Douluo Dalu: Sugar Taizong

I can't help but comment, author, you are not suitable for writing this kind of fantasy novels, and are more suitable for writing urban novels. Nowadays, there are too many lifestyles and too many private settings. I saw Chapter 57. Except for Zhou Yi, everyone else is in the second part of "Douluo Dalu". No one is watching. Is this writing "Douluo Dalu" or the skin of "Douluo Dalu"? There are very few fighting scenes. In summary, the author's writing skills are very high, but it is not good when it comes to fantasy themes. Well, it is suitable for writing urban themes. The evaluation of this book is that it is below average. The most serious point is that it has too much modern life flavor. Dou Er is a semi-feudal period and there is not so much modern flavor.

...? A sugar martial soul that has no soul power for ten thousand years? I remember there was a soul saint who used jelly bean martial arts in Shrek Academy in Douyili, right? Are you just teasing me? Have you seen Douluo? 😅

Well, not bad. In fact, I'm really tired of hearing many people's satire on Shrek's admissions. Poverty is not a reason to become a waste, and for the school, admissions is a life-and-death war. Failure to recruit good students means death, and there is a good way out if you graduate. What's the matter? That's easy to say. As for everything belonging to the nobility, I'm actually quite curious. How many nobles can sustain this kind of forest-like environment (not to mention which parent has a brain problem and takes the initiative to send their children to this forest?). Besides those sect disciples, who else can sustain it? Does the letter of recommendation from the city lord have to be from a noble? Is it not good for me to cultivate my own people?

To be honest, I couldn't stand it at the beginning. Why do some people still think that Tang Wuhun is a useless Wuhun even after 10,000 years have passed in Douluo Continent? The famous one is a food-type soul master. The eighth-level soul power of a food-type soul master is considered a genius, right? I'm really speechless, I can't watch the beginning anymore

The Four Heavenly Kings (`ᝫ´) of the news agency painted by Ah Fa were moved here for construction

All aspects are very good. Although the main character is very ordinary except for being rich, there are surprisingly no pain points. It avoids the main characters of the original work and other private settings. It is very good. It can be seen that there is enough accumulation in many places. Works written with care are the most interesting. Come on, you must keep writing XD

The advantage lies in my mouth and teeth!

Colored version, the color difference between computers and mobile phones is a bit big, my face is so dark

Han Kui is coming₍₍(ง`ᝫ´ )ว⁾⁾

This achievement is quite worthy of the author.

The description of life experience in the first chapter can actually be summarized in one sentence, and the name of the protagonist can be more impressive if it is stated within 300 words. The golden chapter is a waste of one and a half chapters.

Chu Huang, the fifth soul skill giant tooth weapon

It might be easier to sign a contract if you write about a male protagonist.

I encountered it below. It's quite interesting. It's a Douluo fanfic, but it's very slow to update. Save the child and look at the child's sincere eyes. The child is short of books~~~

Well, after reading the first 3 chapters, I found a bunch of loopholes, the biggest of which is the civilian soul tool business First of all, in the Three Kingdoms of Douluo Continent, the social form and economic foundation are still in the feudal period. In a world where fists equal power, soul masters, especially high-level soul masters, hold the greatest power. Soul masters are either landlords who control land and other means of production (landed aristocracy), or they are sects and colleges that control educational resources (an alternative knowledge aristocracy). If a person cannot possess martial souls and innate soul power, he is basically a commoner in society. However, for some reasons, martial soul awakening is not popular in Dou Er. It can only be found in big cities such as the capitals of the Three Kingdoms (Douluo has poor transportation, and if you live a little further away, you will never be able to awaken the martial soul for a lifetime). This is almost like inviting people to buy people's hearts. Even if some civilians are lucky enough to awaken their martial souls, so what? Not to mention that most of the martial arts are useless martial souls. Even in the Douluo Continent with fantasy floor tiles, cultivation is equivalent to burning money. The annual subsidy for civilian soul masters seems to be 1 gold soul coin. Well, this amount of money is only enough for a family to survive for a year. Don't even think about cultivation. If you include 10,000 years of inflation, you may not even have enough to eat. In order to practice and make a living for the family, civilian soul masters have no choice but to sell themselves to the sect (just like Jiang Nannan and Xu Sanshi in the original novel) and work for the sect for half their lives. Maybe in their later years they can buy a few military soul tools that improve their strength and leave them to future generations. As for civilian soul tools that improve the quality of life, who would be so prodigal as to buy one? Of course they are the descendants of some nobles For traditional soul masters as rulers, soul guides are a threat to their force, and the soul guide industry is a threat to their dominance. They may try to independently manufacture military soul guides like the Westernization Movement of the Qing Dynasty, because this can maintain their rule, but they will not allow anyone to produce and sell soul guides privately, because emerging things beyond their control will only threaten them. They may be corrupt, bloated and incompetent, but the rulers' nerves are particularly sharp when it comes to things that threaten them. They will stop future trends and trends just like a certain sea god stopped the Sun and Moon Empire from unifying the continent To sum up, real civilians cannot afford soul tools, and soul masters born as civilians will not buy them. Nobles have the ability to spend, but the author, are you sure they won't engage in zero-dollar purchases? Purchasing for zero yuan is still fair, at least your life can be saved. I'm afraid they'll label you as an accomplice of the evil soul master, and then call the inspection team from a certain college to come over and arrest your whole family.

Tangtang! Yay! I'm competing with the author to see if you update it first or I color it first🙃 (The author didn't create the character, so he can't vote as a fan)

The writing is good and the reading is smooth, but the plot progress is a little slow.

The author actually writes pretty well, and there is nothing poisonous about it that could kill anyone. The author has shown it to people for free and some people are calling it poisonous. They can accept a bunch of system documents, stallion articles, and five-clawed dragon spirit. Come on, author

It took me a day to read it, it was very interesting and good. I feel like the heroine is very much like Su Pei Bi in 1999

Is there a male protagonist? Or no CP?

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What's the background? Where did the people in the original work go?