The Immortal Gourd of Longevity
长生仙葫
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 631k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 3y ago
- English
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288Chapters
9.1kRecommendations
18.6kFans
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That's good, but please, please don't let anything like "five elemental roots" or "all five elemental techniques" appear later on. That's a highly toxic plot in the "mortal cultivation" genre. Saying that having all five elemental roots makes you strong in combat is complete nonsense. In combat, strength depends on your magic weapons, elixirs, techniques, and supernatural abilities.
The author deliberately avoids the writing style of "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality," glossing over alchemy in passing. Alchemy always involves a furnace, but the names of the herbs and the methods of preparation are omitted; it's simply described as a "sacred elixir." The writing style needs improvement. Even minor details should be described; that's what makes a good book, not something glossed over.
Every time something new appears, there's a whole bunch of explanations. I spent half a chapter pondering why my plants were different from those in the Zhao family's. Oh, I ripened them too quickly.
Author, if you're going for the "mortal cultivation" genre, then you should refer to *A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality*. Aside from the cheat codes, the protagonist shouldn't have any of the skills the old demon possesses. For example, if the old demon uses insects and the protagonist also uses insects, can you outmaneuver the old demon?
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1. I always feel that the plot is going in a complicated direction as I write (for example, from chapters 8 to 10, the occupancy rate is getting worse and worse). If you guys think it's not good, you can remind me and I will quickly bring it back on track. 2. If you have any other suggestions, please feel free to share them, such as the strengths and weaknesses of the author's writing style.
Stop wasting time here. The sect entry quest is already at chapter 40. Such a difficult quest, besides cheaters, who else can complete it? What's the point of their sect recruiting then? It was written quite well before, but it's getting increasingly weak.
The first three chapters mark the beginner phase of "A Mortal's Journey to Immortality" 😅. It's not easy being a newbie, so please support me with your recommendation votes!
Although the "farming in space" genre is a cliché, this book is still quite well-written.
Hurry up and get the protagonist to Foundation Establishment! I can't wait! I'm waiting for him to reach Foundation Establishment and then show off and slap people in the face! 🤓
A simplified version of Mortal's Journey to Immortality 😁