This Uchiha Is Too Strong

This book's poor performance is not due to the original work. The protagonist is the least impressive time traveler, not to mention there is an auxiliary golden finger. His strength improves too slowly. He is not as good as the geniuses in the original work, and it is even less comparable to Itachi Shisui Minato. The title of the book is so arrogant. It is based on the title of the book. In the end, it is selling dog meat in name only.

This kaleidoscope is the same as Pinduoduo's.

Susanoo can still be gone... From the moment I saw Ryumai treating Susanoo as his own, I couldn't stand it anymore.

What the hell are you writing about? The Uchiha clan was wiped out. What did you change? With such strength, you just watched until the clan was wiped out and stopped reading.

Why write about traveling through Loulan? It is a time-travel drama in itself, and adding time-traveling, a condom within a condom. I have watched it sparsely since Loulan, and I guess I don't even know what I am writing about. This is the same as a child with crotchless pants who traveled through time and experienced the adult experience and then returned. You are an adult and are still interested in crotchless pants?

Protagonist Kaleidoscope

I don't see much use for the gold finger, it feels like it's just a panel. It would be ridiculous if Minato and Kushina died according to the original work! I lost all interest in reading.

It is recommended to change the name. This Uchiha is too useless or this Uchiha is too profitable. This Uchiha is too useless and useless.

At first I thought it was good at the beginning, but when I saw the back part I realized that everything just followed the plot. The essence of the plot of even the genocide is similar to that of the original work. I was afraid that I would not be able to continue writing if I followed the plot of the Immortal clan, so I chose to get rid of the big ones and keep the small ones. This may seem like the plot has been changed, but that's actually the case.

Delete it, it says stop bothering

The writing is so bad. As a time traveler, the male protagonist is played around by Danzo the Third.

I am actually the first one to reward you. Take your time, haste makes waste, and refer to other well-written fan stories.

I've finished reading it. How should I put it? The first part is well written, but the second part... Is hard to describe in a word.

After reading Chapter 14, there is no value in reading further. It must be following the plot of the original work again, so why don't I go back and read the original work? Speaking of which, before Naruto's Fourth War, it was quite reasonable. Great pictures and music.

It feels like you won't be able to write if you don't follow the plot, and the writing style is very simple, and the dialogues and plots between the characters are very monotonous.

To be honest, don't be too harsh. You always mention the original work and want to read the original work and read the comics. By the way, there are many differences between the anime and the comics. Although I'm not too fond of Konoha, I feel that Nagato's thoughts can still save him. Peace is definitely based on absolute power. I feel that if Xiao is strong enough to support some systems, peace is not impossible. By the way, who is the heroine? Personally speaking, there are many distinctive female characters in Naruto. I hope it's not a single female protagonist, it would be better if there is Tsunade, hahahaha 🤭

Author, do you dare to let Orochimaru be the heroine?

Susan can actually be singled out

This is another dark book about the third generation. I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. How come the third generation has not been on the battlefield? How did the title of Shinobi come from? Danzo and Nee have never been on the battlefield? They are ANBU, they are engaged in espionage. They deny everything when they come up. There is no point in being black for the sake of being black.