I Raised a Bunch of Ancient Gods and Demons

How should I put it? At first, I clicked on the name and looked at the beginning. It was good, but some descriptions kept repeating. For example, the first little fire dragon was an ancient demon species. Is it abnormal to be able to understand human speech? I didn't calculate specifically. Anyway, it seemed to understand human speech, which was probably more than 4 times. But then there were more poisonous points, but it was still readable. In addition, in the later stages of writing, I felt that I began to deviate from the title of the book. I felt that it should not be about searching for demon species. Inexplicably, it turned into fortune telling and buying fruit... And there are too many female supporting characters. Either I don't accept multiple heroines, or I fall in love with everyone who has a story. Is it a bit too much (personal feeling). I hope that I can write more about the devil species in the future, not fortune telling or something like that... One more thing. I mentioned that I went to pick up the heroine's parents and suddenly skipped it. It said that the 100-point spiritual power upgrade has been exceeded a long time ago and has not yet been advanced. The description of the kitten is also the same. I hope the title of the book can be combined. The above are all personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like it

I feel like it's about a split personality, right? It's the main character. In my own world, I pretend to be a good person who tells fortunes for people on the overpass, and then I go back to my small world at night and see people being surrounded by wolves. I still pretend that I have to go through hardships if I want to succeed? Damn it, did you drink too much poisonous chicken soup?

1. I don't know if Mu is the heroine, but people have seven emotions and six desires, so it would be too cold and indifferent to write Pig's Knuckle. As a straight man, I usually don't expect that the heroine just thinks of being angry😒 and doesn't show any expression. Because I understand, I forget about it and live my own life. How did Pig's Foot's character catch Mu? After he got it, he... . . Might as well be single. (Are the feelings just excessive?) 2. Seeing that now I don't know whether Pig's Feet will cultivate Taoism or immortality, spiritual energy recovery, etc. (The author did not make it clear, he just said that a towering tree was uprooted at the beginning, and then the plot disappeared, eh) there is no sign. After that, the plot continued to tell fortunes and tell fortunes. . . . Um 😅, do you want to raise a mythical beast or play a sandbox game. The above is just my personal opinion.

Pears raised with spiritual energy cost 20 per pound? 666

Brother, I vote four recommendation votes every day. When it is released, I will vote if I have a monthly vote. I will post it as proof.

Keep it first for two months. Just kill it

Too poisonous, especially my girlfriend and the pear seller

It's a very good subject matter, but it turned out to be an urban novel by Xiaobai. No wonder the author has also read other works. It's so outrageous.

I just want to ask, why don't you show your skills in front of your girlfriend to resolve misunderstandings, but instead always pretend to be a master in front of others? Is it because you have cheats that you think you are awesome and you plan to change your girlfriend?

I thought it was okay at first, but the more I read, the less qualified I am. Especially in the last few chapters, the protagonist feels that he is invincible. He is so arrogant. He first comes to the door and breaks the legs of a group of people, and then goes to the door to break the hands and feet of others. He breaks the hands and feet at every turn. Do you think all the police are dead? You are still thinking of calling the police to arrest someone else. If someone else calls the police to arrest you first, if someone else is in a gang and you break someone else's leg three or four times and then be more cruel and injure yourself, you are committing intentional homicide and attempted murder. Why are you planning to start a fight with the government?

In fact, the original version is pretty good, and the writing is pretty good, really. Whether it's emotions or buying fruits, although there are drawbacks, it's acceptable. But after the modification, fortune telling is really poisonous😵😵, and the whole sense of expectation is much worse.

It has been ugly since the appearance of Abao Society. The front is pretty good. In the end, he didn't cut the knot with a quick knife, and when he got into a fight, he didn't crush him to death in one breath. It makes me really angry. You just pretend to be cool and say you are going to be finished soon? And then act like nothing is wrong? If you can't win with others, you won't win with the people around you? The author is no longer a newcomer. Don't you know these poisonous points? Or are you starting to hire writers to write? My personal suggestion is that if you want to continue watching it, you should wait until the so-called Abao Society plot passes before watching it. I canceled it because it was too uncomfortable to watch.

When the protagonist opens his mouth, he spits out poison and says goodbye.

It looked too embarrassing, so I gave up! Goodbye!

The last few pictures feel a bit mindless 🙂Personal opinion

I feel pain in my chest every time I see people telling fortunes. I meet someone with a problem. Every time I help, they don't ask for money. That person automatically gives you a lot of money and keeps pestering you. You still don't want to tell me. Holy shit, you're a fortune teller. People tell fortunes. It's okay if you make money. You don't have to pretend to be cool.🤫🤫🤫

The author is not good at ancient Chinese prose. Laoshen, in ancient times, was generally a self-proclaimed name for elderly women in ancient times... This old man calls himself Laoshen... It looks really embarrassing.

What should I say? Author, you should just write it yourself and don't care too much about our opinions. After all, everyone has read so many great books that they all have them in their mouths. But you should write an outline when you write. Then think carefully about where the main line is. If you want the daily style, please refer to "My Time and Space Hotel". If you want to compete for the hegemony style, please upgrade your opponents. If you are a behind-the-scenes boos player, please train your chess pieces well. In fact, except for daily flow, it is best to write less emotional drama in other styles. It can be seen that you still need to improve in this area. Don't be too old-fashioned when it comes to showing off. Also, the character of the protagonist must be maintained. Don't do this and then do that. If you want to be funny, be funny. It doesn't matter if it's a little bit funny. Anyway, to be funny, it needs to be vulgar and grounded. If you want to be cold, be arrogant. Don't meddle in so many other things. It doesn't matter if you are selfish. Just set a good bottom line. If you want everyday style, then don't be so pretentious. Please have a higher IQ. Today's readers have very good taste and can find even the slightest bit of poison. And now the protagonist has a bit of negative personality charm. Speak more and do less. He talks about supporting roles one by one, and then slaps himself in the face. It can't be said to be kind, nor can it be said to be evil-hearted. Not cold when you should be cold, not warm when you should be warm. I flirt with girls and want to be innocent. You put together the protagonist routines of several books and styles. This protagonist has become a **. But your writing skills are not bad, and you are already better than many authors. That's the plot! It's the plot. Too out of touch.

The protagonist chokes you and chokes him all day long, which is very annoying to watch. He also acts like a jerk to his girlfriend. How did he get her in the first place? Is it reasonable?

Such a good subject matter, but the writing is similar to urban pretentiousness, so the author should do his own thing.

It was okay at the beginning, but it got toxic later on. The plot of Abao Club made me embarrassed to death 😅😅😅

Isn't this plot of Abao Society too poisonous? Isn't it good to call the police? Then why didn't Yang Long call the police if he had evidence and knew the person was there? I really don't know what I want to write? A tree hundreds of meters tall suddenly appeared in front of him, and then the word "dao" appeared again. What next? It's so annoying to break up like this, fortune-telling every day, Abao Club's every day, girlfriend breaking up, you know, there is no outline?

This bitch is a eunuch! ! ! !

You are already a fucking eunuch, why are you still pushing?

The editor recommends 6 out of 10 eunuchs, I'm speechless╯╰

Why are eunuchs still recommended by the editor after several months? Is it because they charge money?

The imagination is ok but the rhythm is too addictive

Damn it? No update? I just discovered this book, and when I looked at it, I realized that it has been off for a month? ? It's very interesting, author, don't give up.

This author has already mastered the Sunflower Book! Which eunuch book is this?

Does the author still update? No more blacklisting!