Archdruid of Hogwarts

1. Just write about the development of your plot normally. If you are such a babble, babble, babble, I am an adult and I should educate you. I know the truth, I am a prophet, and I want to show my sense of superiority (and it accounts for more than 60% of many chapters), which gives people a very poor reading experience. 2. The wings of butterflies have been fluttering since you came into contact with the trio. My dear, you still revealed the plot to Lao Deng. Do you think the story will remain unchanged? Will Lao Deng wholeheartedly follow your ideas? If that were the case, he wouldn't be called Dumbledore, and he wouldn't have such a sexy friendship with the Dark Lord! 3. You disagree with the idea that you use the secular economy to interfere with the magic world's economy. You don't understand why Gringotts has an exchange online? Although you think you really understand the Muggle world after so many years? Smart people will definitely do it! ! ! So it doesn't matter if you can buy some daily food items with worldly goods. Then those things that you mentioned will interfere with the magic world unless the ruler no longer wants to live! Because the Muggle and wizarding world definitely has rules! In short, the author should stop talking nonsense. Can't you write it seriously? I really can't stand forcing a wise man! Defeated. . . . .

This is not like writing a novel, but like writing a self-pleasuring argumentative essay full of resentment, a long vent-type complaint, criticism, and satire. I think I am extraordinary. In fact, these are the sequelae of the overflow of modern information.

The reading experience is not good. It looked like a cloud, and I was confused. Why are you talking about so much nonsense? Wouldn't it be better to introduce it slowly in future plots? Why do you have to say it all at once? Author, how many people do you think can read your setting?

Author, you can talk less, um, write more interactions! You can write less about political issues and the like. That is to say, your current score in this book is not very good. If your score were better, you would easily be 404 if you write so much about politics.

It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of novel with a chapter and a half of casual thoughts. It's really an ancient starting point... After all, those who are interested in changing society have long been engaged in political self-media, and it is rare to still stay here to borrow literary metaphors.

This is more than just a second design, it's simply an enhanced version of the third design.

We clicked here to see the brainstorming between HP and Da Mengde. We did not come here to watch your long speech about benevolence, justice, etiquette, wisdom, trust, gentleness, courtesy and frugality. We are willing to write it ourselves and post it on CNKI 🙂

Since you, the author, have already added a plug-in system to the protagonist, why do you need to add two or three settings to the original work? It's confusing and boring. The development and comparison of the foreign system in the world of the original work is the interesting part, not the foreign system versus your author's second design. There is nothing that readers are familiar with and can use for comparison. It is all something in your author's mind.

Only read Chapter 10. The first three chapters are very engaging, but after that it's like the author has changed. Too many meaningless explanations. It hurts my head to see it

This is like a post-reading book, which forcefully puts the author's views into the book. I can only comment on one thing: this book is somewhere between readable and unreadable.

This nonsense💋

The whole story is like drinking fake wine. The whole story has great principles. It seems that after thirty chapters, I can't stand it any longer. I'm sorry for you.

Ever since Dumbledore came out, the author has started to let himself go. Every few pictures, he will give a long sermon. Boss, we are here to read the novel to relax, not to take classes. I gave up.

Why is this protagonist so verbose? He speaks in long paragraphs, just like an old lady.

There's really a lot of nonsense, keep talking, bro, is this a fantasy theme or an educational theme?

There are private goods included throughout the whole process, and what a great subject matter it is that will ruin it for you.

It's not really a fan, right? It's a fantasy complaint disguised as HP? There are a lot of private goods.

There are too many messy things, and various authors have their say

The title of the book should be The Big Mouth of Hogwarts

I have read so many novels, and this one is the most self-righteous, with the protagonist nagging endlessly.

No matter what others say, I think this book is okay anyway, at least it suits my appetite. I offer it with a monthly pass and five recommendation votes~

I really like this style, keep up the good work