Immortal Martial: The Sun Rises in the East, I Alone Remain Undefeated

It disgusted me, I dropped the book immediately. You should have either made it an orphan story from the start, or given a little sister who was only a few years old and treated so coldly. The little girl was starving, and he gave her food, and you didn't even react. Are you even human? You can't even write a novel without basic humanity. Even Gu Zhenren, though dark, only treated outsiders. You treat your own sister like this? What kind of novel are you writing?

I hope the author will treat the protagonist's sister better. Having already taken over her body, he should reciprocate her kindness. Otherwise, many readers will abandon the book because of this. I don't really like the protagonist's behavior, but I still gave a reward to say hello. I hope the author takes care!

I couldn't continue reading after chapter 3. Even if you're cold on the outside but warm on the inside, a little kindness would be appreciated. Don't say you're a stranger; you've taken over his brother's body, so taking care of him is your duty and moral obligation. Especially for an adult to be so harsh and cold-blooded towards a child is two completely different things. It's incredibly unethical and makes me want to quit.

Does the protagonist practice the Sunflower Manual? If not, I won't watch. 🤓

I only read the first three chapters because I wanted to post this and then removed it from my bookshelf. Of course, I'm not discussing the writing style since I just started reading. Let's just talk about the younger sister. You could have written that the protagonist is an only child, or that the younger sister died beforehand... Anyway, this plot is getting more and more painful to talk about, so I've already given up on it...

I want to write quietly this time. Paying attention to grades or anything like that is useless and only affects my mood. Anyway, I'll probably lock the comments section later; I don't want to be distracted. Writing is work, and I should focus on what I need to do.

I gave a reward just to come here and post this. It's really like the author is forcibly feeding me poison. If you hadn't written about the younger sister, it would have been better. Writing about her is just feeding me poison. Don't talk about dark themes or not, it's all nonsense. Even if you're not a normal modern person, how can you bear to hurt a cute little human being? Please don't look at this, you'll thank me.

I don't understand why they didn't kill Ren Woxing.

Why do several books start with Blackwood Cliff having the surname Dongfang? And why does it have a younger sister 😥😥 who is either a biological sister or an adopted sister?

What kind of Dongfang Bubai would you like to see? Lin Qingxia version, Hu Yifei version, Ximen Zhuixue version, Ye Gucheng version, or any other version? Please write them down so the author can refer to them. They will most likely be used in the final version. You know how it is when you reach a higher level...