Reborn in Tokyo, Japan with Psychic Powers

"Rebirth in Tokyo, Japan with Psychic Power" Author: Tokyo Sakura Type: Two-dimensional fan fiction Rating: 8.3 Book review: The writing style is very smooth, the characterization of the characters and the processing of details are excellent. The overall story has a strong sense of substitution and is very interesting. , The description of the noodle shop is my favorite (*≧ω≦) Next, let's talk about the plot, because it is a 100% psychic fanfic, so for readers who watch this drama, this setting will be very immersive. It is very interesting to see familiar settings and characters in the novel. From the current point of view, there are no problems with the rhythm control and structure, the plot has appropriate ups and downs, and there is no shortage of explosive points. A little suggestion, the introduction is still very important to attract new readers! If you are really not good at writing introductions, you can consider excerpting a paragraph from the article, and the effect will be very good! In general, the writing and plot are great. I look forward to the update. I have already subscribed and collected it. Please continue to work hard! From：chu shi

There are really very few fans with 100% psychic powers. I support the author in this subject.

It seems to be a fan work of "Mob Psycho 100". First of all, I would like to express my great respect for all authors who write fan fiction. Most of those who can write it must be true fans. As for the "Fraudster" in the title, it's because the original owner of the protagonist before his rebirth was a fraudster, someone who would cheat money without real talent and knowledge. Judging from the introduction in the text, it must be that as the plot progresses, this "Fraudster" will gradually grow up, and will probably become a master? It's just my guess. I have never read "Psychic 100%", so I don't know much about the story system. Fortunately, the author expresses it quite clearly and will not make people who have never been exposed to it feel embarrassed. The writing style is a bit rough, If you like this style, you may consider taking a look. At the beginning of the second chapter, "Goosebumps fell all over the floor, and I was eaten by passing ants"... Emmm, it's so heartless. I, who was eating, couldn't help but find it hard to swallow when I saw this. There are no typos in the front. This is pretty good. Some of the articles are well written and the writing style is OK, but for those typos, I completely suspect that the author himself is too careless if he does not review the manuscript. I hope the author will continue to maintain this advantage. Tell me about your general impression. There is something in the introduction, but people who are not in the circle may not understand it, but it has little impact. After all, the audience for fan fiction works is more readers of the original work. Of course, it is also a skill to interest readers who have not read the original work. Initially, I feel that it is a good fanfic, but I don't know what the future direction will be. You still need to read the book to read it by yourself. As for the author's experience in completing the nearly 100,000-word book, I have no comment. I just want to say: Don't be a eunuch, Don't give up, Please keep working hard~

Because I was short of books, I came back to take a look and read a few chapters. What can I say... As I expected, this book is not attractive at all, but I understand it. After all, I said at the beginning that it was really difficult to write psychic fan fiction. If I were to blame, it was because the original work was so well created and Bones Club did such a great job. Let me tell you why I don't want to read a few chapters. 1 The original work depicts Mob as an ordinary person, but at the same time he is a great person. As a life mentor, I really envy Mob for meeting Ling Huan, but in this book Ling Huan turns into a glib person. 2 Ling Huan has the same super power as Mob! ? I know that because of the common reason in Chinese online novels, if the protagonist is not awesome, he cannot be called the protagonist, but really spiritual fantasy is not suitable for this kind of routine. Even if a spiritual phantom with the superpower Long Aotian tries to enlighten the people, it will not be as deeply rooted in the hearts of the people as the spiritual phantom enlightenment of ordinary people. 3 I read other comments saying that there are other anime characters infiltrating. Although I didn't see it, I still want to make a suggestion. Don't infiltrate other anime characters, especially characters like Natsume. The psychic characters are not well written yet. I just want to say that the author has a big heart. This is not the kind of anime where people fall in love every day. They get involved in other anime just to have a harem. No one cares about whether it matches the character of the original character or not. As long as it makes readers feel happy and yyy. The above point of view is just like what I said when the author first started writing this book. After all, it is really difficult to write a psychic fanfic, and it is unlikely that the author of the online novel will go beyond the original character creation. From this starting point, the first psychic fanfic and the author's courage (at least dare to write) can still be supported. But I hope the author will not mess with other anime characters in the future. Let's start with the plot. The original plot will be better if it is slightly modified. Why run away before you learn to walk?

Author, let me give you a suggestion. The price you set for removing spirits is very unreasonable. The most expensive one is only 14,999 yen. I don't know whether you set this price or it is in the original book. But at this price, even if there is business every day, and every customer orders the most expensive one, the money earned every month is about the same as a part-time job. Even if you hire a monk or a Taoist priest in China to do the work, the price starts at several thousand. If you do this business, you will not be open for a month, but you will make a month's money if you are open.

There is not enough participation in the plot, and there are too few scenes where the protagonist appears. I feel like I am reviewing the plot of Psychic 100%. I hope it can be changed.

Well! I'm just telling you how I felt after watching it. The part I dislike the most in the whole text is the yarn weaving part, and I don't know why I just don't like it. This is the second time I have collected this novel. I abandoned it for the same reason last time. This time I ran away to watch the anime and couldn't help but come back to collect it. After I endured reading the yarn-weaving part, I found that I had no motivation to continue reading. So there is no doubt that I want to give up again, but there are too few fans with 100% psychic abilities. After thinking about it, I just decided to become a collector. (I think the reason why I didn't like that part may be because there are no such scenes in anime, so there is no sense of immersion!) (Whisper bb)

Can the author change the name of the person to the name after rebirth? It's the previous name and the current name. It looks so awkward.

How should I put it? I deliberately relied on the character and style of the original work, so I don't think much of it.

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It's really strong. I dare to write a fan novel with 100% psychic abilities. It's been a long time since the anime with psychic abilities came out. You are the first one to write this anime fan novel. The author is very courageous. This fanfic can easily ruin the original work. Time travel is a story of growth, and time travel is a story of guidance. It's not that I don't have confidence in the author, but really don't think about the characters surpassing the original work. The characters of the original work are very full regardless of the supporting characters and the protagonist. Anyway, come on. Although I don't know how to read it, I don't want the original work in my mind to be ruined. This is not one of those scumbag anime with ambiguous harem scenes, it's not that easy to write.

The protagonist's character is unlikable and glib.

Is anyone still watching the update now? (ಡωಡ)

Well~ there will be an extra update on the 20th floor~ (｡ò ∀ó｡) In addition, you can join a book club group to play~ there will be less embarrassment

Hahaha, when I saw Natsume, I chased after him decisively

The first three golden chapters are a bit confusing, let's see how it goes later. If it doesn't work, just run away.

In fact, I personally feel that the author's setting is very suitable for writing about the literary giant Stray Dogs, but on the contrary, it is not a good match for psychic powers.

First of all, thank you for collecting my book list. Secondly, I have basically finished reading the current chapters. The first few pictures have a strong sense of déjà vu, and there are many original plots in the back. The language and other things have a psychic style. Overall, it is okay, but it is a bit too thin. I have already put this book on the bookshelf. If it gets fatter, I will add it to the book list. If it doesn't collapse, I'm optimistic about the author.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I saw many friends complaining about the cheap price, so I would like to explain... 1. First of all, the original manga and animation are set at 12,000 yen, and I have raised the price here... 2. According to my personal understanding of the comics and Master, there is a superpower association in the middle and late stages of the comics. It is very famous and the price is quite high, 60,000 to 70,000 yen per time. Master may want to attract customers by lowering the price. 3. Master Jiang likes money, but he also wants to realize personal value through this kind of work~

Author, why did you become a beast? I've been saving for several days and it's over before I even finish watching it😱

I thought the main character was aloof, but when I walked in, I found out that he was funny.

, I haven't read it yet. Let's add some books to the list and wait Sit down and show your head.

Although it is a fan fiction, the author writes it carefully, which is good.

You haven't updated for more than a year. Everyone thinks it's normal to be a eunuch. Now they're afraid that you'll update a few more chapters and then continue to enter the palace 🤫

In fact, the writing is quite beautiful, please come on the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

A book cannot satisfy everyone at the same time. You can tell me your suggestions and I will make modifications or improve them in the future. If you see any advice, please tell me.

Regarding the protagonist's abilities, what's next? I recommend auxiliary abilities such as treatment, but of course others can also be used

Just shipped, let's spread a wave of European atmosphere

Author, why are you so fat? You haven't updated in three days.