If You Are in Tokyo, Your Love Game Needs to Be Played in the Cloud!

I feel that the male protagonist's sister is repeatedly jumping between the plot of being bullied and not being bullied. This writing by Oda Toru is disgusting to readers, right? Chapters 35, 36, 37, and 38 are disgusting. In the same room with the hero's sister, he confessed to the hero's sister and asked the hero's sister to give up on the hero. The hero's sister did not directly refuse to kick him out, and she was still crying. Crying is useless. The latest chapters 75, 76, and 77 are also the same. The gay friend went on a date with a girl and left his sister Loli to his classmates. The classmates got angry and ran away, leaving Loli alone on the street. It was Oda Toru who went to protect Loli from being harassed by idiots. What is the use of the male protagonist? Apart from being handsome, he is there to pull the strings at critical moments. The so-called part-time job earns a lot of money. He is often absent from work and even asks his sister to quit her part-time job at night. Not taking on the responsibilities that should be taken, and not protecting the lolita that should be protected.

First of all, it's a bit unclear whether the protagonist is reborn or reincarnated. Secondly, what the hell is this Chapter 7? Is the author deliberately leading readers towards a certain plot? How can you play on other platforms? If you play this way at Qidian, you won't be able to make money from this novel. The author seems to be four new authors who want to give you some popular science. The readers of Qidian basically have circles. Most people will be in a circle or a group. Therefore, the novels that are well received in the group are the real surviving novels. On the contrary, if someone maliciously ruins your novel, it will be ruined. There is absolutely no future, because it means that you have lost an entire group of readers, and so on, until you are here. The novel has been completely suppressed by others, or has no popularity. Really, this novel's photo sensitivity is pretty good so far. I also recommended it to the group, but if you want to make money from this novel, don't do it like the Minotaur plot in Chapter 7. If you are just writing this for fun, just think of me as farting. Anyway, I think it's pretty good and I've already recommended it to the group. You are the author, what do you think about your business.

The Japanese light novels from Qidian come and go just like that, rebirth and system. In his previous life, he was a waste, in his next life he was weak, he was always ostracized and bullied, he had a younger sister who had a bad relationship, he joined a club for weird girls, he had a beautiful teacher who paid attention to him, he was coerced by the chaebol and the mafia... Internet articles have a fixed template regardless of the category. The difference lies in the characterization and plot creation. To put it bluntly, it depends on whether the sense of substitution is strong and whether the plot is enjoyable or not.

How can I put it, I was so embarrassed when I read it, maybe this book is not suitable for me. When I think about how I used to be a bad boy and suddenly changed my personality, and others looked at me strangely, I felt uncomfortable all over.

I have seen the 15th picture so far. The writing is pretty good. I just have one question. The protagonist wants to get rid of the bad boy, so why does he still have yellow hair? Isn't it the first priority to dye it back to black first? It might be okay to dye your hair yellow in anime, but in reality, yellow haired thieves are ugly.

I've been a bookworm for a few years, and this is my first time posting. I really can't stand it anymore. It's so disgusting. The male protagonist and female protagonist are both disgusting.

After reading 20 chapters, the writing is okay and readable, and Higurashi's style is not bad, but the background of the original protagonist is a bit toxic (my sister was locked up in a small dark room by the principal in order for him to go to high school) (she told other bad guys that she and her sister were the only ones in the family). If I don't explain this part carefully, I will be a bit discouraged (ntr to death)

For those who like it, please give me a warning. The official Minotaur plot will start at Chapter 35. If you haven't watched it yet, you can start reading Chapter 35 and see if you can resist the ntr plot.

Sorry, it's my fault that I read your book without reading the comments. It's all my fault. I shouldn't have clicked on this kind of self-help article. The introduction is really good.

The protagonist is too weak, right? This little gangster is good at sports with only three points? Normally 4:00 and 3:00, isn't it sub-healthy?

I originally wanted to give it a try, but after reading the comments, I didn't expect it to have Minotaur tendencies, so I gave up and recommended it to the book friends in the group, asking them to avoid the poisonous points as much as possible.

The male protagonist is not worthy of being a gangster and can only be described as a scum (I feel that the male protagonist is always on the verge of being bullied)

I am not a party person, but I felt extremely uncomfortable when I saw that one of the heroines in the book with the harem label had such a close friend of the opposite sex (after reading the comments, a lot of people complained, is this inappropriate and Minotaur-oriented?)

When I looked at the more than 300 posts, I thought they were from this article, but it turns out they were all pictures posted by those few people.

It's too poisonous. Can you please stop operating ntr? If it doesn't work, others can do it. I can't stand it anymore. Bye.

The second personal attribute is poisonous, bad, fighting, and sports-loving, with only 3 points of physical strength. Are you kidding me?

This novel is just like that. After reading the first few chapters, I no longer have any desire. I still have a yellow-haired stalk. Yun Yang also gets interested. When he sees Teacher Loli, he directly wants Yun Yang. He is such a loser and speaks softly. It is really disgusting.

Brothers, run quickly, there is ntr😐

I am reading the latest chapter that was released at 4pm on December 3rd, and it turns out that I am the 16th person to read the latest chapter. Author, as long as your male protagonist stands up a little more and lets the male protagonist do what he should do, and uses less tauren routines, his grades won't be so bad.

Even if the harem novel has a brilliant female supporting character, please summarize it in one or two sentences in an understatement. Don't make it look like it could be the same as any female supporting role, or just stop it or summarize it in one or two sentences. If you want to support supporting characters, please don't write them in such detail. They are not the protagonists. From time to time, just write a sentence or two about how the process is going, and let the readers think about the rest without getting into trouble. As for the fact that the heroine actually has a male partner, you are really a genius for daring to write such a harem story. If you want to show your "artwork", please change the channel. We "glass-hearted" people can't stand such a big storm, so we just like to read harem stories to relax. ✊

Why should I open it? After reading dozens of chapters, people are dumbfounded. If the author likes ntr, can you stop writing and start writing Liu Bei's article? Block the author directly. It doesn't seem like a big problem, but the constant small hints are really uncomfortable, and the minotaur is crawling!

The author is here to pursue his literary dream, so let's leave.

I read more than 40 chapters and subscribed to the first chapter but didn't read it. I couldn't accept the plot of my sister's night shift. The description of the male monitor and the female boss of the job shop almost died of poisoning and gave up after ten years.

To be honest, the "poisonous points" you wrote were not harmful to me before, and I wouldn't even think of them as "poisonous points". But this is Riqing. I'm used to seeing Riqing and now I read this, and the more I read it, the more uncomfortable I feel...

How can I write it in such a way that people can complain like this? Let me give it a try

It's so popular and there's not even a high-quality one, so I knew this novel was special.

Looking through the history, I was disgusted again and stepped on it.

After reading the first chapter, I decisively gave up. Why should cousins ​​who are not related by blood have to work at least three jobs a day to take care of the original pig's foot for four years? This is very poisonous.

I feel like the author has never read Nikkei novels, right? I have never seen a Nikkei male protagonist in a system stream who can be so cowardly, and there are also descriptions of supporting characters. If I really can't do it, I'll write about behind-the-scenes or group portraits. I feel that the Nikkei theme is not suitable for the author, thank you.

I can't stand it anymore, I feel uncomfortable watching it.