Magical Studies at Hogwarts

I was told to quit in the first chapter. A common problem with most HP fan fiction is that they don't even meet the most basic requirements for HP fan fiction. They can't have a sense of separation, and they can't let readers get into trouble! A small detail can make people discover that the author is not familiar with the original work, and the drama is instantly lost. Also recommend 4 HP fanfics that you can read Bloodline Wizard Magic Professor Just a Defense Against the Dark Arts professor Legend of the Academic Master

Waste of my time, bah, you have said it yourself before, you have no woman in your heart, you are a magic god of nature, you are greedy for the movie version of the body, you say it so grandly, bah, it is obvious that the protagonist group is the best way to stabilize the plot, but you still do it, bah

Don't take any risks in your first year, it's completely safe. Don't go out at night in the second year, it's absolutely safe. Ignore Sirius in Year 3, it's absolutely safe. For the 4th year, it is absolutely safe to watch the show in the stands with peace of mind. Ignore Dumbledore and Harry in Year 5, it's absolutely safe. Still ignoring Dumbledore and Harry in the 6th year, it is absolutely safe. Leaving the UK in your 7th year is absolutely safe.

After reading Chapter 24, the protagonist is very divided. He is calm and willing to die. He rejects his classmates, but he is willing to take risks for Hermione. At the same time, he ignores the other two. He is almost induced by the blasting curse to cause the death curse. After a while, he is afraid and backhands Voldemort. He then casts the death curse. Is the protagonist crazy or something is wrong with the author?

Isn't it true that HP fans can't survive without the whole cp? If they have to fall in love, it's either Hermione or Luna … Speechless

The protagonist inexplicably becomes a villain. . . I don't understand. I said before that I became stronger to protect myself from Voldemort, but then I turned around and asked Professor Quirrell to learn dark magic.

Inconsistent, both acting and standing, hypocrite

What the hell are you writing... I mentioned earlier that the protagonist's death curse was rejected by the wand, and now it's just for one night...

Without any foreshadowing, he went to learn dark magic from Voldemort, saying that he longed for power, and then used a wand made of unicorn hair (as mentioned earlier, a wand that can make its owner refuse to surrender to dark magic) to kill unicorns. It's so fucking poisonous.

It is not impossible to learn black magic from Voldemort, but the main thing is that the protagonist suddenly ran to Voldemort to learn black magic. The author has thrown out the setting before, learning the type of destruction, especially black magic, will distort the character. Pigfoot also made a decision not to practice destructiveness anymore to ensure that his character is not distorted. In the end, is he going to learn black magic? Or the most powerful black magic? Strong black magic has the strongest side effects, right? The reason why the protagonist was so anxious to learn magic and work hard at first was to avoid the events that happened in the school later and to give himself the ability to protect himself. Simply put, it was to save his life when Voldemort was causing trouble. But the way to save his life turned out to be to learn dark magic from Voldemort. In addition, the protagonist had a bad relationship with his classmates before, which may be part of the reason why he stayed away from the incident. What was the result? The protagonist has just made a decision, and then violates the decision with even more egregious behavior. This is similar to the fact that you are allergic to seafood and decide not to eat seafood in the future. As a result, you turn around and use a bottle of rat poison, which is suffocating. Not to mention people like Dumbledore and Snape will also commit Avada Kedavra. Look at their life experiences and their unforgettable love. They were saved. That is what you saw later, that is Principal Dumbledore and the undercover Death Eater Snape. If there is no great love and experience, then Dumbledore and Grindelwald are the same. And Snape would be the most determined Death Eater if Lily didn't have anything to do with him. Think about their initial experiences and personalities. If they had not experienced things that were engraved in their hearts, would they have become what they were later? The protagonist's current experience is relatively dull, and there is nothing memorable. Even if you arrange for the protagonist to return to the white wizard camp later, such a storyline is difficult to describe and is easy to be criticized. As for going directly to the villain route, the title of the book feels disconnected from the early writing style, and it is easy to abandon the book. After all, those who read your book are attracted by the early writing style of the title introduction, and the further you go, the more readers you will become. See the question here,

It was originally a good idea to go to Voldemort to study. If you don't have average system talent, then it's understandable to take risks in order to become stronger. The arrangement is thrilling, a battle of wits and courage. You are so strong in cheating, and you still have so many years, but the protagonist has not graduated from the first grade. Some of the magic is stronger than that of the seventh grade. It is unreasonable to arrange such an adventurous plot. There is also a magic wand. I also explained that learning the patron saint can alleviate the problem, but I don't learn it. The protagonist is still a strong academic type. It is too unreasonable. Then why don't you consider being suspected by Lao Deng? What a pity. I was looking forward to it. There is a very good book... Forget it, I will give it a try. Come on, author, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables.

Recommend some high-quality Harry Potter fan novels. I have read all of them. There are no red herrings. Feel free to read. In addition, generally speaking, there is a trick to judge whether a Harry Potter fan novel is good or not. It is to look at the plot setting of the third-grade time turner. In this regard, the setting of the blood wizard is the best. On the other hand, the description of the battle scene about the battle of arts is best written by Shang Feng and Eagle Wing

One moment, he wants to make a fortune in a low-key manner, and the next, he fights trolls and learns black magic from the Dark Lord...

The main character is written as if he is schizophrenic. Just like a two-hundred-and-fifty man, the preface does not match the postscript.

The writing is quite good, but in terms of plot, the author is contradictory and eliminates all the interesting points.

The protagonist is really insane, why do you want to learn dark magic from Voldemort? In Part 7, you don't need to be Unforgivable to defeat the Basilisk. You might as well use the transformation spell to deal physical damage to the Basilisk, but it won't be of much use if you cast the Devil on the Basilisk. The remaining main danger is that for Harry Potter, don't be too safe by not interfering with the plot. It's amazing. It's enough to just run away and go abroad for one year in the last year. What do you need to learn from Lao Fu?

Quite speechless, he said that the explosive curse should not be cast, as too much would affect the mind, and he ran to learn the three unforgivable curses from Voldemort. A Dark Lord like Voldemort had no tricks at all and casually believed in a Mudblood who believed in his ideals of rule. Dumbledore watched the protagonist learn the Unforgivable Curse, watched the protagonist help Voldemort hunt unicorns, and just let it go and just ignored it? Who do you think this protagonist is? Immortal? Voldemort's spells are only level 7, and the spells of little wizards who haven't gone to school are all level 6? Who do you think Voldemort is? I can't stand it at all, the content is a complete mess

In fact, the setting and previous writing are very good, but when you learn black magic, you lose your brain. No, after you control the magic power and learn the explosive spell, you have psychological problems, and the whole thing starts to poison the readers. Return the unicorn wand and kill the unicorn later, casting various unforgivable spells. Absolutely. Bye-Bye

The plot is good, but there is a problem with the characters. While verbally talking about reducing the aggressive impulse caused by magic, while increasing efforts to learn stronger black magic, I was confused. As long as the offensive impulse is upgraded to a killing impulse, you can solve this problem, right? If your protagonist has a two-pillar panel, it is understandable why he ran to learn from Voldemort, but it is not. On the contrary, his setting is to stay away from the main line and learn more knowledge. A person who didn't even want to have too much contact with the Iron Triangle ended up taking the initiative to become the student of the final boss in the blink of an eye. Is this a decision made by someone with a unicorn hair wand? ? Knowing that my emotions were seriously contaminated by magic, I didn't want to buffer and adjust my psychology, but instead increased my efforts to learn the three black magic. He is obviously a Ravenclaw with a unicorn fluffy wand, but he will take the initiative to join Voldemort when there is no need, and follow Voldemort to hunt unicorns... Is this the Ravenclaw who the author originally set up to pursue harmony and knowledge? A naked Slytherin, and he is also the seed of a dark wizard in Slytherin who pursues black magic and believes in the supremacy of power.

This book is a bit funny, with double standards, duplicity, inconsistent words and deeds, and the qualities described by the male protagonist in the first few chapters are even more hypocritical.

There is no problem in learning black magic, and there is no problem in learning from the Dark Lord. That unforgivable oath of yours is truly poisonous. If you don't hurt innocent people, you can fool around. But if you don't hurt friends who treat you sincerely, there is a problem. This standard is not determined by you at all. Also, who says a friend who treats you sincerely will not hurt you "I love you, Anakin, you are my brother!"

The man of God, for no reason, took the initiative to face Voldemort and learn black magic from him, without any confidence. Later, he assisted Quirrell in killing the unicorn, using the unicorn wand. Even if you don't save him, you can't help him. It can be seen that the author wants to write something in-depth and play a game of wits, but it is a pity that he does not have the brains to realize it. It was so fun to upgrade in the past. I learned everything I could and got to level 6 in one go. But since the beginning of the Illusion Curse, I suddenly became a stupid person. What I thought was a good article about the system turned into a bitter article about hatred and abuse. What do you think?