Shendu

The author's book is very nostalgic 🙂 and reminds me of the composition I wrote in grade one.

There was too little creativity in conflicting points of conflict. People came to stir up trouble every time, and every time it was a "bet fight."

Every time the protagonist does fortune telling, he is always going against the protagonist. Here comes the most important plot point. The person who goes against the protagonist will always be unlucky. Why are you so evil? Why should you be unlucky if you mess with you? Are you the Jade Emperor? It makes my head hurt to watch it, it makes no sense!

These chapters are a bit bloody. Doesn't the protagonist know that someone is messing with him? Can't you see this? Or do you think it's just an ordinary trouble-seeking thing? Don't write too many plots like this. The villain can't take revenge, so he asks for help, and then beats the small one to the big one, and then beats the big one to the old one. There are too many plots like this now, I hope it will be over soon.

I beg my roommate, the main character, to recite erotica while I masturbate, so that I can be immersed in the scene.

The front foot doesn't count. If someone licks the back foot, it will be over immediately. If you take your own rules as a joke, will someone else take your rules seriously? ? ? Poison King

You kowtow and apologize for not going to heaven. If you have a golden finger, Long Aotian will be like that.

Some logic, the subject matter is good, but the writing is not good

If you get scolded, just retaliate. Look at what you wrote. You are hot-tempered but cold-hearted. When you are scolded, you tell your fortune. Every time you suffer a loss, the protagonist is dumbfounded. I am totally convinced!

When I see 274, I don't want to read it. I can't even understand what's written in it. I can't understand it. You should stop washing it and go home and farm. It's too ugly.

I read the first 7 chapters of this book and then threw the book into the trash can. There are so many good books, why waste time on this book? 1. For the sake of those who come after me. 2. To vent my anger for wasting my 7 chapters of time. Write this review! Let me talk about this book first. The book says: The protagonist gets the ability to predict other people's affairs, so he goes to the street to make money as a magician. This ability to predict is very powerful, and anyone can know exactly what is going to happen! The protagonist just wants to use this ability to make hundreds of dollars. The book also keeps showing how difficult it is for the protagonist to obtain these hundreds of dollars: others' distrust, sarcasm, sarcasm, etc. This situation changed a bit in Chapter 7, which I have been reading, but I can't watch it anymore.

Hiding work from the woman he loves, such a relationship is really fragile. The heroine has stayed in the hero's house for so long, and she gave it to the hero for the first time. But where is the hero? He hides his abilities and refuses to give good things to his women, such as tea, wishing papers, and lucky trees. His mind is full of money. The author also forcibly creates misunderstandings and contradictions to wear down the readers' patience. Those who are abused and shout out that they are beautiful must have some psychological problems.

I wanted to see the magical functions of the system, not to watch a bloody romance. If you want to watch a bloody plot, it would be better to watch a TV series. There are so many twists and turns and bizarre TV series to watch. Give up.

It's too poisonous. Goodbye, fellow Taoists. Goodbye.

It is recommended not to watch it, the plot is confusing, illogical, and highly toxic!

Completely unprotected. Bailiangbailing? This kind of people have a lot of grass on their graves.

Introduction: The more you know, the faster you lose it, the more you learn, the faster you forget, and the more capable you are of writing, the faster readers lose their memory of the protagonist. It is better to slowly become a god with a single attribute at the beginning. If there are too many abilities, the characteristics of the character will be blurred. As for specialties, the more the better, just one or two will be enough. If there are eighty or ninety at once, there will be no specialties. The amount of ability cannot express a person's characteristics. To leave a deep impression on people, often only one or two characteristics of the character are enough. This is the focus of character description. When these words are mentioned, pretentious, cold-blooded, and passionate, you will be reminded of the novel characters. Who is the first person who appears in your mind? Then This character description skill has been achieved. Although the creativity is good, the subsequent stories and characters are the basis for attracting readers. Creative stories and characters are the three foundations of the novel world. Starting the story with creativity, describing the characters with stories, and then using characters to link your novel world. This should be the foundation of the author. The novel must have a good idea at the beginning to attract readers, then use the story to assume the skeleton, and finally use the characters to add blood (river crab) meat. Only in this way can the book be long-lasting. Otherwise, no matter how good the idea is, it will only last more than 300,000 words, and the story will last more than one million words. In the end, if there are no unforgettable characters, the whole book will lose its soul and become ordinary. This is also a characteristic of those sacred books. It is often the characters in the book that have a profound impact on you, not the story. A good book means that you have obviously forgotten the story in the book but cannot forget the people in the book.

The poison has caused death, it is really poisonous

The main character is so cowardly. I just read Chapter 12. The main character is submissive and makes me feel uncomfortable. Every time, the main character gets angry but does nothing. When threatened and scolded by a girl, he is submissive and shows no mastery. Also, there are too many narrations when others doubt whether the main character is a liar.

This IQ is like that of a fool. This subject is in vain.

Less than ten chapters later, he was poisoned to death.

What the hell is blood, the same protagonist

Author, you can insult my personality, but you cannot insult my IQ.

If someone can still read this book, how can he be considered to have been killed long ago?

(ㅍ_ㅍ)... This book is poisonous. If you want to choke yourself to death, just read it.

When did I subscribe to this book? It's really confusing and I have no impression at all.

I think Tang Chuxia also cares about the protagonist. From a normal person's point of view, he really thinks that the protagonist can't fight. I don't think it is necessary to kill Chu Xia with one stroke. Chu Xia can only say that he is afraid that the protagonist will be hurt and has always been thinking about the protagonist. If the protagonist feels that Chu Xia does not believe him and gives up, then I don't think so. There is nothing to say, I can only say that I am sorry. After all, there is no perfect person or thing, but even if I really want to break up, I hope not to hurt Chu Xia. From the character in the previous article, we can see that she is a stubborn woman. Since she is willing to give herself to the protagonist for the first time, it proves that she is serious, so don't hurt him. The author doesn't need to care about what I say, just write according to what he wants. I believe the author should have some comparison in his mind.

It is recommended to skip the first thirty pictures. No, you are skipping the complicated plot. Don't give up. The rest is very exciting. I guarantee it for a bookworm of ten years.

Brother, what the hell are you doing in just two short chapters?

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