The Front Desk of the Company Is Immortal Emperor

Well written, I didn't even have a starting point and registered one to support you, and I didn't know how to vote for the monthly ticket, so I recharged 1,200 points to support you. You were recommended by the big dream master. I looked at the writing and it was okay. The protagonists also have principles and personalities. I hope it won't be written as a YY novel. The cautious character of the protagonist can be retained. The heroine sitting in Blue Star can also be a clone. Since the early advantage is great, the heroine can be treated as an adventure, just like Han Laomo's Sky Vase. I think your writing style is very good, and it feels like forgetting the truth. Come on.

It's been a long time since I visited Qidian. When I took a look today, I found out that we are number one on the new book list. Hahahahahahaha. The author is so awesome. The author is so great! ! ! ! !

It's good-looking, the protagonist's style is also very unique, and the characters are rare. The author is not sloppy in writing the plot, and it is straight-forward and interesting. The plot is also very enjoyable, so you can go and watch it.

Come on, the author. The novel has already been written at this point. The overall layout, ideas, and clarity of the outline must be very careful. I believe the author will grasp it well.

Authors, please don't believe what they sell. Normally, the writing style and ideas support your profit (although, I think it's a waste of money).

Dear author, Happy National Day! Seven days of leave!

This article was written by the author with a gentle, powerful and humble feeling. The progress is also very fast. The writing may be a little thin, but the author has a good structure and the characters are likeable. Finally, it is really a very high-quality article.

It's time to go back to school at 6 o'clock, and I won't be able to touch my phone after that! Take care everyone and see you soon! Thank you for not moving, come on, forget me not

Support! I think it's good-looking and creative. The development of the empress and the initiation of the protagonist are all highlights. The two-line storyline is true and natural. It's not as fake or stupid as most of the writing. The characters in this book all have basic IQs, emotional intelligences, and a sense of reality. Very supportive.

This book is a good book worth reading. The plot is compact and the plot is exciting. It is much better than some other life dramas that are as bland as boiled water.

It means that I can never read other books except this one... Just like the plate of egg fried rice in God of Cookery, author, why!

The plot in the following chapters is much smoother than the previous chapters. The author is getting better and better as he writes! I believe this novel will achieve good results

It reads very smoothly and can be read in one sitting. I feel it is better than most works. Why didn't you sign a contract? There weren't enough words?

After thinking about it carefully, I decided to post a comment to support the author. As an old bookworm who has been diving into the sea of ​​​​books using tourist websites for four years, I have never registered a Qidian account. I read this book at 10 o'clock last night. I read it three times. The first time I read it briefly, the second time I read it intensively to figure out the characters and think about the author's intention. The third time I read it just to read the author's message. (If I hadn't seen that the author wanted someone to comment so much, I wouldn't have come.) I have been reading Qidian's books for four years and have followed many famous books, but this one both surprised and shocked me. I even doubt the author, are you my future reborn? Or maybe we are the same kind of people. The world structure of this novel is a bit like a dream of mine. A place where I can hide when I am unhappy in reality. In the same way, the female protagonist is like a god and the male protagonist is like an ant. The same is true of the ambivalence between the female protagonist who likes the male protagonist and the male protagonist who wants to refuse and wants to stay. The storyline is exactly the same as in my dream world. First of all, thank you to the author for letting me read this different book during the National Day. Secondly, thank you Qingyin for your support, otherwise the author may not be able to persist until now. When I saw that the author wanted to give up in Chapter 23, I felt a little sad. I hope my comment can also give the author some motivation. Then let's talk about the plot. Generally speaking, the author's description of the characters is very good. The most important thing is Mo Jinghong's attachment and love for his boss and his distrust of other people. It clicked with my idea immediately. (It would be nice to have the opportunity to discuss the plot with the author.) Secondly, there is the ambivalence of the male protagonist. I think the change in the male protagonist's status in the early stage is very good. With the intention of establishing a relationship in advance and fawning, she ended up falling in love with him. This idea is a little better than mine. (I used to think that the male and female protagonists were brother and sister.) Especially the part where the male protagonist struggled to escape. (I personally like this kind of conflict and entanglement. If the male protagonist didn't go back at that time, I think it would be more interesting.) The last thing is Mo Jinghong's IQ. In the article, she was still written stupidly in some places. The boss, in the early stage, tried to please him in various ways, and later expressed his intention to invest in cultivating her, but at this time many big capital forces entered the market. To put it simply, the male protagonist respects and pleases the female protagonist in the early stage, and invests in training later. Why doesn't the female protagonist think of the purpose of the male protagonist's move? There is also a problem with the writing style. It can be seen that the author is a novice. On Qidian. Com, it is actually particularly difficult for newbies. I can imagine how eunuch the author's last book was. But that's what this market is. Among a group of fish, large and small, swimming down the river. The smallest fish wants to swim against the current. If you want to do something different from other fish, you must either cross over and transform into a dragon, or die here and become a corpse. I believe the author knows the reason. (In order not to make the author proud, I am floating) As for the current plot, I feel that the ktv part is a bit fast! (Personally, I prefer the city in the front. Everyone racked their brains in order to let the empress cultivate immortality.) Then there is the author's idea behind it. The boss will definitely not die, but at this time the leader pretending to be a doctor has also arrived, or everyone is honest with each other after the boss wakes up, and Mo Jinghong cultivates immortality. Or just keep going back to filming. The most likely thing is that the boss is fine! After all this, Mo Jinghong decided to become an immortal and protect his boss. (Personally, I feel that being possessed is redundant, but it may also be a foreshadowing to support the author's ideas.) Of course, no matter what the author writes, I support it and hope that the author can continue to persevere. I will go back to school tomorrow night. If the author sees it, can you also leave a message at the end of the next chapter? I hope that by New Year's Day, I can read this article and be fat and strong. Parents are so strict that they can't spend money. If the author is still an author after graduating from high school, he will definitely give me a reward. I wish the author an early signing! I wish the author gets higher and higher on the list! Salute to the boss and Mo Jinghong! Salute to no one! ! Salute to our dream world! ! !

I read it again, and the latter part is smoother than the previous one. However, I personally feel that since I have chosen to write online articles, and I am still an author with millions of dollars at the starting point, I should be mentally prepared. For beginners, try to write a book in the early stage to practice writing, plot conception, character description, foreshadowing, etc. Of course, do not change the world and main character plot settings easily, because this is what readers are here for. In the middle period, the plot develops in an orderly manner. It can be smooth, but it needs to be meaningful (such as setting up some foreshadowings, portraying characters, etc.). During this period, some "cool" plots are interspersed to continuously lift the whole to one "climax" after another. If you practice enough writing, the plot will be smooth and there will be no major problems. However, the results are not very good, so I personally recommend starting a new book. The later stage is about finishing and filling in the gaps, with more character descriptions and reminiscences. The whole team usually has time to communicate with readers, brainstorm ideas, and enhance fan cohesion. I hope the author will not shut himself up and read more published books, and his writing will gradually improve. The other issue is income. First of all, in the first three months, the monthly income may be a perfect attendance award, and income will only come with results later. If you want to earn more than 10,000 yuan a month, there will be many people reading it, or there will be a big brother. Writing a novel, strength is the most important thing. Of course, if you have a big brother, you can do whatever you want. You have to persist. Look at the top 30 people in the monthly list who have not written millions of words. They have climbed up step by step. Come on! (Personal handwriting, personal opinions, don't criticize if you don't like it, you can't stand One Punch Man.)

Hello everyone who reads the book, I am the author of this book and no one should mess with it. I saw a friend suggested that I make a post. The main purpose is to collect everyone's suggestions for the book, including some opinions on many existing things in the book. Of course, I also have some ideas of my own, and I can also communicate with you in the post. Finally, thank you to every friend who reads the book, thank you for your support.

Continue to support the author. Great creativity, delicate emotions, and flesh-and-blood characters. Come on.

Come on, let's give it to the poor students. I'll reward you a few more times during the winter vacation.