear as evil or randomly killed creatures in domestic cultural film and television works? 😥 Nothing else, it's just the thought that comes from seeing the word "slay the dragon"

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The plot of joining the shadow organization is a bit confusing The excessive things Lao Mao did were definitely not only torturing the protagonist in the dream, but also publishing false information on the Internet and throwing dirty water on it, and even after throwing dirty water on it, the truth was not revealed. This is fundamentally different from a dream test of one's state of mind. Has it already caused substantial harm to the protagonist? As a result, in the subsequent chapters, "My contribution points helped you" was used to easily persuade the protagonist to join the organization 🤔 Does the so-called help mean that the evidence is tied to the stone and sinks into the pond? This kind of trivial matter really shouldn't be done by others when the protagonist is clearly well prepared.

It tied the knot in one breath. Although Happy didn't click in after seeing it before, I saw the recommendation again today and came in out of curiosity. At first, I was a little worried about the female co-stars appearing one after another, but then there was no ambiguity at all. I thought it was pretty good. If you like it, you will continue to subscribe and support.

If you can't write about feelings, don't write about feelings. OK, and that neighbor is inexplicable.

The protagonist's character is really poisonous. He has Wei Guangzheng's dragon-slaying team beside him, and he even comes out to save people. He likes to save people so much. Someone around you is choking and you risk your own safety to save him. Whenever a villain or an official threatens you, I'm afraid he will commit suicide on the spot.

If you don't have a clue, just rest and think about it. If you feel that the plot has collapsed and you can't grasp it anymore, please don't cut it. Give a reasonable ending to a few chapters. Finish the book, rest and think about the next one.

It's a huge improvement over the previous book, but the ending is so fucked up. Gong Mo Shen Ta Miao is 6/4 with the protagonist. The protagonist's system and added skills feel like a joke.

The book is actually good, but I don't know why it was finished in a hurry.

I figured it out myself. I think that if you want to be popular, the author really has to endure the bitter cold and loneliness. If you sign a contract with a company and a team and then gather some social media forces, it may become popular faster, but there are many restrictions and there are many traps. In short, as long as the authors are original and not plagiarized, it is very hard. Thank you for creating a pleasant reading experience for readers.

Just make appropriate adjustments according to your own ideas. You don't need to refer too much to the readers' requirements. We originally want to see different works. If they are all similar and the routines are next to each other, then aren't we reading the same book? Many authors fall into a trap as they write, resulting in unfinished or discontinued works. It's not just the authors, but also the public. It can be seen that maintaining the original intention is not so easy to achieve.         ，，，，