Picking up a Planet: My Adventure Was Broadcast Live

I read the introduction and thought it was the Koprulu Sector. Glory to the Firstborn Son of God. The Archbishop gathered his troops again 🙂

It's too outrageous. The style of pajamas, the accent, the catchphrases, the small movements, the tools brought from the earth. There is so much information that the proportions, gender, habits, where they are from, and their age are written directly on the faces of these old scholars. As a result, I couldn't find anyone? Your perspective is that of the protagonist's eyes... It's useless for the military to study so much information.

Ask a question 😥 Why does the protagonist think that analysis can understand future high-tech... Why does the first thing that comes to mind is to analyze it yourself... I also described the protagonist as a high-IQ scholar 😅

After reading Chapter 93, I feel more and more fucked up. I want to make money by engaging in high technology, and I also want my family and girlfriend to accompany me. I don't want the country to find me, and I want to have a showdown with the country after I enter the universe? Haha, do you think it's possible? Either don't add the live broadcast element in the first place, and then use the author to delay discovery after adding it. To be honest, as long as the protagonist's ability is exposed, unless he can bring a intact starship over, the earth will not be able to tolerate him.

I personally want to say something to the author. First of all, you must have your own rhythm, and don't mess up your rhythm by rushing for updates. It's easy to break down when writing~ Secondly, don't worry that your previous writing wasn't good enough and keep thinking about revising it. The more I change, the less confident I become. If it's not very important, you can change it after it's finished 🪖 Finally, you can read some negative comments in the comment area and remember to avoid them in the future. Or 😏 just pretend you didn't see it. Adjust your mentality and write directly to the end! It definitely gives me more experience and impressions than Eunuch.

I couldn't help myself when I saw Chapter 59, so I went to look at the chapter table of contents. There were more than 100 chapters of Good Guy and the country still hadn't found the protagonist. With so much information given out, ordinary people could guess some of it. The state machinery was already in motion but couldn't find it? How much do you look down on the state machinery? Summary: The science fiction aspect is okay, but the plot is worrisome.

Don't send it because it can't be found. You underestimate the national institutions. Think about how to write after you are found. If you are not found, you will lose a large number of readers.

Creativity is good. The writing and plot are a mess, and there are too many unreasonable things. For example, the tone of the expert will always say "Oh my god, oh my god, why are you here, that one can fly, what, what?" Every time the expert comes out. I am speechless, why so many days? There are also some details, such as finding people and ensuring live broadcast. To be honest, I was discouraged from looking for someone. I can only say this, details determine success or failure. If you can't do the writing and the details of the plot, this book can only be read through your imagination, and few people can last through forty or fifty pages. I hope the author can improve his writing style and the fullness of his characters. You have to make sure that the characters are alive and not the same. Details determine success or failure, I still say that. No matter how good the idea is, without writing and details, to be honest, there is no way to survive.

Does anyone really read this kind of article? I seriously doubt how broken the spiritual world of people who read this kind of article is!

I can't find anyone after so long. This country is too weak. Let's destroy it!

Read six chapters. The fleet the protagonist faces belongs to the civilization. There is a serious mismatch between basic materials and natural subjects. There must be more than one civilization around. Stop watching. This kind of writing is about matryoshka dolls.

What is science fiction? It literally means scientific and reasonable fantasy. As long as the explanation you give is reasonable and logical, then this is basic science fiction. But if it is not logical and there is no reasonable explanation, then this cannot be called science fiction but fantasy. In the world of science fiction, the law of conservation of energy is basically followed. Even ghosts need energy. This is just an example. Can ghosts exist in the world of science fiction? It can be because ghosts are also energy bodies. Reasonable explanations for any creature, especially energy creatures, can make readers feel comfortable. Everyone has a basic understanding of familiar words such as jumps and particle weapons, because these are common words in the world of science fiction. If the author wants to create a new biological weapon, he must give a reasonable explanation. This is the original intention of science fiction. Science conforms to logical fantasy, which is science fiction.

Low Emotional Quotient: Readings for Mental Retards High Emotional Quotient: Super Young Readers

Make these experts look like idiots

This kind of forced live streaming always makes people feel that the protagonist is a monkey and is being fooled. There is no sense of substitution and the experience is extremely poor.

Let's go, let's go. If the country really wants to find someone, it can be found in thirty minutes.

The loopholes in laptops are already big enough. The brand knows how to look at the appearance and the model. It is searching nationwide and in-depth to locate the accent. It is too simple in front of the country. With these conditions, three days is enough to filter out and play, okay?

The poison comes in every day. I was wrong.

I was persuaded to quit in the first two chapters. The most basic mistake was a logical error: since the soldiers in the live broadcast room can see the host's face, the first thing to do is to try to find the protagonist. Even if the protagonist goes to an alien planet, then he should search for the existence of this person on the earth. The second step is to find scientists to analyze and determine the host's identity first! A common sense mistake: What is extracted from oil fields is crude oil, which is the basic material of the oil and gas industry and the chemical industry. Gasoline is only one of the products of crude oil refining. No oil field directly produces gasoline.

I feel like the top professors in the article write like they are mentally retarded. After watching it from beginning to end, you will know that it is impossible and impossible. You cannot judge it yourself, and you need others to tell you whether it is true or not. Also need to confirm again and again. Really didn't see anything. Speechless

Why can't I find it? Everything else is fine, but this part is really illogical It also looks down upon the power of the country.